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This update introduces a big profile overhaul. You can now keep track of your stats and your relationship dynamic in the profile screen. No more guessing. Additionally, we now have an achievements/milestones system. Due to the implementation of milestones and how stats are tracked, you will have to start a new game the next time you play. I apologize for the trouble and I will try to avoid doing that again.

New Profile

The profile setup may seem simple on the surface but it's the culmination of weeks of coding. First off is a system for tracking your physical traits. I have omitted nipple color and pubic hair (you may see the latter featured in tonight's content drop) as it just feels off to see those every time you open the screen. Those variables are neatly tucked away to be featured in NSFW scenes.

Your name will not necessarily update until after your MC chooses her final name toward the end of the Prelude. It's there that you can choose to keep the name from your first life or take on a new name. In certain routes, a name might be suggested for you by one or both of the love interests. There will also be a nickname system coming soon, both for your MC and the guys.

You'll now have dynamic descriptions of your traits, reflecting how your personality is changing night by night. Each axis has 4 descriptions and the ones I'll primarily be coding around. For example: High Daring, Moderate Daring, Moderate Measured, and High Measured. The descriptions are provisional. My creativity well was running dry when I wrote them. I'll likely tweak them before the end of the prelude, but not in a manner than will necessitate a new game.

You can also access your dynamics with similar descriptors.

Milestones System

The prelude and each act will have a variety of milestones. Most of the ones you'll encounter in the prelude are shared across all routes, though you will find a few unique ones depending on how you play.

Accessible via the bottom of the profile interface, this new system will also notify you when your intimacy leads to conception.

We'll likely be doing a separate menu option once your MC is pregnant where you'll be able to keep track of your pregnancy, transitioning into a child profile in Act III. The pregnancy happens fairly quickly in the rework, so if you have thoughts on what you'd like that profile to contain let me know and I'll make a note of it.

Dark Maiden Content Drop

There is new Dark Maiden content and a motherlode of Wyransith to attempt to decipher. This is definitely not all of Night III, there will be another even more sizeable chunk on the way, but between the profile overhaul, the abundance of Wyransith, and the spicy content it was all I had time for. I'm going to be moving on to work on Classic Mode tomorrow morning, then Fated Mates, then coming back to do more Dark Maiden this weekend.

This update is when your DM dynamic with Valdricht will really begin to swing and you'll start to see how differently he behaves toward your MC. Explore both options for a taste of what each dynamic will bring. Neither will lock you in yet, however you can get your dynamic high on both ends of the spectrum. Serax's dynamic shifts will be in the second half of the night. By Night IV, your dynamics will largely be in place.

I think the new dynamic descriptors in the profiles will also give players a great idea of where they want the needle to fall. You don't have to be 100%. I'm writing for both ends of the extremes, and also players who prefer a more balanced dynamic where their MC can swing either way depending on her mood.

Remember, you must start a new game or your profile will not work.

Wyransith translations

cyneth - to warm

drosketh - to break

gythyn - to hunger

kalar - to make/do

kaveth - to need

koryn - hard

kreleth - to fuck

krelven - cock

kyrven - scent

leyfryn - permission

mathyr - kind/type

salsyris - lust

skeleth - to finish/complete

tairel - delicate

thysselach - bed furs

val - with

veth talven - what if

zairyn - to sing (to feel [an emotion])

Whole bunch of new words and a lot of dialogue to play with! Now updated in alphabetical order!

Conclusion

LINK: Darksinger Edition

PASS: anja

The profile was a massive endeavor with a ton of coding behind it. If you notice any issues or it looks wonky on your device, let me know and I'll get it fixed in the morning. Thank you!

-Mortish

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Comments

out of the blue

Not going to spoil it for those that enjoy translating themselves but “Thy veskara eri thy'sal leyfryn ywen kreleth kavethes? Talven eri ywen tharran, eri ywen ceysar'vek,” has got me like 🥰🥰🥰

El Hays

"Thy ywen drosketh'vek, na'Valdricht? Aen ywen thy drosketh'vek?" banger line!!!!!!!!!

Ro

I won't be pursuing DRM after this update, since the update reconfirmed I'm really not into poly (Serax and I have more in common than he thinks 😂), but I wanted to commend you on how you write sex in general. I'm not a spice girl, but part of that is because people write sex so graphic, it feels more gratuitous than something that serves story (to me, anyway—just a writing preference!). I prefer implicitness, which often leads to sensuality, so it's fascinating how you strike a balance between implicit and explicit that doesn't make me go, "Aaaaand done." That said, I also played DMR to check out the new mechanics and I honestly love them! I think the descriptions are perfect, as is, and I love seeing the stats. The future nicknames and option to adopt a name the guys choose for you is adorable. One suggestion I have is to maybe alphabetize the Shadespeak terms you give us, so they're easier to find when decoding the dialogue. I feel like I'm back in my research days otherwise, where I have yet to write an annotated bibliography and am consulting my resources to understand the new topic, haha.

