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This book is now published on KU. KU has rules requiring no more than 10% of a book be available by other means. Due to this restriction, I have removed this chapter.

If you wish to continue reading, please email me and I will send you the *.epub file for you to add to your Amazon device.

I'm sorry if this inconveniences you in any way. I am only doing this so I can remain in the KU program.

Thanks for your understanding.

AFK


Comments

Joe

He would offer the Plague Sire/n/ and the army a choice

Joe

he would err/or/ on the side of violence.

Rodney Carter

I'm a bit confused by the altering the course of an arrow line. It seems like an obvious warning about how the temporal shifters work, but Ruwen's analysis of Blapy's clues makes it seem like something deeper.

A. F. Kay

Without context this is confusing. I will just say by the end of the series I hope it makes sense.

BRB

—— “Did not stop. Shifted to past,” the creature said. Ruwen leaned back, shocked at the power of such an ability. He had wondered how the shield had stopped even his gravity waves. It made much more sense that it hadn’t stopped them, but shuffled the damage to another time. —— Not a big deal, but this seems imprecise to me, and Ruwen tends to be precise. The barrier does stop *some* things from going through it, like Ruwen’s body and the steam he created. I can’t remember if the fireballs he shot off bounced around or disappeared through the barrier, but now I’m curious.

A. F. Kay

Excellent point!!!!! I need to clean up the verbiage to make it clear and consistent! Thank you!!!!!