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The Detective Fourteen 

The day they finally meet.

He had dozens of skills that all centred on discovering the truth, on piercing through lies, and on taking disparate facts and piecing them together into an accurate history. 

He was good at his work.

He was standing in front of the murderer.

He... she? He wasn’t quite sure. The child was, at his estimation, between ten and twelve years old. A pre-teen. They came up to his mid-chest if he stood, and he wasn’t a particularly tall man. Red hair, freckles, probably weighed no more than seven stone wet. 

Their clothes were simple, but clean. A set of overalls, cotton, dyed a deep blue, a knit sweater made of an off-white wool. No obvious pulled stitches on any of the clothes. No obvious stains, or wear. Not a richer person’s clothes, but also not something the average worker would wear. Too clean and presentable.

Magic. They had magic, and it was tightly wound around them. He wouldn’t have noticed except that he was very much trained to. Unfortunately, that was as far as his abilities went when it came to such things. 

Then he felt at their feelings and their emotional state. 

Calm. Annoyed. This was someone caught in a mistake of their own choosing and who was frustrated by their own lack of attention. A craftsman whose slip of the hand had caused a minor mistake.

The child’s eyes twitched. They took in the rest of the room. The nobles, the mage in the corner, the officers stationed on the other side at a table. The flick was quick and professional, tagging weapons, areas where they could move if they had to. Their hand twitched. Reaching for a weapon? Magic readying for a rapid casting? 

Malory gestured at the seat across from him. “Sit?” he asked. 

“I’m not sure I want that,” they said. Their voice was softer than he expected. Feminine? They were a little young to tell, but he suspected that his hunch was right. That didn’t quite fit the overall profile, however. Women tended towards less directly violent crime, at least statistically. 

“Please? We should talk,” he said.

She hummed, then glanced at his table. He had a small booth to himself. Two benches, facing each other, with a table between them. There was a cup of tea there already, and yesterday’s paper. 

“Fine,” they said before sitting. 

The table came up to the child’s upper chest. They looked tiny behind it. Mallory sat across from them. Slowly, he reached to the side, towards his bag. “Did you want to order anything?” he asked.

“Sure,” they replied. Their eyes locked onto his, and if he had any doubts, they fled.

A child cornered like this, by a stranger, by a person in a position of authority, would be afraid, curious, cautious, or distracted. There was curiosity there, but that was it.

He had locked eyes with serial killers that set off fewer skills.

Mallory raised a hand, calling the waiter over. The sweaty man came, and Mallory ordered for them both. There were pastries available, and warm sweet tea, the kind that a noble child may enjoy. 

Then he returned his focus onto the child. “Why did you do it?” he asked.

“Do what?” 

“Let’s start from the beginning. Who was your first murder?”

The child blinked, paused, then hummed. The pause stretched. They touched their chin. “I committed my first premeditated murder at the age of seven,” they explained. “A police officer. Or someone that worked with them, in any case. He beat his dogs. He wasn’t well-loved. Actually, quite the opposite. A repugnant man. But he worked for the bullies, and so he was useful to the right people.”

“That’s young,” he said.

“A little, sure,” she said. “But old enough to know better. It was sloppy work.”

“You said it was premeditated.”

“Any deaths before that were accidental,” she, they, replied. They grinned, the smile toothy and lopsided and... cute? He felt the emotion rise up in him, then flushed it out.

“Don’t do that, please,” he said.

“Tsk.”

“What about afterwards? Ditz?”

“Hm? That was me, yes.” 

“Why?” he asked. 

Then he paused as the tea and pastries arrived. The child lit up, smiling at the waiter. They immediately took a bite and made a happy noise. “Thanks for this. I didn’t realize how hungry I was. Though I did have breakfast.”

They set the pastry down onto their plate, then looked up to him. “Why what?”

“Ditz. The other dungeon.”

“Do you know why my father died?” they asked.

“I do not.”

“Killed by the bullies. Just men doing their job. Probably didn’t lose any sleep over it. So I figure, the blame goes up one level, you know? If a thug is hired to kill someone, who is ultimately responsible?”

“The thug and the one who hired them,” he replied. “They both had the option not to.”

“See, I think I agree with that. But what if someone hired the person that hired the thug? What if it keeps going? And what if it’s an organization?” They shook their head, a frown marring their face. “It’s... we tend to ignore abstractions. A person does a bad thing? That’s their fault. But an organization? It’s still their fault, but somehow that fault isn’t shared evenly. It’s... distributed, diluted. I never liked that.”

“I’ve heard similar arguments before,” he said. “I don’t know if they excuse murder.”

“That’s the thing. It does.” They smiled, took a long sip of the tea, then set it down with a clink. “This is nice. Thank you.”

He cleared his throat, then moved his hand slightly to the side. His fingers managed to slip into his bag.

“The dungeons. Why?”

