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Author note: For current readers: I've edited this chapter a lot, changing some of the things, and making it so Irwin is leaving room for what will be his next heartcard. If you don't feel like re-reading it, the short of it is that I've weaved in more of the plague bits, while changing some of the card stuff. I have also cut off the last bit, dealing with Greldo's shadow card because by now this chapter is already 6000 words. Also changed the title to more match the vibe of the chapter. For those worried: There will also be a new chapter at the usual time, in the evening.--For future readers! Make sure you came from ch403 and not 399! There were some edits, and if you used the regular patreon interface, it might be you have just skipped chapters 400, 401, 402 and 403. In this case, click this link to get to ch 400 and continue from there. If you are reading from the library mode this issue will not arise.-----CHAPTER 404: Preparing for large guests-----"So… you mean you need to get your third soulcard, or we can't bring more?" Greldo asked.

Irwin nodded, rubbing his head, trying to get rid of the headache. He glanced around the small pocket of calm, a section of the portal gallery that had remained intact within the storm. All of the ships that had been in his soulscape were now blissfully hovering there, most on the Bigbelly and the three other giant merchant vessels that now joined their fleet of close to thirty ships. 

It was almost a year since they had left Suderfuix, and in the last few months, their journey had started slowing down.

I can't believe how easy the first half of the journey was, he thought, looking around the ships. Each was covered or filled with a cloud of tiny soulforce signatures, representing a person.

Irwin was glad he didn't have to be there on ships meant to hold only a tenth of the people now crowding them. No, he was glad that he, Greldo, and Ambraz were alone on The Nocturna, though he felt a little bad for the others. The rest of his crew and friends were keeping the people on the ships in line.

"It's a miracle you can bring all of these people at all," Ambraz rumbled. "I'm starting to wonder just what the central branches have been withholding from us. There's no way they don't know that stacking certain soulforce sensitivity cards atop cards that expand your soulforce will increase a soulscape's stability to this point."

"Yeah, they probably know," Irwin agreed. "It's why all those card types are always unavailable, picked by nobles and rich merchant families to be moved to their central branch worlds. We should thank Brazardian and some of the others who helped us when we see them again."

If we see them again, he thought.

He kept looking around the crowded fleet, still having a hard time believing it was now home to close to ten thousand Yuurindi and almost double that many survivors, most of whom were malnourished messes. He knew he'd have to move them all back into his soulscape soon, and the mere thought of the headache that would bring him made him shudder.

Perhaps I should have left some of them, he thought, knowing full well he wouldn't have. 

Not yet, at least. As long as he could hold them in his soulscape and move them from partially intact section to partially intact section, he would. He wouldn't allow them to die for nothing if he could help it. Just the images of the harbors devoid of life, littered with corpses, and crawling with Addled would haunt him for a long time. Men, women… children.

The images of the tiny bodies especially made him clench his hands, thinking of his own children.

We can't bring any of them with us unless we find a cure or the cause, a stubborn part of him thought.

I know, Irwin thought before realizing he was starting to talk to himself.

"Not a good sign," he muttered.

"What?"

"Nothing."

He rubbed his head as his mind moved over the last few months.

After that first desolate harbor, they had found many more as they moved deeper into the area between the central branches and the Langost branch's outer leaves. The harbors and worlds became smaller and less populated, even if they ignored the decimation of the plague.

Still, they had begun finding more and more Yuurindi. The hounded, gene-culled people, had spread out away from the center, and although many couldn't, enough, had managed to get up to an Emerald rank.

The other thing they found as they moved further out were ever more worlds decimated by the Soulforce Devouring Plague, or Soulplague, as people had begun calling it. 

Why the plague seemed to have hit harder in the less populated area was something Irwin didn't understand yet, but they had learned some things.

Those that had survived all had, at a minimum, an emerald-rank heartcard. Sadly, those could still carry the disease and merely died slower than the others. Only those with an emerald soulcard or ruby-rank heartcard or above were totally immune.

As soon as they had learned this, Undiri had contacted as many of her offspring as she could, telling them to spread the news. It had tired the elderly woman out immensely, however, and except for the news that the plague was spreading everywhere, she had been unable to stay in contact longer than a few moments. Still, those moments had been enough to learn some other worlds had picked up on it on their own.

