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Frankly, I have never thought to stop writing the "Checking Out at 5:15 PM" since I have to admit that it is my first original novel in a while and I am having fun writing it, but at the same time, I am thinking of making a new fanfiction.

Still, I don't have the energy to write both, so I am just asking for your opinion: should I stop my original novel for a bit?

As for what kind of fanfiction novel I wrote, it would be a mixed world, like Starting by Becoming Mangaka, or I Refuse to Become a scumbag, and for this novel, I am thinking of having Bocchi the Rock, Yofukashi no Uta, and probably HigeHiro?

Also, I might add an ability to have him travel to various worlds, which will be interesting.

Sometimes, I wonder why I only had this idea now, and not before I wrote the original story.

Still, as this happened, I am asking for your opinion, as I don't think the Checking Out at 5:15 PM will end soon, nor will the Suzuki.

Also, if I put HigeHiro, should I make Sayu remain as she is, or should I make her a virgin?

Yet, I have to say, the story will be gritty if I don't change Sayu's original background setting.

Comments

Elcooi

I never bothered to read checking out but I recommend u write that new story and keep sayu a virgin I don’t think people are gonna like it if she’s touched like in the original story

SteadyGuy

I read both, just do what you want bro.

Yabadabadoo

Don’t end Suzuki! So many potential worlds lol, and as long as you’re not overwhelmed writing between 2 or 3 stories and it doesn’t interfere with the quality of Suzukis story then go for it

Perapat Dsdbvhb

The atmosphere of wandering around at night with a female vampire in *Yofukashi no Uta* is really compelling. Perhaps more supernatural stories that don't focus heavily on combat—like *Bakemonogatari*, *Dark Gathering*, or *Reiwa no Dara-san*—should be added to the mix. As for Sayu's storyline, the setting could remain the same, but she could be paired with the original male lead as a secondary couple. It would be more fitting for Goto-san to be the protagonist's actual love interest; a beautiful, mature woman who is still a virgin is far more interesting than a runaway high school girl.

Rygurd

For now, Suzuki is my favorite. I'm waiting for your OG novel to be added to the collection tab so I can save it to read later. As for your new fanfiction, instead of having the character travel to various worlds, why don't you write another group chat fanfiction? Your last group chat story was a huge success, and to this day, it still has the most chapters out of all your works.

akikan40

Yeah, don't worry. Suzuki will be fine.

akikan40

It's good to know someone read my original.

akikan40

Hmm... how to say... it is just my opinion, but when I want to write something, there is this need for a drive that makes me want to write. So unless there is this drive which gives me confidence that this story will be good, I am too lazy to write. As for the chat group, it is because I have written a lot of it that I don't have much of a desire to write a similar story.

akikan40

Hmm.... Reiwa no Dara-san, you recommended something dangerous to me... As for Goto-san, you are right. I almost forgot about her since the story is mostly about Sayu. But, Bakemonogatari aside, is Dark Gathering good? I haven't watched it.

Perapat Dsdbvhb

It’s fun. They deal with the ghosts using techniques rather than fighting them head-on—it leans more towards solving mysteries.