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Chapter Eleven - the Thieve’s Guild of Alpta

Starting next chapter, I think I'll no longer have them be free? My plan is to keep 10 chapters ahead of what's being posted on RR once this is out! That'll probably be... when I have like, 50 chapters. So November-ish?

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Rosario looked over her new costume and was pleased with her work. 

It wasn’t perfect. Ideally, she’d be working with more leathers. KingBreaker was one of those somewhat more realistic games where most of the armours and costumes were... if not period-accurate, than at least designed according to real historical examples. 

Basically, leather armour was rather uncommon, since it was rather uncommon historically. But it still looked right for [Rogue]’s armour.

Instead, what she had on hand was that one set of skirts she had singed a little and a few sets of slightly-worn maid’s apparel. Her [Seamstress] skills came into place, taking the garments apart and refashioning them into pants and shirts and a light coat, not dissimilar to what she saw normal people on the streets wearing.

It had taken her several hours, and unfortunately didn’t gain her any levels, but she supposed the experience was valuable all the same.

When morning came, she dressed, then slipped out of the room, tugging up the hood of her new coat to cover her hair and ears. 

She blended into the crowd fairly well. A little taller than the average man, but not by too much if she stooped a little, and her garb was close enough to the local style not to raise suspicion. The darker colour did contrast a little with the general brighter styles around her, but it blended into the background as well.

“This should not be so fun,” she muttered, but she couldn’t help the ghost of a smile on her lips. 

This was like... advanced cosplay. 

As she approached the alley deep in the Black Docks, she started to flick on a few of her [Thief] and [Rogue] skills. First [Inconspicious] which made it harder for people to notice her, and then [Hide Job] and [Hide Identity]. When she had picked up that Job tree, it was mostly for exactly this kind of utility. There was supposed to be a higher level skill that would let her pick the job and level she displayed, and she wanted to test out if she could display NPC jobs, to better sell the illusion of maidness. 

The alley was entirely empty, but she could sense that it was being watched over. It was like a prickle on the back of her neck. Looking around, she noticed a window across the street with the curtain slightly peeled back and a shadow behind it. Some of the younger people lingering on the street corner were also not talking and were just standing around, bored. Very unlike how normal kids would act.

She pushed in, walking with a straight back. 

Her plan was simple enough. [Rouge] was one of those Jobs that was fantastic for earning money. It also came, she hoped, with the benefit of not having to do much official paperwork. That, and she had an idea of how to continue levelling up her [Scullery Maid] as well, which was nice.

The alley was dark, damp, and smelled vaguely of rotting fish. It was also too clean. The trash piles by the entrance stopped a few steps in, and it was clear that the trash was all set up on some pallets that could easily be moved. It was decorative trash. The idea almost made her laugh.

The alley curved slightly, with a wall jutting out. The door she was looking for was around that bend and behind the jut. It was placed in such a way that someone walking through would, in all likelihood, miss the door entirely. 

She moved to it and gently tried the handle, which was locked, but that lock was slightly oversized and had hundreds of little marks around the keyhole. Anyone with even a modest lockpicking ability would be able to open this. Anyone without could probably manage with a screwdriver, actually. 

She cast [Unlock] on the door, limiting her mana to only a pinch, and that was enough to let her twist the handle and step in.

The entrance was more or less as she remembered, stairs leading down into a large, open basement with some old wooden crates taking up space. Nothing suspicious at all.

That was, until she went around one of the crates and discovered another set pressed into the wall. It was the kind of thing that would go unnoticed, and honestly, if she didn’t know about it beforehand, she would have missed it too.

Pulling on a latch, she silently opened the door, then slipped in.

The space behind was the guild.

Alpta was built along the coat of lake Alpta. She wasn't sure which was named first, so she didn’t know who to blame for the lack of creativity there. In any case, it was built on a rise, with a cliff overlooking the lake. Part of the city, the lower section, extended out over the edge of the lake, with stairs leading down to it.

The Black Docks were a set of docks down below, as well as a shanty town of sorts where poorer fishing vessels came in at night. The entire area was supposedly prone to flooding in the spring as well, so many houses were built on stilts unlike the rest of Alpta which favoured much sturdier construction.