It had caused a big change in mentality in those worlds.

As the realization had set in that only high-rank cards kept people alive, many had stopped caring for future growth and began slotting what they could find. Sadly, with barely any cardsmiths still around in these outskirts, even those lucky enough to find a compatible emerald-ranked or above card hadn't been able to find a smith to reforge their handcards to a heartcard.

Sadly, most of the worlds they came across hadn't learned this until it was too late, leaving a few survivors amongst the graves of family and friends. Although some wanted to stay, many begged to be taken away to any place that wasn't the graveyard their harbors had become.

The last thing they had learned was that every affected world's exit portal had closed. Not most. Not a lot. But every. Single. One.

It was too much of a coincidence, but they were unable to unearth why, and Undiri's tiresome attempts to find one of her offspring that new had yet to bear fruit.

Irwin was snapped out of his hazy, headache-induced thoughts when Greldo spoke up.

"We could go scouting for an unopened world and just bring them there?" his friend said. "We can't bring them with us either way, and you are almost at your max. We aren't even back yet, and we will find more if we continue… We barely reached this section-" he waved around them.

Irwin knew that Greldo wasn't just talking about the survivors they had found but also the Yuurindi and he sighed.

"We need to figure out why some worlds aren't infected and others are," he said. "Even if we can find a rank-three world, which I highly doubt, we can't just leave them there."

Greldo took a deep breath, then exhaled explosively. "Still no idea what is causing it?"

Irwin glanced at one of the smaller ships hovering at the back of the group. The soulforce of those on it was odd. It wobbled and resonated, sometimes speeding up as if trying to spin up to an explosion. Only a handful of stable soulforce resonances were on that ship, moving among the few hundred infected people who were slowly getting sicker.

They had brought them along, and the handful of people they had found with knowledge about carded diseases, plagues, and curses were searching for a way to stop it. So far, they had found nothing.

Irwin knew he'd have to head back there soon to reforge ruby-rank heartcards for those who would die otherwise. As he thought of that, he felt his giantself flip through another stack of cards. The sole benefit of moving among the desolate harbors had been that they had started finding large amounts of cards. Bad ones, mostly, with either useless or close to useless abilities, but that didn't matter for most people. Not anymore.

"Irwin?"

Irwin shook his head, recalling the question Greldo had asked.

"No, we didn't learn anything more. It is a carded plague, created by an emerald rank soulcarded or a soulskilled of equal power. Having an emerald-rank heartcard is enough to survive for a lot longer, though most of those are still infected and carry the disease to others," Irwin said, slowly summing up what they knew. "Those that are infected are highly contagious, though the details on how they spread the plague are scarce. The best we have found is that something in their cards seems to be causing the ambient soulforce to propagate the plague to all others within a few dozen feet. Having a ruby-rank heartcard or above makes you immune, just like an emerald-rank soulcard. Hancards, no matter how high, offer no protection."

"Which is why we have been reforging heartcards for the Yuurindi," Ambraz grunted. "The problem is, not all of them can hold even emerald-ranked heartcards."

"And if they are infected and too weak, they die," Greldo grunted. "Because of that dissonance thing you told me about."

"Yeah," Irwin said, slowly feeling his headache abate. "Also, while in my soulscape, the disease seems to be dormant. I can feel it in the people that have it, but there's nothing more that I can do.

Irwin shivered as he recalled the first time he'd brought an infected person into his soulscape. He'd not even realized until they appeared, and he felt something horribly wrong with their soulforce. His first instinct had been to eject them, but then he'd sensed how his own soulforce had wrapped around the infected. It had compressed them, and he'd instinctively known that whatever the plague was, it wasn't nearly powerful enough to harm him- no matter how many infected he brought inside his soulscape. A good thing, as by now, there were hundreds.

Thinking about his soulscape, he focused on it. It was already starting to recover from having moved around dozens of ships and tens of thousands of people. Not that he could move again just yet. It would probably take a day for him to fully recover this time, at which point they could move to another safe pocket that Greldo had scouted.

Irwin closed his eyes and let his full attention slip to his otherself, who was hovering above his soullake, softly playing his soulstrum guitar to soothe himself and his soulscape. 