Vincentvanohno

This is bringing me back to when I took Italian in high school, I’m trying my hardest to translate but I have no clue what’s going on 😂 so excited for MC to learn the language!! Other than my own struggles with language I was so happy with the dark maiden update. It was so sweet how affectionate Valdricht was being with mc and the nsfw content fit the scene so well. I really liked mc finding out Val and Serax are intimate with one another so quickly and I liked Val extending a hand to invite her into the dynamic and her panicking with the repressed religious guilt and shame.

Scorpiuscircus

Ok, that was hot! Tho I am giggling a bit at Val unintentionally being Serax's pillow princess (I know it's not the dynamic and the reasons for him being not that reciprocal are diff, but...) Also full disclosure but my MC ended up cockblocking Valdricht based solely on the fact that in this house we do not comment on any statements we don't understand, sir! And by we I mean her and I both because I was on the mobile and switching back and forth between the tabs was too much of a hassle 😅 I WILL come back to it once I am on PC and my mini-glossary is in place. From peeping the route where MC answers the questions she doesn't understand like a reckless dum-dum, I do have to say that apparently, I adore the version of Valdricht who just pets MC on the head (and other places) a bit patronisingly 🤭 I feel like I do prefer DMR Val to Classic\Fated one 😂 Seconding Ro on the request to have the Shadespeak lists in alphabetical order vs chronological one! Makes looking up the words from the past posts easier, as well. + I have a small continuity (?) question. In the part where Serax asks Val if he's going to break the MC (if I intuited it correctly) there is a line "a persistent reminder of needs you don't fully understand and desires you can't reconcile with your faith" — isn't it a bit too defined on devout\defiant dynamic? My MC was (to no one's surprise) as defiant-leaning as it is possible as of rn, and it was a bit strange seeing her thinking of her faith all of a sudden. Even if she's amnesiac, wouldn't a self-forgotten rebel be more likely dwelling on, idk, how WOW it's a new and strange sensation than ruminate on faith? Since she probably doesn't have that much religious shame internally accumulated than her devout counterpart, amnesia or not.

Mortish

Wyransith is now alphabetized! I'll review that line and consider if it fits well. It might be better suited for the Classic MC because upon waking from Dream #2 she has a more thoughtful reflection on her faith, whereas Dark Maiden wakes and is immediately thrust into a sexual scenario. I will say that the MCs will generally be faithful regardless of your defiance choices until they reach the Miscilla Dilemma. The fallout from that scenario is what will define the evolution of her faith, be it fortified or broken. What I think is good about the new setup is that while the MC may have faith, she doesn't perceive it in the context of being a priestess who has taken vows, so she'll initially be less inclined to resist sexual advances.

Mortish

We'll have a lot of translations this weekend and I may be starting some sort of downloadable reference sheet for Dark Maiden players.

ayesleigh

The new menus and features are really cool! I like the trait and dynamic descriptions. I'm also really looking forward to the nickname system. The Wyransith is a fun puzzle! I'm looking forward to seeing how much I've managed to correctly discern. This line was a highlight (if I've gotten it right): "Ywen velushka nei sairith." He's prob only saying it to mock Serax but idc; I'm taking it and I'm running with it! 😆 Valdricht wasn't terrible! 🎉 The bit where MC wakes up to see the two of them ~*together*~ was kinda funny because I'd previously wondered if the two of them were fooling around when MC was conked out in Unbound Mode. ---- Small typo: "Another laugh bubbles up, but you're able to [squlech] it as Serax begins speaking."

Mortish

Alphabetized, ty! Yeah, MMF definitely isn't for everyone. I think the three storylines are doing a great job of covering all the bases for what readers will enjoy and I haven't found them cumbersome. Alternating every few days is a really nice rhythm. Glad you like how I write sex. I tend to favor an 80%/20% approach with 80% describing of the internal sensations/emotions and 20% describing what is actually happening. As someone who thoroughly enjoys a moderate amount of heat in romance, I'm turned off by writers who load their sex scenes with tons of anatomical descriptions and don't trust readers to fill in the gaps with their own fantasies. However, on the flipside I've read authors who completely avoid the anatomical and it just screams "writing sex scares me but I'm afraid my romance book won't sell as well if I don't so here's ten paragraphs of the protagonist's inner monologue as she's being vaguely made love to." It's frustrating because it can totally ruin a great story and it's like, why not just write sweet romance? Sweet is totally marketable and can be an enjoyable read even for us smut loving degens.

