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Chapter Thirty-One - Unprentice

Hmm, this is AI art of Lucky:

Mingrix is working on another commission... uh, from me, but they'll get around to making real art of Lucky soon~

Speaking of Lucky, what do we think of her after this chapter?

Someone in the comments mentioned Seven Samurai, and... I legit kind of love the idea of Rosario slowly forming a band of very competent...ish young people who may eventually become the next generation of Great Generals in Eleanor's army... regardless of what Eleanor thinks of this, or how much she 'Oooooos' about it. Kind of a vague, long-term thing, though? for now, Lucky~!

***

Rosario checked the fit of her sword in its scabbard as she walked out of Smithville. The day was getting long; they had maybe an hour or two before the sun set. 

“That was generous of you,” Cricket said. “Are you so unbothered by money?”

“I am,” Rosario said. She had plenty to go around. Mostly because her expenses were rather minimal at the moment. Food and stays at a few inns were all she had to worry about for the foreseeable future. 

“Oh, a rich elfen lady, how enticing!” Cricket said. She bounced ahead, then came to a stop and pressed her hands to her lower back. “Ah, I am too old for this. You have pushed me too hard!”

“Just wait until tomorrow morning.” Rosario said. She cracked a smile when Cricket groaned. “Come on, we need to find these predators. Do you have any skills for spotting those?”

“Not a one,” Cricket said. “But the mayor mentioned some homes on the outskirts, yes? Thou must have a grand perceptive ability, can thou not hear the foe?”

Rosario tilted her head, ears twitching slightly, but her hearing wasn’t at that kind of level. She could certainly hear a lot; people in their homes, the wind in trees and the general bustle of a small town nearing the end of the day, but there wasn’t anything too obvious. No one was out there screaming ‘oh god, a horde of monsters!’ at the top of their lungs.

“Nothing, sorry,” she replied.

“Then we search most valiantly!” Cricket said. 

They started by circling south, away from the river and towards a row of farms, each one set a good ways apart from each other with some open fields around them. It wasn’t every house that was occupied, however. She saw signs of that sickness the mayor had mentioned in a few homes that looked recently abandoned. There were no animals grazing in their fields and the homes had collected dust and some minor damage, the sort that came from no one maintaining them for a season or two.

Cricket straightened at some point, the antennae atop her head twitching. “I think... there’s something?”

Rosario paused, then listened, and yes, she could hear something. Someone off in the forest, across from one of the unoccupied pastures. They were panting, moving quickly through the brush, and... maybe they were followed? “Good catch,” she said.

“My antennae are tuned to find trouble!” Cricket said. “Which is quite unfortunate, I wish they worked for finding interesting single ladies in need of a laugh.”

Rosario snorted, then she vaulted over the fence into the field. Cricket followed a moment later, and soon they were making their way across at a decent pace. “I’m leaving this fight to you,” Rosario said.

“What? But why?”

“You’re the one in need of grinding. Don’t worry, I’m here. Nothing will hurt you.”

Cricket tried to puff her cheeks out in a pout, but that was hard to do while jogging through knee-high grass. So, instead, she pulled out two long knives with colourful ribbons around their pommels from her inventory and then flipped them over, holding them by the blade. “Ready~”

Rosario nodded, then she squinted. The person running was slowing down, stumbling... “Hey!” she called out, a hand going to her mouth to help her voice carry. “Over here! It’s safer here!” 

They moved up a little closer to the forest. By the time they were nearly halfway there, someone burst out of the woods.

A young woman? She was stumbling over the uneven ground, face flushed and clothing clinging to her because of all the sweat. She was dressed rather simply. Patched-over pants, a loose blouse, and a sort of leathery underbust corset, the sort that Rosario had noted many women in town wore.

She shook her head and stopped focusing on fashion for just a moment. The woman was being followed by three... no, five [Forest Raptors] and all she had to defend herself was the bladed length of a broken scythe. 