Five percent more, he thought, looking at his nearly-full soullake. He'd been creating heartcards nonstop, but that still didn't explain the speed at which it was filling. 

He let his minder for a while before nodding.

"I think you are right," he said.

He sensed Ambraz jump into his soulscape, joining him above the lake, and he looked at his bonded friend.

"It's the people in my soulscape. Somehow, having them there is filling my soullake."

"I know," Ambraz said, hovering beside him. "And it's also causing your soulscape to expand. It's as if you are training it, forcing it to grow."

Irwin knew what he meant as he let his focus wander to the distant borders of his soulscape. The barrier there was slowly recovering, cracks healing, the thick fog-like cover returning to block the area beyond. Even now, it was expanding, but only slowly. It was his natural growth, that which he gained due to his titan's heartcard. As soon as the people returned, it would accelerate. 

"The problem, if you can even call it that, is that your soullake is increasing too. This means that your next soulcard will require even more soulforce," the Ganvil said. "Then again, it also means you get more powerful."

Irwin glanced down at the distant edges of his soullake. They were rocky, crumbling, and jagged, with a mass of dry sand in certain areas that sloped down into the lake as if trying to form beaches. The dark sand had begun accruing from both the cracked edges of the lake's edge itself and from being blown in from the enormous volcanic mountain range that dominated one side of his soulscape.

"I wonder what will happen when my soullake is filled," he said before turning and flying to his giant-sized house. It was still on the edge of the lake near the foothills that led into the volcanic mountains. About a mile to the side was the small stone village he and Ambraz had made for the survivors.

Well, I can hardly call it small anymore, he thought, letting his gaze drift over the hundreds of two and three-story buildings. Filled with simple quarters, each had a small room at the bottom that stored rations.

Rations. Another thing they had almost too much of by now. As little food as some worlds had, they had found a few harbors on farming worlds that had not been able to offload their stocks for years. These worlds, by themselves, wouldn't have been able to feed all of the dead they had come across... but it was plenty for those Irwin had brought. He absently scanned the enormous amount of food stocked in the town's central building. Its presence was nothing compared to the ships and the people, so he left it there during these quiet moments.

"Let's go back to work," Ambraz said softly.

Irwin sighed, realizing he was hovering above the town, looking around.

"Yeah," he said, turning around and rushing to his own house.

A short while later, he sat down at his table, staring at the three spread-out sets of cards. 

"So… what do I do?" he muttered, staring at the sets of cards on the table.

It was the question they had been talking about, arguing over for months now, but their thinking time was quickly running out.

"Whatever we do, I need more stability," he said, pointing at one of the stacks. "We could double down on my soulscape size..."

Ambraz didn't answer, and Irwin hummed as he examined the cards, all of which were only around Topaz and needed more work before he could actually use them. There were four, each among the most expensive and rare cards that he had remaining. Two would increase his soulscape's size over time, while two, which, when combined, would allow him to push his soulscape slightly into the real world, creating some sort of aura around him. They meshed well, but there was something about them...

It would leave two more cards, one of which would need to be the core of his fourth heartcard, as none of these four was good enough for that task.

"Or go for more utility and focus," he continued, tapping the second group of cards. Those would give him a combination of three cards to combine steam and Pyroflux together with soulforce, letting him create an ever larger area of steam. If he could find cards that let him condense that steam, he could use it as a control option on the battlefield… and the fact that he'd get Pyroflux in his soulscape would be a happy addition. Many of those in the town had fire-typed cards by now, either those he reforged or those they had managed to barter from others. Having some Pyroflux rivers would allow them something to do. The problem was that choosing his next heartcard based on that just felt... wrong.

"No. Besides, I'd need to find three more cards," he muttered, tapping the group and causing them to disappear.

He focused on the smallest stack, one with only two cards. It was a more recent idea that he had come up with two weeks ago, one focused on defense. One card had the image of a shield, while the other showed six small blades.

"I still think this is a good direction," he said, rubbing his chin. It will give me another summon… a shield to combine with my existing cards so I can grow it while adding more clone-like cards, in this case, to create a large number of shields."

It was an idea born from his thoughts on the upcoming war. He'd been discussing it with Greldo and Ambraz, wondering what he would do if he had to fight. Something he knew was likely because he was one of the strongest warriors they had. What if he wasn't up against a single powerful adversary but an army? Or many ships?"

