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When you hit the bottom, the only out is up!

I have a rough ending in place now, but Im open to suggestions on where this is going!

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Panel 1 The room is almost all Isaeblle and water, she scoops up Dave in her hand.

Isa “You don’t get to die until I say so silly”

Panel 2 The entire panel is now just Isabelle, shes hunched over and pushing out of the panel frame. Theres a small action bubble with the chibi dragon blowing up a chibi isabelle like a balloon, shes BIG and near bursting.

Isa “Ok this room isn’t getting any bigger and that statue isnt giving up.”

Panel 3 We’re on the surface, theres a goat or sheep nibbling on a plant in the desert.

Panel 4 The ground cracks open slightly, upheaving. The animal gets tossed into the air.

Panel 5 Wide shot. Isabelle erupts from the ground, rocks and dirt flying everywhere. Shes standing up, now easily 30-40 feet tall. (this panel is meant to be more action posed with her standing up and out of the ground. She’ll lay down/fall over in the next page)

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Az-As

What if it starts raining?

Az-As

Plus she still wears the necklace

Dendrak

"You don't get to die until I say so, silly" is an adorable and sexy thing for her to say here. Which is funny because I think in any other situation it would be terrifying.