OatF Pg 11 and an Update (Patreon)

Sorry for the delay in getting a chapter out, I'd planned on having this released by the 15th but I decided to completely rewrite a section because it felt weak and more like an information dump than a story. Unfortunately, the rewrite has added in some new elements that I didn't need to consider in the info dump and is kind of kicking my ass. I know the revised version will be superior but I feel bad for taking so long.

Hoping to have this done today since I will be traveling most of tomorrow but there is still quite a bit I need to go through and once done it will still be another day for editing. Just wanted to keep you all apprised as to what's going on.

Page 11 is done and I have to say in that one panel Ikuno is a little mean. Like.... owwwch. In fairness, a man can forgive a lot for the sake of a good BJ.

Maybe that's just me, but that's my story and I'm stickin' to it. 😁

Bun and I are still in the planning and sketch stage for Ria at the moment.

I think that's all I have at the moment