This is the end. (I'm joking) (Patreon)

(for those who are too lazy to read it all, just scroll down to the end of this too long post.)

So, I had some feedback on tumblr via inbox, some new players pointing out the typos, multiple wrong pronouns etc. in the prologue. I also received some feedback about chapter 3, some was great, constructive, kind, energetic, and neutral, while a few others were something alright, lmaoooo.

I think it's time for a rewrite, and I'm letting you know first because I feel more comfortable here. I won't change anything plot-wise; I've always been clear about that. But there are probably a lot of things I didn't add that could've helped players understand some stuff better. I tend to forget no one can read my mind, and I can't expect them to.

I gotta be honest, I was a bit bummed by some feedback in my inbox. I deleted the ones that really stung, you know, the ones where they start with 'I don't wanna be rude, but' and then proceed to be rude, HAHAHHAHAHA. There were only two, but two with so many nasty words, it was enough to delete without even bothering to finish reading (even if I was itching to read it all). The rest was just people ranting, cursing at me while telling me they wanna hug me, analyzing the whole chapter, screaming at me, threatening me in a loving way, ( I know, yes, it sounds strange, but love it anyway) and making me laugh, so I got better pretty fast, tbh.

So, about that rewrite. I think it'd be better now that I have a better grasp of everything. I've become much more comfortable with english than I was months ago, and I don't want to scare away new players with this atrocious prologue. I scared myself when I saw the actual amount of wrong pronouns/typos in it. I don't even know how you guys could put up with it without having your eyes burning lol.

The shorts will still be rolling, no changes here, and when I'm done with the prologue, I'll post it here for Lover Tier first, then Crush Tier. I'm not sure how fast or slow I'll be, but I'm gonna take my time to add choices and some text flavor. If you have any requests or things you'd like to see added in the prologue, now's the time. (I can't promise to fulfill everyone's wish, though.)

You can send those requests or advice or stuff to my tumblr inbox or dm or in the comments here or whatever feels comfortable for you!

Now, about the shorts: El's is done; I just gotta code it (6,5k words). Athiel's NSFW short is done and coded (~7k words). I'm currently working on L's NSFW bonus short, which I started days ago and kept adding some things while writing El and Athiel's shorts. I'll start Ekissa's short tomorrow. And I'll finish Eki and L's shorts before posting everything and startin the rewrite.

For those who just wanna know what's going on without having to read it all: I go on about some feedback, both good and rude. I'm doing a rewrite, so if you have any requests or things you’d like to see added in the prologue, send them here or on Tumblr. The shorts will keep rolling each month. I’m done with El and Athiel’s shorts and will start Eki’s tomorrow.

Have a splendid day/afternoon/evening everyone!