“Take the three on the right,” Rosario said as she snap-inspected the monsters. All of them were [Forest Raptors] around levels 20-30. So, some were a little weaker than Cricket, others just a hair stronger. She believed in the [Jester] however.

The woman... didn’t stand as much of a chance. She was a level 21 [Farmhand] and she looked like she was seconds away from being grabbed even if she was slowly speeding up on the more even terrain.

Rosario could practically see what was going to happen. The young woman must have sensed it too, because she was spinning around, swinging that weapon of hers with all of her might. 

“Stay,” she said to Cricket.

Then Rosario blasted forwards, a hard shove off the ground allowing her to fly forward so quickly that the grass around her trajectory was shifted back.

Her thumb flicked the guard of her sword, flinging it out of its scabbard. Then her hand caught the hilt, wrist already moving into the first motions of a swing.

She [Cut] past the woman, spun, kicked the upper torso of a second [Forest Raptor] apart, then kicked apart a tree to bounce back. On the return trip she swung her sword twice, decapitating and bisecting a third [Forest Raptor] before sliding her sword away.

She scooped the young woman up, an arm under her knees, another around her back.

They came to a sliding stop next to Cricket, who was just reeling back to throw a knife.

Back where the young woman had been, the grass ripped apart by her sword strikes was still flying upwards.

“Are you well?” Rosario asked as she set the woman down.

She landed on both feet, but wavered for a moment, clearly a little dizzy. The movement may have been a little fast for a low-levelled NPC... no, for a low-leveled person.

Rosario paid half of her attention to Cricket, who laughed and bounced ahead while summoning more knives that she flicked out with surprising speed. They’d occasionally bounce off the toughened skin of the [Forest Raptors] but some of them dug in deep, leaving bleeding wounds behind and limiting their motion. A good thing, because the two remaining monsters focused on Cricket and were trying to snap her out of the air or disembowel her with their talons.

“You... you saved me. Thank you,” the young woman said.

Rosario nodded and stood up straighter, hands almost going to a default maidly stance before she remembered that she was a [Swordmaster] at the moment, not a maid. “It’s nothing,” she replied before finally properly [Inspect]ing the woman.

Lucile Smith

[Farmhand] - level 21

Lucile looked over to where she’d come from just in time for that tree that Rosario had used as a stepping stone to come crashing down. The raptors there were quite dead.

Cricket cackled in glee as she managed to take out one of the monsters chasing after her. The other was in a story state as well, with three knives poking out of its fur-covered sides. It was faster than Cricket on a straight run, but Cricket’s fighting style... and life style, involved very few straight anythings. 

“Are you well?” rosario asked. She touched the woman on the shoulder and turned her slightly, then winced. The girl’s pants were ripped, and the skin beneath showed several small cuts. She’d likely run through some bushes and the branches whipped at her hard enough to break skin. Reaching into her inventory, she pulled out the weakest of her potions and undid the cork. “Drink this, it will--”

The young woman took a step back, then against Rosario’s expectations, she bowed low at the waist. “Take me as your apprentice!” she shouted.

“Um.”

***

This was it! Her luck had finally turned!

A [Swordmaster]. And honest to goodness [Swoordmaster], and one on the cusp of becoming Titled. 

“Please, take me on as your apprentice,” Lucile said, still bowed. She had forgotten the pains and aches. They weren’t as important as this moment. The woman had moved so quickly that she had been little more than a blur to Lucile, and those monsters... she was strong. Properly strong. “I... I will do whatever I must.”

“I’m not looking for an apprentice,” the woman said.

Her companion, the woman in the brightly coloured garb that Lucile hadn’t had time to inspect yet, finished off the other [Forest Raptor] then cheered. “Level up! Woo! Cricket is the most powerful! Most strongest! Most prettiest! Bow before me world, and tremble as thine eyes feast upon my mighty form!”

Lucile glanced up and...