Ambraz had been quietly listening and now flitted to the table, landing with a solid thud. Irwin knew his friend was as conflicted as he was and didn't fully approve of any of the ideas.

"You could also go for another eyebeam attack and let it be powered by your ridiculous soulforce," he said. "Sometimes offense is the best defense."

Irwin nodded, leaning back in the chair. It wasn't the first time Ambraz had offered the idea.

"Yes, but I already have offense, don't I? My hammer, multiple types of fire and flame, steam, and I can use my soulstrum guitar to blow up large groups of enemies. It's my defense that is lacking. Not my personal defense, but what if I have to help an army? My friends?"

"It's possible you don't have to fight," Ambraz said. "Remember that you can reforge cards for others, creating powerful warriors like that."

Another thing they had discussed before, and Irwin held back a weary sigh. "Yes, but without a way to rapidly fill up their soullakes, they will be limited to a single high-rank heartcard or multiple lower ones," he said. 

"Which is why there's another option," Ambraz said, flying to where a single card lay on the table.

And here we go again, Irwin thought, rubbing his head as he almost glared at the card Ambraz landed next to.

It had been among those he'd gained over the last few months. Initially, it looked like just another useless utility card. That was until Ambraz had examined it and found it had a very interesting ability.

"Use this as the core and create a heartcard to fill the soullakes of others with my own soulforce," he said, knowing what Ambraz was suggesting.

"It's similar to how we create new Ganvils," Ambraz said, sounding excited. "At some point, our own growth takes so long. Using our purified soulforce to create more young Ganvils is a more useful way to spend it. With how fast you generate soulforce, you could fill a regular emerald-ranked soullake in a few weeks, maybe two months."

Irwin sighed, knowing they were going to have another long discussion.

He split his focus back into two parts, one part to continue his discussion with Ambraz and the other to talk to Greldo.

As he looked up, he saw his friend leaning on the railing, staring into the darkness. His eyes were narrowed, his lips thin.

"How many this time?" Irwin asked, unable to keep the sadness from his voice.

Greldo blinked, then grimaced. "Forty. They are fighting with twice as many Oculithar young. They might win, but it will be close…"

Irwin frowned, looking in the direction Greldo was looking. They had come across other Chaos Whales before, most in groups and, in many cases, either being chased or fighting Oculithar. But forty? That was by far the largest group.

"How far from where we are?" he asked.

"I could get us there in a day… but it's not en route."

Irwin crossed his arms. Besides the increase in worlds troubled by the Soulplague, the number of Chaos Whales moving around had been increasing. Could there be a reason behind all of it? The invasion, the plague, the increasing numbers of beings that were almost thought mythical mere years ago, and the great many closed exit portals. Was it all the Guidar's doing? Or something else...

"What do you think?" Greldo asked, looking up.

"Even if we go there, what will we do against close to a hundred Oculithar?" Irwin asked.

"I don't know," Greldo muttered. "But it's such a large group..."

Irwin nodded, wondering what Zan would have said if she were here. She loved the calm and gentle giants more than any of his other children.

Is there really nothing we can do?" he thought, feeling another weight slowly lower itself on his shoulders.

As he searched for a solution while simultaneously talking about his new heartcard with Ambraz, he felt an idea form. It was lingering at the edges of his awareness, not yet crystallized.

"Any Chaos Whale babies?" he asked absently as he tried to focus on the idea that was forming.

Greldo grimaced and shook his head. "Ten, in the middle of the group."

Irwin looked up, pulled from his pondering. "Dammit," he hissed, shaking his head. 

"We could go there and try to assist?" Greldo asked hopefully.

Irwin didn't respond, looking around the surrounding fleet. He and Greldo could set out and try to help the Chaos Whales, using Greldo's ability to move through the shadowrealm and his fire to distract the Oculithar. But he couldn't bring everyone along, which meant leaving them here. What would happen if one of the larger Oculithar showed up? Or if he and Greldo got lost or stuck?

Dammit…

Irwin hated his current situation, having to weigh both his own safety, that of over twenty thousand people on their fleet, and the lives of such a large number of Chaos Whales, including babies.

