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Greetings Agents, here is the raw text for John Scott Tynes upcoming book, The Labyrinth. 205 pages of unnatural goodness for your Delta Green game for review and feedback. What are we looking for?

  • Errors of fact, spelling and grammar.
  • Suggestions for improving clarity or presentation.

We will be wrapping up this version of the manuscript August 15. All feedback should be sent to Acell@me.com and titled LABYRINTH CORRECTIONS (or something similar). Those that wish to "mark up" the PDF should feel free to do so with the highlight/notes feature.  

Cheers and enjoy the maze!


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Anonymous

Do "suggestions for improving clarity or presentation" include word choice that's not "this sentence is confusing, rearranging it or using a different word would make it clearer?" Just wanted to make sure so I wouldn't clutter everything up with comments that you weren't looking for.

detwiller

Perhaps. It wholly depends on circumstance and editorial choice. Suggestions will be reviewed though.