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Oh, it was one of the best weeks this week! All these moments I’ve had building in my head for years are now coming out onto the page and really coming to life, hehe! :D

I got two of the scenes finished already and was about to move onto the next when…I thought of something else I could add…

Part of me is like, ‘Don’t do it. It’ll be soooo much work for such a tiny one bit of dialogue. Yet the other—admittedly louder lol—part of me is like…

So, I’m really torn. It would be a lot of work, especially as what I’ve thought of would need to be different for each LI and their scenes, but it would add such a moment of real personalised moment for the player and the LI….

**SPOILER BELOW**

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Basically, I’m thinking of adding a moment where the LI comments on the specific outfit the MC chose to wear, especially if it’s quite different than their ‘usual’ attire!

I know it’s something I would LOVE to have my LI actually take note of my specific outfit and get their reaction.

Buuuuttttt, with all those outfit choices…that’s a lot to do for each LI…lol!

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***SPOILER OVER***

Urgh! Decisions!

I think I may have to do it. It’s going to be too lovely a moment not to, and a really great personal touch moment for the character and player. But if it really becomes too much, I’ll stop and move on.

That’s the new plan! :D

So I guess that’s what I’ll be working on next week—adding that scene in and then getting on with the other LI scenes, while adding the extra to those too!

Even after sharing a small spoiler, I really want the ball scene stuff to be as unspoiled as possible, which for me is seriously difficult ‘cause I just wanna talk about it now!! But the ball scene stuff is just too important and awesome a moment to ruin just ‘cause of my excitement, lol!

I definitely want lots of heart-pounding and emotions during these scenes for you guys ;)

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For Update+ this week, things already getting emotional during the Adam/Ava dance…

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CHOICE: Sigh. "…Then we'll just constantly be here: static, unmoving."

I sigh, my gaze falling. "Then we'll just be staying in this state: static, unmoving."

"Together," Adam/Ava responds.

"This isn’t together," I reply, shrugging, even as the weight of the anguish inside of me makes the motion difficult. "This is just…silence."

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Hope you all have the most amazing weekend! We’ll be offline as usual, so I’ll talk to you all on Monday <3

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terr

Ahhh I really need to know when this book is getting released so that, as an A-mancer, I can note my heartbreak down in my diary

Mar

I have to have two comments because one: this isn’t together this is silence is seriously breaking my heart and just gnawing at my insides!! is this leading to the big break with a at the end of the book 👀??

Mewsly

Oh that would be such a good and fun touch aaaaaaaa I can see why you’re torn! Also yeah, *A*, what you are is NOT together

Mar

And two: I know it’s a lot of work and I appreciate so much the extra details you put in like this, the specific reaction to the outfit!! It’s what makes this story so special and personalized! 🥰

Nathaniel Mayfield

Mishka, just write your excellence and stop trying to talk yourself out of it. And as for Ava...if I had my way my detective would never speak to her again after that game she played in book 3.

britturble

Joining the “do it” cheer squad because that absolutely will make for such a sweet fun moment! Was planning for my N-mancing detective to go all in and way out of her comfort zone because N obviously is the sort to appreciate fancy frilly finery, and aaaa it’d be extra magical for him to notice. But don’t drive yourself too crazy! (Also clutching my heart for A, please stop ruining every good thing you get going for you big guy/gal.)

Eve

Oh PLEASE do it! Those little touches are exactly why The Wayhaven Chronicles is the most detailed and special interactive fiction I've ever read! (Also, as an A-mancer, that snippet is HEARTBREAKING, THANKS! Shall I pre-order the box of tissues that Book Four is going to put me through? LOL)

Jason Bond

I know I'm late but I vote for NO because that will make more work for you AND a longer wait for us.

Sunny

One of my favorite things about this series is just how many natural surprises like this there are! It really feels lived in. <3 We appreciate your work so I understand if it's too much extra (there are a lot of fits lol) but it's SO sweet, big team do it if you want to! Also oof. OOF. That scene with A. I'm gutted. I'm found in a ditch. They have my heart in their GRIPS. I've joined this patreon just recently and every update has had me smilingggg, thanks for the updates!!

dionysus

If you're doing it then may a writing flow state be upon you !!

Sphinx

I know it's more work, but I like the personal touch of the LIs getting to see the MC dressed up. The first time they saw them in something fancy, they were wearing an outfit chosen by someone else. The LIs seeing the MC in something the MC chose for themselves would make for a romantic moment.

Lamont Milbourne

I'm going to have to play the A romance at least four times given all the choices. I can't wait

Shiba Inu

I think that sometimes it's the small things that get noticed or commented about are the things that stick with you and give you the most validation or fond memories. <3 I know I would feel a special way if someone important to me commented on a choice of presentation or a small thing I did to be more myself, and they noticed :3c