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Please enjoy the added sound and visual effects, and also please point out if I've misspelled something because misspellings make kittens cry.

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Alexander

The use of the word Eijits suggests some Irish influence on Bern’s dialect, unless the same corruption of [Earth Standard Language] was introduced via a different species inability to pronounce it.

David M

Great stuff! 10 out of 10 people would continue watching :)

shift shift

Good luck with continuing the series. We're all rooting for you!

Katherine Trill

So the computer and the author look identical. Will this be a plot point?

Christoph

It's so great that you are doing another of this kind of series. When can we expect a book, after all you know now how to publish and market one. But take your time. :-)

Fridrik Bjarnason

Does Bren have military training ? She treats the author like a superior officer. With standing at military "at ease" position and calling her mam.

Renee - EnsembleofWolves

Niiiice I love the new CALI visual effects :D :D These are so fun!! I routinely binge Just Stab Me Now for fun uplifting media and so exciting to get to add Just Space Me Now to the mix :D

Lexy Gabb

Caroline loves putting her main characters in precarious situations resulting in wet hair and injuried men.

Ann Brookens

Maybe we could get the complete story before we start nagging her to write the book...? Yes, we love it so far!

Eva Schiffer

It looks to me like the captions are desyncing part way through. I mean the ones you stamped on the screen are fine but something looks screwy with the ones the video player is displaying. I’m looking forward to which romance trope Caroline is going to lean on next. It’s a bit trite, but maybe our male lead will try to claim amnesia to get her sympathy. lol

Crochet4Joy

But of course - where else could she get her Jump Pilot and maintenance training so quickly with no finances?

Emily Levine

I thought I had predicted where this would be going, given Caroline's love of tropes and cliche, but I did not see that coming. Fantastic story hook!

StephanieGail

Presumably the computer is voice-only out of the ship, hence the blurring of the visage... but there could be some very intentional voice modulation to keep CALI from sounding too much like Caroline... which subsequently breaks and gives Caroline away as the Voice of Computer? :D There could also probably be a ridiculous explanation as to why this heroine, too, looks strangely familiar... perhaps it could be pawned off as her being Rosy's great-great-great-great-great etc. grand-daughter...

Craig P Steffen

I'm sure Jill knows this and did this on purpose, but for the non-war-historians in this chat, "Bren" is an often used slang term for a specific type of light machine gun used by UK military throughout the twentieth century. I'm going to presume that this character has a hidden martial talent or two. (Which would also be consistent with the fantasy heroine, not to mention Jill's own hobbies, so that's not much of a stretch.).

Craig P Steffen

Also, Jill, loving this so far. Excellent in-media-res start, enjoying the universe and character establishment flying thick and fast.

JillBearup

How odd! Patreon captions are uneditable, as far as I know, but I'm glad the burned-in ones are working!

Katherine T. Marschall

I came here to make useful, intelligent comments, but here goes: skweeeeeeeee! I love this so much. Resourceful heroine, bossy annoying author (Sorry Jill) and mysterious body, er stowaway? Also, bonus small unattached robot. For a bit, life is fun, and not scary. (After all, I'M not going into the waste compartment.) Kudos!

Jeff Titterington

This is going to be good! Especially with the well-timed not-at-all sarcastic asides from our fantasy heroine.

Maaruin

I see the computer’s designation changed, and the new name (Comet Astrogation and Logistics Interface) confused me for a moment because I didn’t remember that the ship type was X-15 Comet. Personally, I liked it more with control in the name (though astrogation is a good addition, so Control, Astrogation, and Logistics Interface would also have a nice ring to it), but it makes sense for the manufacturer to give it a name that goes with the branding.

Emmy Noether

I see you changed the spelling of the Alien Volturi to Volchuri - avoiding copy right issues with the twilight franchise or coincidence?

Fenrir Wolfganger

Jill said she Googled Volchuri with a "ch" and nothing came up which is why she's gone with it. No need to start the third book in the trilogy, Just Sue Me Now, too soon.

Biscuit

Welp, I finished listening to your audiobook just now. as memorable as reading it myself with all those voices we assign characters in our head. oh don’t tell me you don’t have that with how you wrote Caroline’s interactions with her characters.

Winslow

Really appreciate the light touch with sound effects and the really do add to the setting. Lovely

Sagitta

So this ship type is as rarely seen as the De Havilland Comet, and perhaps for the same reason.

Sagitta

Misspellings? I hope your kittens are American, or 5:07 will need a feline age rating.

Cynical Rhys

Having been on Holiday for 2 weeks I'm just catching up on things and I think this being a 4 episode bundle was great for that. Very enjoyable

Irishdog

I love this so much

Melita_H

I love this so far and am very much looking forward to more! 😆 Also, I love St3v3 even more with his newfound ambiguous boops. 💖 Also also, this is minor and probably not worth reshooting for... but wouldn't she have left her lodgings at more like 4 in the morning (well, more like 4:05-4:15, I suppose, considering she got dressed and put her hair up), rather than 4:30, since she arrived at the shipyard at 4:31? 🤔

JohnnyCanuck

I saw the short on YouTube and dropped what I was doing to come sign up to your Patron for more. I love it. [Fry-TakeMyMoney.jpg]

Ekij

Ah yes, at 8:59 Bren says she left at 4:30 but we know she arrived at 4:31. Maybe she's just being approximate? Humans sometimes round times to the nearest 30 minutes. Although it might be nice if she said she left _before_ 4:30.

Knutt

Oooh, will he have amnesia? What was that thing that dropped to the floor? Maybe his assailants stole something, something very powerful and/or dangerous, but he removed a key piece without which it will not function. He’d be frantic to find it when he awakes, and it would be the cause of many more shenanigans!

Brenton Clark

Did Rosamund slip into a bit of a Scottish brogue on her second line?

JGarver

These are great! Really looking forward to the next installments!!

Mellanie

I’m loving this so far and also your hair twists! 😃

Alvin Plummer

"Am I the first chapter murder victim?" Somewhere, Agatha Christie is smiling...

Katy

Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, this is awesome.

shadowscribble

There are so many cruel stereotypes that humans will bang anything in the universe. Our world's romance and romance adjacent fiction did NOT help.

Here, have another taco…

"LEAVE MY CHILDREN ALONE, CAROLINE…" 🤣 And Caroline is wasting no trouble getting the new hot enemy naked…

Ekij

I've watched this 'a few' times now and only just noticed that you recorded the post-shower scene at 8:48 _in_ the bathroom to get that 'lots of echo's off the tiles' effect. (or you did a lot of work in after effects to get the same effect.) Very nice touch. While I might not have _consciously_ noticed it in earlier watch-throughs it's little effects like this even if only noticed subconsciously that make it that little bit more realistic.