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This book is now published on KU. KU has rules requiring no more than 10% of a book be available by other means. Due to this restriction, I have removed this chapter.

If you wish to continue reading, please email me and I will send you the *.epub file for you to add to your Amazon device.

I'm sorry if this inconveniences you in any way. I am only doing this so I can remain in the KU program.

Thanks for your understanding.

AFK

Comments

JAMES Bateman

Mmmmmm yes cliffhangers, my favorite :)

Samuel Strode

I was thinking I would have one less chapter and end on a small cliffhanger but he steps into space? Really?! I am very glad to see the different parts being pulled together Why did Tarot call you ‘old man.’?— I missed that last time I just thought it a quirk or a joke from another story that you were referencing

Samuel Strode

I know what those three wishes I would choose are but that wouldn’t make for drama. 1) get rid of the planet killing explosion 2) heal my channels 3) divine transformation potion but then creepy uncle wouldn’t come to steal Fractal wouldn’t make something better the apocalypse hoop wouldn’t be a trap to snare creepy uncle and then this out be the last book and as a reader I need more books

Devin

Incredible chapter and hit the points I feel really needed to be hit between ruwen and hamma. Thank you! - Stranger Pings

Lena M. Lucente

I love the way you revealed all the new stuff. Great chapters and I really enjoyed reading them. Great job. Can't wait for next week updates.

Pannath

Sift doesn't really have much reason to be jealous. If he actually tried to learn things then it would be different. It's like someone lying on a bed being jealous of a person walking, but they're too lazy to get up(it's not that they can't walk). If Sift exercised his mind and tried to get smarter, everything would get better. He's just coasting on natural talent.

A. F. Kay

I think the old man comment will cause confusion for people who have not read Hamma's Last Prayer...or even if they did it is easy to forget.

A. F. Kay

I never looked at from that angle. I will spend some time thinking about that. Thanks!