As his frustration mounted, he clenched his fists, growling deeply. He didn't notice a tiny fluctuation in his heartcard as his fists squeaked from the force of his clench.

When will it ever be enough?

Although he was stronger than he'd ever been and would continue to become stronger, how would he ever be able to deal with situations like these? If he had more power, he could go there and end those Oculithar, bring everyone along without worry. Now? He already knew it was going to be impossible. He'd have to risk going with only Greldo. Besides, what use was it? Even if he could kill the smaller Ocuilthar, then what? Bring the Chaos Whales with them? That would draw larger Oculithar, and he didn't need his ancestral memories telling him what that would result in. They would have to flee, meaning the Chaos Whales would still die.

If only he could-

He froze, staring in the distance without seeing anything as the beginning of the idea he'd felt crystalized in his mind.

That could work!

He focused on Ambraz, and the other part of him told Gredo everything was fine and to wait for a minute.

"-besides, Kid. If your soulscape size increases, it will help our smithing. We will be able to create more powerful cards, and-" Ambraz said.

"You are right, and we should do it now," Irwin said, his giant self standing upright. "We need to fill my lake and slot atleast these two," he continued, pointing at the two best increase cards they had.

"I know I'm… wait, what?" Ambraz spluttered, landing on the table in surprise.

"We both agree that my soullake is filling due to the presence of people, right?" Irwin said, starting to pace through the room as he began taking the ideas they had spent months on and combining them. Finally, things started making sense!

"Yes…?" Ambraz muttered, sounding confused.

"And this is either because they are generating soulforce or because it's forcefully expanding my soulscape and thus causing this?" Irwin said.

"Kid, we just discussed this. Yes, that's the most likely scenario," Ambraz said, sounding annoyed. "What happened, that-"

"Imagine what would happen if I bring a Chaos Whale in here," Irwin said, rubbing his hands as he gazed at the cards and slowly began seeing how they could fit together.

Ambraz was quiet for a bit, then sighed. "There's no way. The amount of soulforce those possess is the same as hundreds of thousands of people. Maybe more! Even if they only generate a fraction of that consistently, it would be-"

"I know, but what about the babies?" Irwin said. "After my heartcard finishes."

“The… well… I…” Ambraz's voice faded as he began humming. "It would depend on how much more stable your soulscape becomes when you form your soulcard and what handcards you take after. But-"

"Coal found a battle between a large pod of Chaos Whales and even more Oculithar. They have ten or so babies," Irwin said. "If we follow our first plan and focus on my soulscape, slotting those two cards, perhaps even the third, we should be able to hold some of them and move them to safety. Besides, as they are in here, my soullake would start filling really fast."

"Yes… or your soulscape explodes," Ambraz muttered. "Ten? That would generate soulforce equal to half of that of an adult… probably. Maybe. I mean… It might work."

"If it's too many, we bring half," Irwin said, waving away Ambraz's uncertainty. "They are going to lose and die, if not now, then when the larger Oculithar find them."

"Aren't you forgetting something? To do as you suggest and use the pressure to fill your soullake, you would need a new heartcard," Ambraz said. "Besides, your soullake might be almost full, but five percent for you is as much as an entire soullake for most others!"

Irwin nodded. "I know, but what if we reforge one of the Yuurindi's a heartcard in here?" he said, ignoring the other part for now.

"Do what? Wait. In here?" Ambraz grunted, flying up and around the room as if mimicking Irwin's passing. "That might help, but one would never be enough. You would still need to do multiple, and how many would depend on the soulforce you gain. Besides, the only heartcard we ever formed here was Brecka's. And I don't think I need to remind you what that caused?"

"That was because her heartcard was broken, and we had to fix it," Irwin said. "In the case of the Yuurindi, besides them being far weaker, we won't need to fill the gaps. There's no way they will become like her!"

Ambraz hesitated before snorting. "Fine. You might be right about that, but that leaves a new heartcard. How do you suppose we solve that?"

Irwin waved him off as he began summoning cards to the table. "I have an idea, but even if we don't manage, the soulforce will merely be wasted, right? We can always move those chaos whales back in."

"Kid, I'm not sure…

Irwin didn't listen as he looked at the stacks and stacks of cards appearing from the library, only to stop. He focused on his otherself, who turned to Greldo.

"I'll be right back!"

