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How's our little cleric doing?

Maybe we should look in on Kal instead...

Answers and Questions

Enjoy!

Blu

Comments

Nicholas Kratzer

YES! She's finally arrived, my lovely gorgon! So excited for next chapter. Your take on the Goddess was... unexpected. At first I enjoyed how selfishly human her reasoning was, but then the twist happened and I now I just have questions. While it feels real and believable, the situation the Goddess has gotten herself into is strange. She is very human, and kinda lazy. Let's just say I like her, but my feelings on her are complicated. I love your take on dwarves so far, though their society is a bit too utopian to me. The Dwarven innuendos and "yer lips don't move right" had me laughing, so well done. Can Dwarves breed with rock girls and other monster girls, or is it just humans? I thought it was only humans, but I don't remember if it was explicitly stated. Since Duldin clearly thinks a dwarf could put a coal in her forge, can a dwarf breed with any monster girl, or just rock/earth related ones?

BluDraygn

Consider for a moment: Then - Abominations not born of a womb! We should kill them all! Now - Well, he'll. After a millenia they're still here an it doesn't look like I will be able to eradicate them. Hundreds of thousands of women who all want babies really badly. Since it looks like they are here to stay, how could I use them as a resource without screwin up what I have? Also, I didn't want her to come across as too transparent. There has to be a system of checks when dealing with a pantheon of beings who can Thanos-snap people in or out of existence. We don't know what that system is. (well... you guys don't 😁) The Dwarves were a fun little though experiment. Here in America pragmatism reigns supreme and a common undercurrent is to get the most you can for the least amount of effort. I wondered what would happen if an entire race got their truest joy in life from working with their hands, mining, smithing, farming, etc. What I ended up with was a communal society that I had a difficult time wrapping my head around the. Lennon (Not Lenin!) would have been proud. Utopian? Yup I can see that. Improbable? To me, yes. But if their atittudes as a race are as I described above, maybe not as unlikely as we might think. This has been my first real opportunity to deal with a completely different language and I'm hoping that everyone understood that the translation spell doesn't affect how Kal's mouth moves only the words coming out. There's another curious limitation on the spell that I hope to get the opportunity to bring to light later. Monster girls can have sex with who and whatever they want but can only have children with humans. Their intense desire to mate only applies to humans as well. However, as we've seen with Bren, after more than a thousand years since their creation, some things are starting to change.

Dracon

Another fantastic chapter Blu. Always look forward to when you post.