Searching for the Sky Ch. 12 (Patreon)
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Wasn't sure I was going to get this done tonight. It's been a busy day and I made a couple of last minute changes to flesh out some scenes a bit better.
In other news, the issue I mentioned last post ,and allowed me to get this chapter out so quickly, has led to an end to the job I had taken. Sadly, they screwed up my hours somehow and now I'm stuck waiting for the pay I was going to put towards @WillowRaven so she could get started on the artwork. Ugh.
Went a little tag happy on this one :P Apparently I've been missing the most effective way to use tags by keeping them to just the things I feel have particular relevance. I suppose... if it helps people find my writing I guess I'll use it. Can't say I like it though, feels messy.
Speaking of tags, there are a few new ones down there, one of which I realized should have been in the last chapter.
In concern to the 'Bondage' part of this chapter I want to mention that BDSM isn't my kink, but still i tried to do it justice to the best of my ability. If you are in the lifestyle please don't eviscerate me if I screwed something major up, just let me know so I can take a look and maybe make some revisions.
My only real knowledge comes from the Avatar series by Dark Pen. In one non-canon side story (In the Naked in School universe I believe) he essentially gives a lesson in "How to do BDSM right." Those familiar with the story may see where I tried to incorporate some of those practices (the ones I could remember at least).
Alright, enough of my yammering. There's stories to be read!
Payback, Surfacing, Blackbird of Her Time
Enjoy!
-Blu
Edit: 2muchdiggity was reviewing the chapter and noticed a couple of errors that slipped through, partly from expanding those scenes I spoke of earlier. He sent me a fixed version which I'm posting now. :D