Cricket

[Jester] - Level 28

Well, she supposed that was impressive, but it was no [Swordmaster]

“Don’t cheer so much,” the [Swordmaster] said. “I saw many moments in that fight that could use some improvement. You have great movement abilities and yet you don’t use them enough in combat. Ah, young miss, I don’t need or want an apprentice, I’m afraid. Are you... Lucky? The mayor mentioned you.”

He had? No, of course he had, the meddlesome old man... though she supposed he was only looking out for her, and if he sent these two, then she owed him. Still.

Lucile crashed onto her knees on the ground and bowed even lower. “Please!” she shouted. She focused on the grass before her face. “Please! With all due respect, you don’t know me. I ask only for a chance! I... I will grow stronger.”

“No thank you?”

Lucile bounced to her feet, then reached towards the [Swordmaster] before stopping herself. She took a deep breath. No. “I’m not giving you the choice!” she shouted. “My name is Lucky Smith, and I’m going to be the world’s next [Sword Saint]!”

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Comments

JustSmile

You are being befriended. Please do not resist.

K Qu

I do hope that Rosario will take her. From the last chapter, it sounds like she’s being pressured into being a [Farm Wife] despite her wishes/dreams of being an adventurer, and that doesn’t sit quite right with me.

Widget

poor Rose is gonna keep getting adopted by extroverts huh?

Manlor

Seven Samurai is always a good inspiration!

gostsamo

At least she has a drive and takes the initiative. Now just do something stupid and she must be in.

Brepn

Oooooo

Phyrexa

Rose collecting a crew by accident/against her will is very funny (and i hope Penny gets to join eventually)

Lying Kiot

I mean, the future Demon Queen IS in need of powerful Generals. Investing in a future SwordSaint is not a bad idea.

Adam

TFTC

BWH

What are Rosie's current stats? We haven't seen the full sheet in a while. Even with [Charisma] being her dump stat, she doesn't seem to have any trouble attracting the future Great Generals. 😆💖

tr13ze

Thanks for the chapter😁

Riking

Except for when she does the same thing to the goat.

OshiFantasy

Too introverted to accept a comely young lass into the party. Too introverted to tell her to stop when she starts following anyways.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "maybe they were followed" might be better as "being followed". "“Are you well?” rosario asked" is repeated. Also capitalisation. "And honest to goodness" should be "An". I think "brightly coloured" should by hyphenated.

TortyMorty

*cough* *cough* What is a [Swoordmaster]? thank you for the chapter

Narf

"She scooped the young woman up, an arm under her knees, another around her back." And then Rose promptly broke Lucky's neck because it turns out that level 21 farmhands aren't really built to withstand 70g of acceleration when Rose jumped back to her original position. Oopsies. Feedback on Lucky, huh? Hm... from the image I gather she's a horsegirl? At least she looks like one from the tail and ears. For little old introvert me, she's decidedly too pushy. Somebody who can't respect a "no" and inflicts themselves on others no matter what is not someone I feel positive towards. Not a great first impression, to be honest. There are more charming ways to push her way into the group than: "i don't give a crap about your opinions, I'm following you anyways!" - I'd feel quite disrespected by somebody like that, especially if they wanted me to do them a huge favour. But also not something that cannot be salvaged. Watiting to see how the situation develops from here before I really judge. Some of that behaviour might well be due to all the stress and adrenaline levels that she just experienced.

