Searching for the Sky Ch. 9 (Patreon)
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Trying something new for this chapter to improve readability, let me know in the comments if you like it/ hate it/can't tell the difference. So far Old Fart seems to like it, says this chapter reads smoother.
In other news I will have a second Proofreader/Editor coming on next week with Chapter 10 of SFTS! 2muchdiggity has agreed to help ferret out all of those pesky little mistakes that manage to get through. The man has some serious credentials too so hopefully he can pass some of those mad editorial skills on to me and I can put out even better content. :D
On with the story!
Kal is bored as hell, Perra wishes she was.
Enjoy!
-Blu
Edit: 2muchdiggity is already hard at work! I mistakenly described Elta as Marda's younger sister when in fact she is the elder sister. Made a couple of other small edits he suggested as well. Revised versions are up!