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Pentious's heaven Trial #2 (Patreon)

Published:
2024-12-02 05:00:00
Edited:
2025-03-04 05:06:01
Imported:
2026-06
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N30N☣

I love the trend of Emily getting taken out to restore order, part of the inspiration for my AU Emily

Nexus

I just saw this for the first time ever... this is extremely out of character for Sera, even for an AU. Like why would she do that? I really hate this.

Grimmie02

Hey! It’s just a fanfiction lol

Nexus

I'm not saying it's awful xD just doesn't make sense to me

Nexus

To be clear, I'm glad other's enjoy it. It's just, is there at least going to be some background on why Sera decided that was like the ONLY option? Other options; 1. Depower Emily 2. Imprison 3. Have monitored 4. Sent to Hell 5. Subdued at moment through force 6. Crippled Like... I'm sorry, I just don't get this.

Grimmie02

Actually, the first image I drew was of Emily being pierced by a spear. But since it got a good response on Twitter, I kept going with it. As for why Sera wants to kill Emily, I haven’t really been able to express that clearly yet. Sorry about that 👀👌

Nexus

I hope you can at least do a back story on that, yeah. Even in a Twitter post. Like maybe Emily, like in the trailer of Season 2, was visiting Hell too often and was seen as a possible threat due to nativity and leaking Heaven info.

Grimmie02

Actually, the story itself isn’t that important — I just want to convey a certain feeling. It’s okay if you don’t understand it. It’s kind of like a music video with no dialogue… Since I started Patreon, I haven’t been continuing this story. For now, it’s just on hold 😉

Grimmie02

But I’m surprised you’re seeing this comic for the first time, lol. You’ve been supporting me since March!!!

Nexus

I had A LOT of stuff going on xD Storytelling is executing feelings in a way where it feels deserved and grand. It can even be done in one scene. I can't promise this will be liked, but; Emily: "Sera?" *as she sees what's happening with Pentious* Sera: "Emily, leave, I don't have time to explain this to you." Emily: "That's a little too bad, Sera!" *as she steps in her way* Sera: "Emily... why do you always make this so hard?" Emily: "You're asking ME that? Sera, you made it my JOB to bring joy, yet you never ask or even humor my advice. I'm supposed to be working equally WITH you! Why are you always pushing me away? Why do you always do THIS?" *as she points to Pentious* Sera: "You don't understand what's necessary-" Emily: "Then HELP me understand, help me learn what it's like to be in your shoes! To feel what you feel, to think what you think!" *as she starts to tear up* "Because I'm so damn lost, Sera, I feel like you don't care about me, like you hate me, and it breaks my heart!" *as tears fall* Sera: *as she signals Lute to stop* "...Emily..." *as she holds her close* "I could never hate you. Because if I did, I would have to introduce you into my world. To introduce you to what it means to make decisions that make you feel cold and empty. That is not what you deserve. So I'm asking you please, just stop prying. Stop trying to break into my Hell." Emily: "I can't... because I love you, Sera." *as she hugs her back* "I care about you and Heaven. Don't you?" Sera: "... .... ...So much more than you can ever imagine... it's why I think I'm about to hate myself forever." *in a swift motion she pushes Emily off, what feels like s pause in time as eyes lock, feathers fly, Sera creates an energy blade that pierces through the one light in her life left; Emily.* Emily: "...!!!" Sera: "I so badly wish I could've just been you..." Emily: *collapses as her life fades*