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I can't believe i'm about to get nerdy over such an insignificant thing which i don't really care all that much about, but here's the deal. One of my long time supporters AranaEscarlata commissioned me to draw the Jackpot's latest design and boy oh boy it definitely feels like not a single editor at Marvel has given a shit about her look. Like, i know it's a common thing to have inconsistencies in characters looks (different books, different artists), and it's not such a huge deal overall, especially if a character has existed for years/decades. But in this case it's like her first appearance and she looks different on almost all of the variant covers of a single issue. That concept sketch by Humberto Ramos looks very rushed and confusing. Does she have white sleeves? Or grey? Or maybe they are purple? Or is that so because of the lighting? Also what's that on her wrist? Is that a bracelet or just a cuff of her shirt? Oh wait, there are two of those actually! Black boots? Not really! Ramos himself abandons that element in the next cover.  Like, again, it's not the end of the world, but I think it's important to have some consistency for a newly introduced character's look for at least like, several issues. If you want them to stick around, that is.As for my own opinion on the design itself: not a fan as you might've noticed, because I decided to slightly tweak it in my artwork to make working on it more fun and pleasant for me. :) I feel like a voluminous stark white sleeves create an overall better silhouette for the character and give off some retro fashion vibes. And it settles the thing with her cuffs. I also decided to slightly emphasize the shape of the black part on her chest so it would look like lapels of a suit jacket, which again plays into the whole suits/casino/evening dress thing. Maybe I would even go as far as giving her some kinda shortened suit jacket/vest, but I'll save it for another time. Golden trim around sunglasses to support that golden device on her forearm, because I refuse to accept ugly yellow squares on her thighs. To be completely transparent: i haven't read any comic book in a HOT minute and (for better or worse) my opinion on the current spider-man story is formed mostly through other people's tweets. From afar it looks like a complete mess and I kinda feel bad for die hard fans of the series.p.s. they cared so little that they didn't notice an accidental purple brush stroke at the bottom of that initial sketch for the official announcement lol (last pic)

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Lazarus0024

My goodness is your take on it an improvement

Bryan

God damn. This is so pretty

thirsty hours

thanks, but i didn't do that much! and i think the costume could use a complete rework from scratch, but i'm not that invested in it. :)

Lazarus0024

Even just the touch up with the matching color baggy sleeves and the uniform red do so much

TheFlashGL

Your point of view on the matter is very interesting and it's very cool to see you express your feelings about it Regardless of what you think of the design your drawing is amazing (as usual) ❤️ And speaking as a die hard Spider-Man fan, yes, it's a hot mess and it's quite frankly awful to read every month, thank god for Hickman on Ultimate Spider-Man

Lazarus0024

But also yeah as costumes go I definitely would have to rank her Spinneret suit above this

TheMystMan

Ayyy so good!! Love how you’ve been experimenting lately!

Metal Gear Ray

Your version is better than Ramos that's for sure, confusing outfit they made for her?

Diana

I think the sleeves might be transparent/translucent in nature? So they give a bit of the skin coloring underneath but also have a shimmering white type finish? Maybe?

bruitist

I abandoned reading ASM during the Slott era and haven't looked back. At some point, I'll get around to reading Mary Jane & Black Cat, because MacKay's Black Cat run was amazing, but that's about it.

Valdrin Emini

Nah your 100% right. Hell your Art style makes the design a little bit better at least.

Pious Erika

Well done, good options.

Kyle Rayner

Jesus, it looks bad. Your take is Hella better. The hell.

thirsty hours

Maybe, but then again: it is not indicated well at all.

thirsty hours

And I quite like Ramos, but this one’s a miss for me.

thirsty hours

And that one’s also not perfect! At least the very first version, I dunno if she has any newer one.

thirsty hours

Thanks a lot! Yeah, I should check the new USM. :)

thirsty hours

I fell off after like a dozen of issues into the Spencer’s run and don’t see myself getting back into ASM anytime soon. Maybe I’ll check some side series or limited runs later down the road.

Lazarus0024

I think Kristafer Anka did some redesigns for her cameo in ATSV but I think that's it