Before Greldo could say anything, his smaller self appeared on the bookshelf library within his soulscape, and cards began appearing on the table before him.

"Ambraz, help me find a card that would work as the core of a heartcard," Irwin said, summoning the shield card and the clone one. What if he just merged his first and second ideas? All he'd need would be a core card.

"Irwin, calm down. Creating a heartcard is important. You know this! Dammit, brat, what is going on? Is your heartcard acting up?" Ambraz shouted, a wave of worry rippling through their connection. 

Irwin stopped moving, his hand frozen above the cards at Ambraz's words. A part of him wanted to wave away the Ganvil's worry, but he shoved it away. What was going on? He frowned, focusing on his heartcard, and noticed it was spinning and resonating with incredible intensity.

As soon as he noticed it, it slowed, but with it came a desire to help the chaos whales.

How did I miss this? he thought.

"It is…" he muttered, sitting down and staring at the cards before him. As his emotions calmed, he took some deep, calming breaths with both his bodies. "Dammit."

"It's fine, Kid," Ambraz said. "It's better than the anger attacks."

Irwin didn't react, as with his returned calm, he began pondering what he'd been planning. Was it really such a bad idea? No, the first part was definitely good and about time. He needed to finish his heartcard, and not just to potentially help the Chaos Whales. But creating a new heartcard this fast. Should he…?

He hummed as he gathered the six cards he had planned to use and splayed them out before him. One would have to go because there wasn't a single truly good core card. Not one that he could get to Ammolite… 

"Let's, for a moment, assume we make a heartcard in a single go," he said slowly, waving his hand as he felt Ambraz's worry grow again. "Don't worry, I'm calm. Just think with me. We would take these two cards as the active element," he said, pointing at the shields and cloning cards. "I'm already going to, but as it will fill in a gap I need, and we could potentially use it on my hammer and my guitar. And we add these three-" 

He moved one of the cards that would grow his soulscape over time away, leaving only one of those and the two that would allow him to project part of his soulscape into the real world.

"- and create a heartcard that will focus on defense based on soulforce and projecting my soulscape?"

Ambraz was quiet for a bit, then sniffed. "No. If you want to do this, don't use the two that will let you project your domain. Those would just make the resulting heartcard too complex, especially if we make it right after finishing the current one. Besides, those would be far better than complementing a core card specifically for that goal. Take the other two if you want, but I think… wait a moment."

Irwin waited quietly, both of his selves watching as Ambraz hovered above the table, cards levitating around as stacks were rifled through with the use of the Ganvil's new ability. Finally, four cards appeared before Irwin. 

"Remember the idea we shelved two months ago? I think it would fit with what you are thinking about," Ambraz said while Irwin scrutinized the four images. 

He recalled three of them, as they had discussed them previously. The only new one was the left one. The image showed a metallic gauntlet wreathed in a flame that resonated instantly with his first and second soulcard and his heartcard. The others were a wave or ripple, and he felt some resonance from his second soulcard. The third was one of the growth cards he'd collected, one that would allow a short burst of increased size based on his soulforce. The final, fourth card, an incredibly simple body-improvement card that, from what he could tell and recall, just increased his constitution and strength.

Irwin frowned. Back then, they had planned to weave three of these cards that would increase his size and sound-based movement and attacks. What was Ambraz planning with only three of them, and how did the gauntlets fit in? 

He was about to ask when Ambraz started talking.

"I know you are probably wondering about these cards, but if you want to base your third card around defense, I think this will work very well."

"How?" Irwin asked, becoming curious about what Ambraz was planning. If he had added the shield and doubling card, he could have seen some combination, but that still left one thing. Which one would be the core card?

"Let me explain," Ambraz said, sounding smug. "The shield card will resonate with your hammer and soulstrum guitar. The utility doubling card will resonate with your soul clone. The wave one will resonate with your soundcards as it will allow you to manipulate sound in an area around you. Now, before you ask, that one is mostly because it will help during the formation of the heartcard. I'm not sure we actually want most of that card, except for the boost it will give what you have. Now, about that growth card: before you complain that it only lasts ten minutes and has a long recharge… Yes, this is true. But did you know that it will also increase the size of all your other abilities? For your hammer, that doesn't really matter, but those shields you want? You could make them massive to guard more people.

