Outside the Heavens - Needed Changes (Patreon)

When writing a new novel, I, as a discovery writer, am taking the time to feel out the characters, world, etc... I already had plenty of lore, history, and general background for the world, but assembling that into a cohesive framework requires actually writing.

I quite like the world, and I think it will make a fantastic novel, but I am definitely going to need to make some changes. So, before I get too far in, I decided to stop and consult with all of you about what I ought to do.

At the moment, I am giving too much exposition without supporting elements to balance that out.

I was also considering a change of view, from third person (limited) to third-person (omniscient). The plan would be to use a slightly more removed narrator to be able to set scenes, provide commentary, and so on.

Also wanted to see what ideas you guys had about making it work.

Thanks!