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New Video on Ben Shapiro's Garbage Novel (Patreon)

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2019-09-29 18:31:50

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2026-06

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Hey everyone!

The new video is up, and it's been so warmly received I'm thinking I may need to dive into some more Shapiro fiction in the future.

As a little bonus, here's a tiny bit I cut from my script:

On page 86 we get a story of how Soledad started her ranch. She “Built it up from nothing”.

But back on page 41, we found out that Soledad inherited this ranch from her father-in-law, and it was he who “Worked it up from nothing”. In the grand scheme of things, this doesn’t matter since it’s Soledad’s ranch either way, but it raises a very important question: Did anyone proof read this?

I also cut out a small section where I discussed Samuel Richardson's Pamela. Apologies to all those fans of bad 18th century literature out there!

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Reviewing Ben Shapiro's Garbage Novel

Go to https://nordvpn.com/jose to get 70% off a 3 year plan and use code JOSE for an extra month for free. Protect yourself online today! Ben Shapiro writes bad books, but only one is clearly mark as fiction. This disturbing vision presents a world filled with terrorism, liberals, and people of colour, wrapped in the sickly package of spotty prose and confused plotting. Characters vanish from the plot without a trace, narrative threads go nowhere, and the basic facts of each character’s history change from chapter to chapter. At first I was wondering why this book didn’t have a copyeditor, but by the end I was convinced there was no editor at all. Or if this editor existed, instead of working on improving this book, they must have turned to drinking and fallen into a deep depression to think that their life had come to this point. Everyone and anyone who helped perpetrate this fiasco of a novel should be ashamed of themselves. All that said, it made me laugh. Follow me on Twitter: https://twitter.com/JoseNotAJay Ask me a question on Curious Cat: https://curiouscat.me/JoseNotAJay Contribute to my Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/JoseOnYoutube