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This was an EXTREMELY experimental project for me! I know its only 7 pages but I have been working on this for a whole week testing out brushes, fonts, textures, linewidths...It may not look exactly like a Kree webcomic in the future...but I genuinely think it's close!

I have officially decided not to make it in typical 'scroll down' format, (Like my other minicomics) because I might want to be able to print it one day. Having to reformat the panels in the future seems like a nightmare. (I've seen the Lore Olympus book in person...it's...not what I'd want to have to deal with.) I will make them as wider pages while keeping vertical eye flow in mind.

The main thing I'm still struggling with is the grayscale + contrast. I have a plot driven reason not to make the comic in color, and I initially wanted to make it similar to manga, where its essentially all line art, pure black shadow, and screentones for inbetween grays...but the thing stopping me is that Clara's hair would have to be "blank." (Like Uraraka's hair in My hero Academia, she's a brunette but her hair is not filled in.) This would make people continue to think she's blonde and I get a bit annoyed at the repetitive "SHE'S NOT BLONDE????" comments. Tones are also pretty important in the story...so having everything be mostly the same...might not suit the plot. Idk. We'll see what happens.Anywho! Enjoy!

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Goofy Ahh

😳😳😳😳 Peepee

KPCW

I love the educational aspect of it! I had questions and this kind of answered them all! 💛 Also, Kree’s little face on the second page makes me so happy!!

Comic_lover11w

If I had the ability to send gifs I’d drop the “The more you know” star right now, this comic came out great and it gave me some knowledge so bonus.

Asher

nice 👌

Fru blom

I adooore this😍 Cute and informative and spicy at the same time - amazing🙌🏻🤌🏻✨️

MajorMagenta

I’ve always thought Clara was a brunette, idk why people thing she’s blonde lol you do shading on her hair like comics do.

DonnyBoy

Geni-whadda right to the face on page 3 made me Crack up a bit, Thanks for the Lore corner Scribble Mama!

🌻 Wolfie 🌻

I love this! Kree's so cute and getting so excited. I love that he carried her away to their nest lol

Fru blom

Also, thank you for sharing some insights on your thought process and progress with the comic. It’s really fascinating to read🙏 I’m confident you will find the best solution!!!

Gi

Oooo I like the slightly less sketchy lean these comics have, you're art style is very pretty <3

Percy Haas

This was so cute, and absolutely beautiful!

Kota

I get the greyscale problem 100%, and normally I try to just use any type of grey that isn't too dark if you get what I mean. I like using the transparency feature to dull down the grey I use in hair, then I use the eyedropper tool to take the color of the hair when it's transparent to make it the same color but 100% full and not transparent. I hope that helps some, love the lore corner as always!! It's really well drawn and the brushes you used look amazing ^^

ranicakes

Clara’s smile at the end is adorable!! But this was such a cool way to show off the education aspect of harpy anatomy!! <3

Nobody

DICK WAS INCOMING INDEED

ecchi_mochi

This absolutely helps me thank you for your input!

Kota

Of course! Again I get the struggle, and I figure a light (or very light) shade of grey will make more of a difference then not yknow? I'm glad I was able to help :D

SleepyOwl

10/10 I have been educated

Dani Donut

I love this so much!

Tai Korczak

Being informational but also deliberately getting Kree so worked up is diabolical

Juwelz

Bird boi and bisexual queen are back in business yall 😎

serakatto

I feel you on the greyscale struggle. I ended compromising between a manga inspired style and a full greyscale pallet for my comic and it’s been working out great

Keats

This is cute as hell. I love them! Also heads up there is a typo of "on" rather than "of" before the the words "enclosed space." I don't mind it but wanted to letcha know!

shizu

awww they are sooo adorable!! it’s an interesting concept to present harpy anatomy!

Incomplete Machine

It's extremely convenient that it's always the perfect size XD I wish it were so for humans

ecchi_mochi

Sigh I read it over and over and still didn't catch every little mistake haha. Thanks!

Victoria BG

Thank you for your brave sacrifice, Clara 🫡

LucidRen

This is starting to give me ideas for the species I’m trying to create

Briochepie

“To the bed with you” XD

Victoria BG

Actually, this comic made me realize. They must have to get really creative when it comes to the swap au, since harpy clara would have no natural lubricant

Minakyu

More more more more more 🥹

Highlord Vyrana

THE LORE, IT'S SO COOL! Also, very interesting! I love the different stages <3

Eli Smith

Very good use of speculative biology

DREAMMARE _

Kree’s cute face “geni-wada” 🥺