The child shrugged. “The city needed to be destroyed. No, sorry, that’s not quite true. The industry of the city needed to go. Since a significant portion of that industry relied on the dungeons, then it follows that removing one would demolish the other, right? A man must eat to live. Remove the food, and he dies, eventually. In this case, we wanted the man to stop hitting precious things with hammers. Seeing as how it is impossible to convince him otherwise, we removed his food, and watched him starve.”

A god was involved.

That was more of gut-reaction, but it felt right. The child’s speech was far above what a person of that age should manage. They had social skills, but also magic, and also likely some sort of combat skillset. Maybe more. 

Which god?

He ran through the possibilities before narrowing it down. A god of nature. It had to be. 

The city was... counter, in many ways, to natural inclinations. There were lesser natural gods that had faded from attention, and there had been incidents with their followers, but the last of those was decades ago, before this child was around.

Who remained?

No, he couldn’t guess at that. He would need to speak with a scholar or a priest. The knowledge alone was enough. It would narrow it down for him. 

“You... you do know how many will suffer from this.”

They nodded. “I do. I’ve considered it. It’s kept me up a few times. But just a few. Tell me, detective. When you arrest someone, do you ruin their lives? You sacrifice one person, no? But it’s to save others. One for many?”

“It’s not the same,” he replied.

They shrugged. Their hands moved under the table. “I guess not,” they said before leaning back. “I’m not doing this to save people. I’m just getting rid of the rot, as it were.”

He opened his bag, reached within, and found the cold certainty of steel. His standard-issue revolver. His hand closed around the handle.

“So, which god is it?” he asked.

They blinked. “Wow. Clever. Feronie.”

He nodded. A forbidden god. One often considered evil. That fit with what had happened, he supposed.

“And what’s the plan now? Will you come peacefully? Now that the damage is done?”

“I wasn’t planning on it,” they said.

“I didn’t think so.”

I hurt something inside of him, but he moved the gun around.

At the same time, there was a sting. A spell wrapped around his hand, his skin felt flush, warm, painful, like he’d dipped it in boiling water. The spasm was almost enough to make him drop the gun.

Almost.

He pulled the trigger.

It clicked.

The spell loosened and stopped, and Mallory finally brought the gun up and over the table. The shiny bare metal was covered in a patina of rust. A few small mushrooms were poking out between its few moving parts. His hand was covered in growing welts and blisters. It shook.

“Rust, rot. It’s surprising how strong it is against something like that. For all that the machines of industry are impressively destructive, they are no more resistant to entropy than anything else.” 

She rose, and he went to do the same, then a spasm hit him, and he started to cough.

The pastry. It had turned a little green on the edges. There was a growth on its side. A small, thumb-sized mushroom, gently spewing a line of spores into the air.

Mallory coughed again, even if he tried not to. He reached for a handkerchief.

“I’m sorry. A little. I don’t know if that’s worth anything but... well, yeah.”

“I...” he sucked in a breath. “I’ve been chasing you for a month,” he said.

“Really?” She blinked. “I hadn’t noticed.”

Mallory heard others starting to cough in the carriage. It downed out the sound of light footsteps walking away.

***

The End

Comments

Mattman

Yikes love her but still yikes

Conor McGroarty

Embrace the rot and let pestilence bloom. All hail to the garden queen

taukid

Fucking stone cold. I love it!

Blue-eyed serpent

Is this the end of Sporemageddon or the Detective story line?

Conor McGroarty

For the best this happens. For all human pretend otherwise, they are still animals that depend on the environment to survive. The current system with industrial gods backing it isn’t going to slow down anytime soon and it is already very bad considering how Feronie is doing. Not with dungeons making it so easy to continue. So once the dungeons are gone they will be forced to adapt instead of just keep pushing the price solely on nature and the poor.

Hector Gregorio

....wow.. thats awoseme end...it was like a sherlock end ahha

DareDaemon

End of Book 5, I would presume.

SamHawke

detective storyline

Jubeck

Our little mushroom sure is a scary one. Clever use of talking bordering on monologuing to buy time for the rot and poison. Hope we get more spore!

Leoric The Gamer

That song does fit in quite well here, doesn't it?

HikinBear

Very good at his job, but outmaneuvered by someone higher level and better prepared. Good ending.

Michael Yust

But that's just it the dungeons are not gone ...just changed so they are no longer useful to the industrial gods and their followers.

Conor McGroarty

Don’t they stop magically producing materials? Then that is enough. Even if the land is there and they can theoretically grow stuff, it isn’t cost effective.

Michael Yust

The certainty of steel is less so when one's troops are the forces of entropy.

Boenn

Brutal, but I love the total disrespect from Mushy

SamHawke

Detective Mallory is over level 400 iirc. i do remember he has like 4 classes at his disposal and all detective types

Blue-eyed serpent

Thanks for the chapter. I'm not sure why but this doesn't sound right. Maybe a perspective issue? I hurt something inside of him, but he moved the gun around.