The Thieve's Guild was set inside that cliffside, in a series of ancient tunnels dug out by some great beasts that could chew through stone with ease. 

The tunnels were a small maze. She navigated it out of habit. Left, right, right, past the fake wall, left, straight, and then into the Thieve’s Guild.

The caverns were reinforced and had been used by some minor nobles as storage... and then promptly and perhaps purposefully forgotten.

The result was a large space broken up by pillars and separated into sleeping quarters, common rooms, and storage for a respectably large guild of sneak-thieves, purse-cutters, and smugglers.  

There were a good number of people here, but only one of them was staring right at her.

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There was someone new in the Guild, and that was always worthy of note. Moreso when he hadn’t invited the newcomer. Even more so when the watchers up above hadn’t warned him that they were coming. Either they were clacking off (a possibility) or the newcomer was better than that.

He stood and moved around. The newcomer--a woman by the looks of her, taller than average, so maybe a non-human, not obviously armed, and in dark, plain clothes that suited someone being subtle--eyed him from across the room.

Fen Numbra wasn’t the leader of the Thieve’s Guild because they didn’t stand for that kind of thing, but he was one of their only tier-3 members, and he had been in the business for a while.

So, while still meeting the newcomer’s eyes from across the room, he activated one of the skills that came with his [Shadow Walker] Job. 

In a blink, he slammed into his own shadow, then flashed across the room and appeared on the far end of the space. When he did, he felt a shiver run down his spine. The skill was good. Damned good for any sort of thief. There wasn’t a guard in Alpta that could track him. Most thought he merely teleported, and it was a fast enough skill that that was almost true.

And yet the newcomer had watched him. Her eyes had casually followed him as he moved across the space faster than a speeding arrow.

He smiled, put on a cheery face, and stepped closer. At the same time, he fired off a friendly [Inspect]

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[Hidden] - Level Hidden

He almost wanted to laugh. It was a rather brazen display, all things considered, but it did tell him much, especially coupled with a few other things. Notably, her features once her came close enough to make them out. An elf. 

Elves were about as common as rat-folk in these parts, and he’d know. “Welcome to the guild, fair lady,” he said with a bow.

This wasn’t a [Thief]. He knew all of those. Any of them that grew this strong he’d especially know, and besides, elves didn’t mess with that business too often. Too proud.

So, a high level, possibly third tier, maybe more. Probably not a Titled, but this could easily be someone with a few second or third tier Jobs. Or they were hyper-specialized into jobs that only gave Dexterity, but his gut told him otherwise.

“Good morning,” she replied easily. “It’s been... a long time since I was last here. Forgive me if I forgot some of the local customs, or misstepped by simply walking in.”

“No harm done,” he replied. “You’ve been here before, then?”

A member of one of the previous guilds? Or a previous shape of the same guild, at least.

“It’s been a long time,” she repeated, this time with clearer emphasis.

Ah, yes, elves. 

“Of course. I imagine you’ll find things quite normal here,” he said. He prided himself on being an honest man, as strange as that may seem to some, so he hastened to add to that. “Though... times are turbulent, and there are factions within the city that offer work of a more... politically charged sort at times.”

“Oh? Well, that’s not exactly what I’m here for,” she said. “Mister... Numbra? I’m actually looking for work. Of a very particular sort.”

“Are you, now?” he asked. “Come! We can at least find a booth and have ourselves a sit. Good conversation should be had over food.”

He gestured for her to follow as he swaggered deeper into the guild, his tail flicking out behind him. As he moved he brought his arm up and gestured to some of the others who were finally starting to notice that something was amiss. With a few quick motions of his hand, hidden from view of the elf, he told the others to be wary and ready. Just in case. 

Then they found a booth. There was, of course, a small bar at the very back of the guild, with some purloined sofas, stolen cushioned, and misappropriated casks of wine and booze. 

He sat across from the elf, who demurely took a seat, and then one of the lower-ranked members brought them both a platter of cheeses and two mugs, along with a pitcher of ale.

