Raven has a SwimNullge [Sketches] (Patreon)

You can see my progression in how I drew raven here. From a loose sketch, where I had a strong idea already, to a more "sturdy" drawing. I do lose a lot of fluidity and energy as I do my later passes, but I think I make up for it in terms of structure and rendering.

What do you think? Should I try to make my finished drawings more fluid, sketchier?