Lying Kiot

This is going to be a big long, so bear with me. I am writing this because i really enjoy this story. It has what i always looked for, progression. So we know that she is a pure blood elf that has the trait [Ageless]. Can you obtain a trait ? And what's does her trait do exactly ? Does it mean her body does age, but her appearance is locked ? Meaning that she could be near the end of her lifespan and yet still look the same, correct ? Since she was sick in her previous life, i could see her do research on the net, to see if any thing could slow down her aging and prolong her life. And, in rela life there is something called Yogic breathing that slows biological aging through measurable impacts on the nervous system, cellular repair, and stress hormones. It basically boils down to breath less, like a turtle. And her being a Sword Saint, she could probably bretah less and it would have great synergy with her Rogue class but also her Maid class (an invisible maid is cool !) To justify such breathing, you could spin it as being needed. Her master future children and grand-children will also need her. Live as long as possible, to protect and guide them will be imperative. The previous demon king is, in a way, an example of what would happen if she is not present. So if you combine her con stat, pure elf lineage, and her breathing, she will live for a long time. And that is not counting the fact that her con will certainly increase. Speaking of jobs, her semastress is almost at the third tier. So, i could see her making an argument to her master that " The people from the slums need any help they can get, so why not order me to patch and sew their clothes ? If they see you ordered me to do so, they might grow to trust you and support you in your future endeavores" From there she order her to clean the entire slums too. That look like a lot of class lvl waiting to happen. The [apprentice enchantement] only needs to have its tier 2 class chosen. Why not study with the young lady together ? Not as a teacher but a colleague also learning such class. To create a close relationship/bond they could. The Rogue seem to be a class more than possible to lvl up given the circumstances. But the Assassin class will be a perfect class to dispose of the people against the young lady. I believe pushing the Assassin class to peak tier 3 if not low tier 4 is more than possible with the challenges ahead. And being in such disadvantageous position is perfect to push her classes higher. She is a completionist at heart. So, while a low tier 4 rogue is a possibility, she will certainly hunt bad people until she completes the class. I have been thinking, now that she is in this world, she has far more class options. And this keeps tingling my brain. What can a tier 4 waitress do ? What about a leadership/strategist tier 4 do ? I am SO DAMN curious what such jobs could do at tier 3/4. I mean, how many people were able to push a painter class at tier 4 ? What sort of niche job could hold skills that when used in Rosario hands could turn broken ? That why i hope she will do a lot of research on what sort of classes exist beyond the game classes, which could help doing her duties as a maid, have fun, and posses skills that would turn overpowered in her hands. A couple classes i would want her to get and use, that also have good synergy with what she has, would have fun and fit nicely with the theme "maid". A martial artist class centered around aikido, judo and jujitsu. This is a class for control. To not destroy the environment. To be able to run on water and steep cliffs. [Instead of meeting force head-on with brute strength, these arts center on using an opponent's own energy, weight, and momentum against them.] This kinda scream maid. A maid must always hold control of each guest, if their behavior grow to become unruly. Again, since much of the world is her young lady ennemy, i imagine she will have a ton a opponent to fight against x). Maybe a spear/staff combat job ? It would be hard to level 3 combat job but it would combo nicely with her broom. I doubt there is a combat class Broom Saint. Maybe there is ? Perhaps a hairdresser class ? It might exist, make use of scissors, meaning cutting. But i am not sure she would have fun with it. Classes that would increase her con stat seem important since she will want to live a long life to keep an eye on the demon royalty and their lineage so that nothing bad happens to them. And figuring out her body age woudn't be a bad idea. Her age would depend on how elfs ageing work. But a funny theory would be that she IS in her twenties but has run away from home to grow her combat classes. A delegation from the elf nation coming to do diplomatic talk with the demon Queen only to learn that Rosario was indeed the rumored maid of the previous demon king and has now become the current demon Queen maid. Rosario would learn that her body self did run because nobody would allow her to become a maid and also no one entairtained her fighting lust. So, she would be a twenty years old, considered a child by pure blood elf, and yet a talented and dedicated enough to achieve double titled. Would Meteorologist or Astronomer be possible classes ? Studying the weather is kinda maid related since you woudn't want to have the young lady walking under the rain. But what could it do at tier 4 ? Who knows !

Libri Lector

Well, she told Cricket her charisma stat, and Cricket said it was higher than her highest stat.

ThisIsMyFateNow

I support the idea of Rose slowly gathering a group of women to follow her around :D

Lying Kiot

This is so true !!! This is very much a trope i have seen and don't like. " I don't care for your no, just do what i want ! " At least give me an argument, something ! Let's see how this will turn out. Because this is the sort of trope that, in my opinion, can make or break a story.

jthrr

Cricket, in exaggerated French accent: "Swordsaint? Euh, non, we've already got one!"