He leaned forwards and took some of each, but the elf didn’t partake. A cautious one, then.

“So, what sort of work are you after? We have a few decent fences available to members.”

“No, not that sort,” she said. “I... can I trust you to be discreet?”

“Surprisingly, yes,” he said with a chuckle.

“I appreciate that. In that case... I’m looking for work that may advance my Job. This one.” She gestured vaguely at herself, and he took the invitation to [Inspect] her once more.

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[Scullery Maid] - Level 2

Ah. He knew what she was, now. It was rather obvious. The elven disdain for theft did not mean that they lacked other sorts of [Rogue]-ish figures. The high Dexterity. The overly casual manner of dress. The lack of fear. Even the way she avoided the food, likely in case it was poisoned. 

This was an [Assassin].

“I take it you have a target in particular?”

“No,” she replied. “I genuinely do just wish to elevate my rank as a [Maid].

He nodded.

She probably wanted to appear more suitable for an infiltration job. Probably a complex one, to get closer to someone important. It may even be someone outside of Alpta. Some [Assassin]-types, especially the higher-tiered sorts, could take years to prepare for a single job. They prided themselves on it.

Still, that didn’t make her a foe, necessarily. “I might have a thing or two,” he said. “How comfortable are you with the concept of rebellion?”

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Comments

Phoenix Ride

Was it mentioned if Rosario had anything inside of her inventory? Probably one of the first things to check.

Wolfknap

Interesting that he never gave her his name. I assumed she identified him but that he has a skill to keep it hidden. If she bypassed said skill he should comment on it.

Viriathus312

Knives, brooms, and maid outfits, I believe.

HikinBear

Rebellion? Messy business and, usually, bad for business. Correction: along the coat of lake Alpta → along the coast of lake Alpta

Manlor

Please tell me that was a typo and her class isn't really [Rouge] 🙅

Bad Dog

I love the fact that the character is focused on her goal to become the ultimate Maid. When I saw that she was going to the thief's guild, I thought she was going to ask for jobs to make money. Instead, she is just using them to get a job as a maid. It is actually kind of refreshing to see an OP character that is perfectly happy to do menial work instead of relying on her OP skills to do whatever she wants. I'm actually quite interested in seeing where this goes. PS: Please let there by a 3rd tier job for Maid, there can even be several branch specialties such as Battle Maid (combat specialist that requires DPS class), or Defender/Protector Maid (bodyguard specialist that requires a tank class), The aforementioned Archmaid could be a mage specialty that requires a mage class. Another possibility could be that people don't know is possible to get a 3rd tier job for non-combat professions because they have some extraordinary requirements like having a related title or achievement to unlock them in addition to maxing out the 2nd tier job. For example, in the case of the Maid job, her title of "The Faithful Maid" could be the unlock condition for a 3rd tier Maid job.

Nyx

I think it happened in the previous chapter as well. Serious question @RavensDagger, should I mention it when I notice little grammar/word/spelling errors, or just ignore them? For example, I'm pretty sure the following was intended to be coast, not coat. > Alpta was built along the coat of lake Alpta.

BWH

"Rebellion? Depends on who you ask. My current employer would give me a glowing letter of recommendation, if you don't mind tracking him down..." 😏

tr13ze

Thanks for the chapter 😁

Ithicon

Sorry if you're not looking for corrections but I couldn't get passed "thieve's guild", thieves is already plural so if there was to be an apostrophe it would be thieves' guild. Even then presumably Thieves Guild is the title like a Mages Guild so it wouldn't be necessary at all. Loving the story so far! The start was very reminiscent of Melia the Magnificent though it's diverged a bit.

J Harrow

Love this story :)

Joel Tone

Getting into the thieves guild like that is an excellent way to establish her bonna fides. She really is determined to get her maid job up as fast as possible, I was sure she was going to grind some rogue levels for money. Thanks for the chapter

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "Thieve’s Guild" should be "Thieves' Guild". "skills came into place" should be "play". "Rouge" should be "Rogue". I think "discovered another set" would be clearer as "another set of stair" (or crates or door, if that's what it's supposed to be). "coat of lake Alpta" should be Coast of Lake Alpta". I think "clacking off" should be "slacking". "once her came close enough" should be "he". "stolen cushioned" should be "cushions". "rank as a [Maid]." is missing a speech mark.

