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Thoughts?  Should I ask him to make the sword thinner and a bit less wide?

What do you think I should ask to have more touched up at this point?

It’s not done right now, just the next stage of the drafts. I told him a few things could be adjusted and made clearer, such as the sword being more rapier than broad sword, cuts in clothing, and stuff like that.

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Opala

Personally, the most offensive thing about the art is the size of the teeth on the sword(assuming it's supposed to be a sword and not a flat, spiky mace). An aggressive flamberge with pointy swells could look similar and much more functional.

SME

Yeah, I asked him to trim it down xD haha it's massive

Opala

In the concept art B it looks like a serrated sword, which can be quite cool.