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ATM Vol. 5 and Rewrite Tomorrow (Patreon)

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2023-01-25 22:58:49
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2026-06
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Just a bit busy.  We're getting closer to the end of Vol 1 of the rewrite!  It's exciting!  What has been your thoughts on it so far compared to the original?

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Suinicide

I think it's a better story and quite a bit more focused than the original, even if I miss a lot of the small bits. But that's just the sad reality of editing really.

SME

Tell me what you like about the small things and maybe I can add them. 😊

Suinicide

I'll give it another look over the weekend so I can have details. But I imagine I'll get the sort of thing I want soon, assuming her hormones still go out of control at the end.

SME

You wanted the blackout scene?

Suinicide

Not the black out scene specifically, but things like the (second) party where she was mind controlling people.

Suinicide

(Just to clarify, I completely understand them being cut. This Sora seems to be more in control of herself, and I'm not sure the type of scenes I liked would mesh well with the rewritten plot. Leaving them out genuinely might be for the better storywise.)