Mortish

Ty, I'll get that fixed. I'm so grateful to you guys for pointing those out, I hope it doesn't feel like you're guinea pigs for my first draft, I try really hard to catch them all. "Ywen velushka nei sairith." -- [She] [pet] [not] [is] he says as he's petting her, lol! In the regular poly storylines they're on a bit of a cold period when the MC arrives. It's something that Serax in particular will likely discuss with the MC at one point. They're in a similar spot in Dark Maiden, but Valdricht is aroused by the presence of the MC and less inclined to hide it. A lot of their exchange in Night III was Serax coping over Valdricht's sudden horniness and Valdricht leaning into it to be an asshole. Their Dark Maiden dynamic is quite toxic but it's part of the fun. Most of the early chapters are Serax and Valdricht using the MC to fuck with one another while she's largely oblivious to it all.

Scorpiuscircus

Yup, I remember you saying that MC will be religious no matter what, it's just when I read that line I went 'does babygirl remember enough of herself to experience religious guilt\confusion here? 🤔' , so I thought I'd point it out jic. Btw, are we getting Miscilla this chapter or sometimes in the next one? 👀

Star

Ah it’s so good!! Thank you so much for putting the translations in alphabetical for I have been jotting them down in my notes app in alphabetical order as a reference sheet LOL

sunday

sigh mc, my babyyy. poor thing is so confused and lost 😭 her waking up and watching that like 👁️👄👁️ and then rolling over and trying to go back to sleep had me dying tho, so relatable. Can I ask for lore reasons why they’re less restrained in this mode? Like yeah the captive and language barrier kinks for us hehe (fun) but is the world in general harsher in DMR and that’s why they’re more primal off-rip? I’m so curious to see how the world states differ from DMR/Regular-BoS outside of mc’s language, and also curious how Val/Serax’s lives differed before mc in this mode. Like will we have more monster encounters and general violence (I hope so) 🤔 Wyransith is very cool and I love it the more I read it. I was worried I would be doing homework but it’s veryyy intuitive. Unfortunately it’s left me in the position though where I know a lot of what they’re saying and my sweet submissive girl doesn’t 😭 to be fair she would have submitted either way but I’m just tsk tsking like girl you’re not a toy for them to play with 😤 fight back (she would never) Okay and lastly, the dynamics <333 Bound Mate is soo 😵‍💫 both me and my mc are cooked. But the dynamic differences are still fun and cool to read because you can see Val change his tactics in realtime lolol. It’ll be v interesting to see how far Veiled Mate MCs can push Val and what lengths he’s willing to go to and what games he’ll willing to play. I’m looking forward to their power play.

ayesleigh

Testing is at least partially what we're here for! The occasional error is nothing terrible -- it's a truth universally acknowledged that your eyes will kinda start glazing over after looking over your own words for so long, lol. Ha HA, I was right~ Holding onto that, but I'm also ready to chuck it at his head if he makes me regret complimenting him later. 😆 I believe it! I still remember the cold savagery that was "Ah, so you DO know how to make me come." I'm like, "Daaang Valdricht; I've probably said meaner things about Serax than anyone else who's played this game and even I thought that was an unnecessarily low blow." 💀 MC deserves a couples counselor license after all of this, honestly -- hang it up on the tent wall beside her Wyransith Language Proficiency Certification! 🏅

sunday

Oh and I did have a suggestion for the profile page which is that whichever stat is highest is the one that’s bolded maybe, whenever I open the profile my eyes automatically go to the bolded stats that are all along the right side. I love the written descriptions btw, I was going to suggest that the other day but you’re always steps ahead ~ it also makes it clear that you can be in the middle ranges!

Mortish

Not quite yet, but soon. It'll either be in the transition between Night III and IV or during Night IV.

Ro

Thank you so much, alphabetizing really helped (and now I want to smack Serax for his, "Eri'na krelven cyneth," if I translated it correctly and he essentially says, "To warm my cock"), and I'm glad the new set-up is working better for you 🩷. Ngl, it may be a poly thing for me in general, since I'm not into MFM/V-Polys either—I was telling Ayes this, but I guess I'm like Val in that I do not like to share or be shared 😂. Like, you convinced me to love you, and now expect me to fall for someone else? Like my wallet, my heart is stingy! This isn't a complaint, btw! I knew what I was getting into and I'm genuinely thankful for the different route options, and I'm still most likely going to do Classic mode to romance Serax, since I need to torment him by talking back. Also, if you tell me someone is trash, I HAVE to romance him. It's a matter of morbid curiosity and pride. And I actually know what you mean on both accounts! Too anatomical insults my intelligence, while very vague makes me go, "Did they do the deed or ???" I've seen this mainly in YA, but some adult books do it too, and it drives me crazy, especially when sex is considered a monumental step for the character. That said, one of my favorite sex scenes is literally two sentences, and that's because of the built-up to it, so I definitely think there is a way to make it obvious on what's happening, without making it graphic, and still satisfying.