Progress update (Patreon)
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Alright, I'm making a progress update mainly because I need to yap with you (bear with me please), and because I wanted to share a few snippets. Sooo, chap 1 is going faster than the prologue, because I stopped caring about every single sentence like I said I would. It's kinda hard sometimes when I see how paragraphs could be turned much smoother, but I need to carry on so I can get to the new chap.
I've added some stuff here and there (got you some snippets). Here's what I remember from the top of my head:
Tiny scene added with Athiel and MC if you decide to wait in the car instead of going to your house immediately to see what's going on (right before the confrontation scene with Juliet).
Scene added where you have the choice to slap Juliet back or not.
Tiny scene extended if you're on the kids route instead of the Lazin parents route, and only if you decided to slap Juliet.
Choice added for one of the V-poly routes when everyone cooks dinner together.
One route added for one of the V-poly routes between T/MC/Ekissa (I'm working on it rn).
And that's about it.
Re-reading my 'old' work—which isn't that old, mind you—was an interesting experience. Reminded me not to put too many descriptions, so I don't drown you guys in details and potentially bore you. I just gotta find a good balance without falling into something too monotone, like a shopping list being read. Like 'they do that. they look up, they see that. they're surprised.' you know what I mean?
That being said, I started implementing Eki/MC/T V poly in chap 1, as I've listed before. Nothing crazy since it's just the start of the game, obviously haha. It's a breath of fresh air. Something new to write, with romance in the air—not so much, but still.
I'm still working on the T/MC/Ekissa V poly route rn (when MC has the choice to hang out with one of the ROs—two in this case). Please ignore the variable names zekhfvzeufb—I don't really think too deeply about them, and I usually write the first thing that comes to mind.
ALSO, I'm working on Ekissa's POV on the side. Nearly done with this one. I'll get you a demo update soon too (for Lover Tier, as usual); I just need to finish the poly path so you'll have something fresh to read (if poly routes interest you, that is).