OshiFantasy

Our little mushroom. Terminally underestimated once again

Jesus

The dungeon were only a minor, if sizeable, fraction of the city production. Destroying them will at most slow the progress of industrialization by a few years or decades if that society is given time to adapt, probably not that much time with magic and gods to help the current system. Generalized riots in multiple cities in the other hand...

Jesus

That confrontation was entirely caused and resolved on luck. The Detective found her by pure chance, his month of investigation amounted to nothing in the end. Even without all his work he would have recognized her as a dangerous killer the second he looked at her with his levels. Her getting away with it is also very lucky, she is in a wagon full of magical cops with guns and she isn't geared toward direct fighting, there was a very real possibility someone would have incapacitated her even in the poison cloud.

Jesus

Mushy being the mass murderer eco-terrorist I knew her to be ❤️. Poisoning a full wagon of cops, a tier 4 detective dying in the process, just after her little escape from the dungeon is sure to make the opposition in the next book interesting. I wonder if seers are a thing. How fucked is she to go against a whole magical civilization with access to tools she can't even understand? How fucked are they to stand before the champion of Feronie ?

Jesus

And I'll now go back to waiting a year for the next book... After Feronie get her afterword for this one !

Genebeep (LadyLinq)

Wow, she's even stronger than I realized! I'd love to see some of her perspective on this one. Very cool ending, though it feels final enough that I can't help but wonder if there actually will be another book.

Melting Sky

That is precisely why she sat their politely answering his questions while looking completely unthreatening and letting the rot and poison do its work. The thing that makes her so dangerous is she is a young child with a load of very disarming and deceptive social skills that make it very hard to gauge just how dangerous she is or what she is actually currently up to. You do not expect a ten year old little girl to have magic and manipulation skills that would be rare even for a master assassin three times her age. It also helps that her magic is very subtle and although slow it disables before it kills. Somebody like the detective is not the sort of brainless thug who shoots first and asks questions later since that would leave him with none of his many questions answered. He is a detective after all, through and through. That was his downfall. He was too smart and moral to just kill her on the spot without first ascertaining her guilt, and by the time he was a couple of minutes into the conversation and realized just how dangerous she was, the entire room was already poisoned and his weapon disabled. It was too late. The one real element of luck here, was whether the mage was powerful and also perceptive enough to realize they were under attack by the little girl before she had disabled their weapons.

Wide Cat

Looking forward to Feronies reaction in the epilogue. Her little crusader, finally making the real, significant waves she was looking for. Interested to see if her influence will linger in the mushroom farms and if she will be able to exert some pressure now the influence of industry is burning around them. I wonder how much attention the other gods will be paying, now that her plans are so visibly in motion. Feel a bit sorry for the detective. Even though he was an instrument of the corrupt system, he was just a man trying to do his job, and got caught up in something he couldn't have expected or prepared for. It was a powerful image of how even the strongest (4 classes is what, 2500? 3000 levels?) can be caught unawares, underestimate what is right in front of them and pay the ultimate price. A good metaphor for our little mushroom in general. It was good to see how even though her intentions are noble, a lot of people are going to get caught up and hurt who don't really deserve it, and that no matter how attached we are to her she *is* ultimately a bad person. Given what she has to do there's no real way around it. Hope we explore it more in the story to come, her relationship with her mother in particular.

Wide Cat

Just the end of volume 5, I think. It would be criminal to end the story as a whole now that things are heating up and getting so interesting.

Genebeep (LadyLinq)

I dunno' I also want to see more, but this feels like a hell of a 90's style "put the sunglasses on and ride off into the sunset on a motor cycle with a rock ballad playing in the background" sort of moment.

David Burchfield

Wow, that was not how I expected this to go.

RavensDagger

That's what I was aiming for, since it might be a while until I get to Vol 6, I wanted the end of Vol 5 to be a banger

Jesus

Mushy is a vilain in her story. Not a misguided one or a self serving one, but still the type of monster mothers scare their child with to make them more cautious of strangers. The factories are worse, but the factories aren't people, they're a rotten, dysfunctional system.

PalmTrees

I think it's a typo. Should read: It hurt something inside of him, ...

the fool

The End The End or The End of The Detective/book5

Melting Sky

The dungeons were not just a minor fraction of the city's production. They were one the primary source of it's raw materials and food. You can damage the production line and it can be rebuilt, but the if you attack a supply chain at it's base it is not something that can be recovered from easily. This is actually one of the things that makes destroying the environment our raw materials come from such a stupid thing to do. A good example of this the famine that plagued sub Saharan Africa after they destroyed all the local arable land leading to desertification, or the dust bowl in the US, or any of the thousands of mining ghost towns dotted across the world. If you damage or destroy the very base of the supply chain supporting a society, that society collapses and quite often completely dies out. It's why gradually poisoning the land, air, and water on a colossal scale is such a stupid thing to do long term.