Aleah Cat

Somebody fetch that gif from Lyrical Nanoha about the friendship lasers.

Joel Tone

> Cricket’s fighting style... and life style, involved very few straight anythings. Is hilarious. I like Lucky. She makes a nice counter to Cricket and Eleanor might find less intimidating. Okay probably not. Intimidating in a different way? Thanks for the chapter

Robert Nolan

Awesome. I love it when there is a big cast, as long as you don't go too far and they start to blend together. So far as I can see we have the competent veteran/leader in Rose, the degenerate rouge with a heart in Cricket, the hapless heir, the naive young warrior with dreams of glory in lucky, and maybe a jaded revolutionary in the wings. What is there to look forward too: the big guy who is secretly the smart guy, the bickering twins/Cornish ogres, or maybe cook flavored as a mad scientist. I can hardly wait.

Mirthfilled

Lucky good! Eleanor’s band of merry women better!

Lee

Collecting the future Great Generals (Seven Samurai) sounds really cool… Thank you for the chapter!

AllenR

I think someone (not me) last chapter called it. Lucky is looking a bit Border Collie inspired in the AI art!

RavensDagger

<3 Thank you, for the ideas! I... think some of these gave me other ideas. Some I'll see if I can't answer, stuff like her Ageless might come up again, but I don't know if I want to make a point of focusing on it? Ah, we'll see! As for Rosario's past, I think it would be 'cleanest' if she had no origin amoung the elves. She just showed up as the Demon Lord's maid one day... like she did in the game, lol

Lying Kiot

While going out i thought of classes that she would like and have synergy with her build Dancer and Magician. The Magician class would be about sleight of hand (dexterity) and manipulating peoples attention through misdirection. Good synergy with Rogue for the misdirection. Perhaps even fitting an entire armoury of knives inside her maid dress. The classic moment where you need to give your weapons away at security only for the maid to keep pulling weapon out of the dress x'D And Dancer could become Blade Dancer. It fits her dexterity build too. I am not sure if this would be a crafting or combat class. I thought about con type classes that would fit her build, but i did not find ANY ! As for Rosario past. I mean, making it clean would give the impression no thought was put into it or such detail escaped your mind. (As a reader, that would be what crossed my mind. So how can you SHOW a "clean past" without saying it in the story or a comment ?) Since you don't want her to have a past among the elves, then you could simply justify her presence outside the elven kingdom/empire as her parent being eccentric travelers, giving birth to her, and simply dying due to the war against the demons, or something along those lines. It ties her past. But it would be funny for elves to see her as a child, age wise xD What makes this story enjoyable for me, it's progression. Often time, that's forgotten at the doorstep of the story. She is a completionist, a progression junkie and someone who loves to battle but is restrained through her role of maid. You could even say being a maid is what allowes her to truly enjoy fighting. Like a child who loves sweet but only eats one when the moment is appropriate. She did not change when coming to this new world, she still is herself. An addict of improvement. Someone willing to fight 1 vs 5, for the sheer thrill of battle. To complete each of her classes.

CelestialDoggie

I'm always down for collecting cuties into a well-oiled team...whether Rosario wants them or not.

Martin Boudrias

Plot twist: there can only ever be one [Sword Saint] at a time

Bad Dog

You will be befriended!Resistance is futile!

Jesus

That's an owl silly. You can recognized her from the characteristic ooting unique to her kin.

Norse_Bastard

I just realised I read all the cheapers for this series when i was supposed to just read a single chappy of someone I follow. Probably have to keep a close eye on this story 😆 at least you get to experience a lot of different things with ADHD 🤣

JDoop

Review: 0/10 sweeping, 3/10 maid, 10/10 anime moment, 10/10 tomboy, 10/10 rose is now a sword mom.