Ilikehumans

Would love to be able to continue to read this story for free, at least till it has more flesh on the bone to justify it to make it paid.

RavensDagger

... okay, fine, I'll do a few more free just for you! But eventually I need to un-free them!

RavensDagger

I was thinking... [Scullery Maid] [Maid] [Archmaid]

GryphonKnight

>Starting next chapter, I think I'll no longer have them be free? My plan is to keep 10 chapters ahead of what's being posted on RR once this is out! That'll probably be... when I have like, 50 chapters. So November-ish Third attempt. Stupid Private Capital Patreon. My usual advice is the peanut gallery is fans not successful writers, So I advise you to ask your fellow successful writers what they recommend Personally I like the comment section on Patreon better, especially for the beginnings of the story But writers got to support their art addictions 🎬

GryphonKnight

Scullery Maid/ Maid/ Lady's Maid/ Head Maid/ Archmaid. The first four tiers are actual tiers for maids. The fifth tier would only be available to long lived races like Dragons, and Phoenix. But the FMC high stats would let her unlock Fifth tier maid

BWH

Or the 5th tier could be a hidden synergy tier. Since she's using magic to help so much it pairs Archmage to Maid. 😁

Joseph (T3mmie)

It's very amusing that the master theive guild guy is essentially spot on. In a way, she IS infiltrating something. She's the demon lord's maid. She's infiltrating the entire society. She'd be hunted down otherwise.

Aoinfinity

When I read that author’s note, I was wondering why the newer ones are still free. So I have you to thank! Well done!

Libri Lector

Hey, umm... I don't know if you are keeping your draft somewhere else because updating Patreon is a pain, but it still says, "Alpta was built along the coat of lake Alpta." (also Lake should probably be capitalized because it's part of a name)

JDoop

Black Apron - Max Level Archmaid - Chapter Eleven - the Thieve’s Guild of Alpta "This was like... advanced cosplay. " thats call Larping, your a LARPer maid. "She wanted to test out if she could display NPC jobs, to better sell the illusion of maidness. " I respect the hustle if nothing else "It was decorative trash. The idea almost made her laugh." Medieval temu. “It’s been a long time,” she repeated, this time with clearer emphasis. Ah, yes, elves. " elf-nonsense once more saves the maids' ass "Ah. He knew what she was, now. It was rather obvious. The elven disdain for theft did not mean that they lacked other sorts of [Rogue]-ish figures. The high Dexterity. The overly casual manner of dress. The lack of fear. Even the way she avoided the food, likely in case it was poisoned. This was an [Assassin]." fear the broom of doom! "Still, that didn’t make her a foe, necessarily. “I might have a thing or two,” he said. “How comfortable are you with the concept of rebellion?” or 'Are you a French maid?'2 BA Review 11: 0/10 sweeping, 2/100 maid, 10/10 misunderstandings, 5/10 larping, 10/10 les miserables maid?

gentlyAmbiguous

This is a lovely little adventure. I'm not sure why I'm enjoying the thieves guild side quest so much but maybe it's enough that nothing is obviously out of place and everything fits cleanly within the setting.

Exonator

I think you would be really interested in a story on RR called: Maid To Kill. As that is about a maid in a fantasy world turning her mundane class into a nightmare for her foes, only using maid skills and utilities.....her goal is also to become the ultimate maid

Temaki

Small notes: 1. It would either be a Thief's Guild or a Thieves' Guild; 2. Rouge is just red in French. You probably mean Rogue. The same typo was present last chapter.

Zorgdub

Is "clackiing off" some slang I haven't heard before, or is it supposed to be "slacking off"?

Orca

Typos as a [Maid]. as a [Maid]." stolen cushioned, (either) stolen cushions, (or) stolen cushioned *some kind of furniture*,