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Trying something new for this chapter to improve readability, let me know in the comments if you like it/ hate it/can't tell the difference. So far Old Fart seems to like it, says this chapter reads smoother. 

In other news I will have a second Proofreader/Editor coming on next week with Chapter 10 of SFTS! 2muchdiggity has agreed to help ferret out all of those pesky little mistakes that manage to get through. The man has some serious credentials too so hopefully he can pass some of those mad editorial skills on to me and I can put out even better content. :D

On with the story!

Kal is bored as hell, Perra wishes she was.

Enjoy!

-Blu

Edit: 2muchdiggity is already hard at work! I mistakenly described Elta as Marda's younger sister when in fact she is the elder sister. Made a couple of other small edits he suggested as well. Revised versions are up!

Comments

Nicholas Kratzer

I wouldn't call it a cliffhanger. More a sign of progress and a promise if what is to come. I knew my girl Perra could handle Elta easily. Our new priestess is quickly becoming a favorite of mine. I love when someone's willing to change when presented with good evidence, without it needing to be beaten into them. She's a smart one. The testing box is a really cool idea. It actually took me a bit to realize all the "traps" on it are there as a control for trap detecting spells. Most magic systems I've seen don't account for "user error" issues like casting your detection spell wrong. I love detail like that, makes the world feel real and not just a videogame.

janek Imiolek

So just realised chapter 10 seems to be missing 😅