Irwin whistled, picking up the card in question and nodding. That would be very useful, even if only as a final-resort card in a punch.

"Now, you should remember that silhouette card. It's a body improvement card that will mesh the others together like glue, improving the cohesion of the heartcard."

Irwin nodded along with the Ganvil, his eyes drawn to the gauntlet card as he started understanding the direction Ambraz wanted to go.

"And you want me to craft that up," he said, pointing at the card. "It's so closely affiliated with my existing cards that it's almost a guaranteed hundred percent diamond card."

"Yes, but you need to make it into an Ammolite card," Ambraz said.

Irwin's eyes widened, and he looked at Ambraz. "That's-"

"Impossible? No. Not with this one. We will need to sideways reforge it so the metal becomes Firesteel, then keep it there. After that, I'm going to spend some of my gathered purified soulforce and help you force it to Ammolite. It might not be one hundred percent, but it doesn't have to be. If we add the other five cards at one hundred percent ruby or diamond, we can remove any impurities, and the resulting heartcard will be a masterpiece!"

As he spoke, Ambraz became ever more excited, and Irwin was nodding along.

"Now, this does leave a problem," Ambraz said, his excitement dying down as fast as it had come. "You can try to fill your soullake first, which will take time. Time those Chaos Whales might not have. Worse, if you want to improve your odds, you would need to slot at least some of these cards, even if you don't complete the heartcard. And that means reforging them, which also costs time…"

Irwin grimaced. "And we don't even know if the stability will be enough to let me move the Chaos Whales."

"About that," Ambraz said as one of the cards moved forward. "Of all these cards, I would suggest you definitely slot this one as soon as your next soulcard forms."

Irwin looked at the growth card with the short duration. "Why?"

"You only need to get those Chaos Whales to safety, right? Well, using that will, for the duration, exponentially stabilize your entire soulscape, allowing you a larger increase than any of the other cards would. Is it temporary? Yes. But combine this with your soundwave movement, which should also be far stronger while using that growth ability, and you can just race away."

Irwin felt a grin form on his face. "The ability works for what ten minutes now? If we turn it into a diamond rank card, it should be an hour, and if we-"

"No, no," Ambraz interrupted him. "You don't want that. Focus on the boost, not the duration. You will need every bit of soulforce increase and stability you can get, and that means ignoring the duration and going for the power. Besides, you have plenty of long-duration abilities. It is about time you gain something that will allow you to punch above your weight."

Irwin blinked at the odd phrasing. Perhaps it was a Ganvil thing?

"Besides, the duration will increase when it becomes a heartcard and even more when it becomes a soulcard," Ambraz continued. "This one is a win-win in any case, especially combined with the shield and doubling card."

Irwin whistled, shaking his head. "Focusing only on power during reforging would make it a big increase."

"Exactly. Short duration, massive boost."

Irwin thought about it for a bit, and he began liking the plan more and more- especially as he would be left with three slots, just in case.

"That means we need to try something else first," he said, taking a deep breath.

"Which is?" Ambraz asked, sounding curious.

"Bring all of the people back into my soulscape and ask them to use all their abilities. It will cause them to generate far more dissonance, and if this is what is increasing my soulscape, we will know. It might also speed up the filling of my soullake."

Ambraz fell quiet, then whistled, causing him to sound like a metal flute. 

"It is… a good idea. Though you better be ready to boot them out if they destabilize your soulscape," Ambraz agreed.

"Alright, let's hurry," Irwin said. "If the pressure way fails, I'll need to start reforging heartcards."

Even if not for this group of Chaos Whales, then at least for the next.

Comments

Govir Drauka

I always somehow forget when it’s Friday. Haven’t read it yet, but thanks as always!

Black Rose

I recommend a summon maybe a pyroflux songbird or steam song bird. It could help with forging and be a combat utility. Also it would be cool

Black Rose

Maybe a bird held to together through the concept of music

Albert Benny Oliyakkattil

Tftc! You should make an equivalent term for Hail Mary as this is another world. You can sprinkle in some terms throughout the novel and bring in some culture and depth to the world.

Naglis Brizgys

What happened to the second life? False life?... uh clone card he got from the noble who's nephew he healed? Wasn't that what he planned to slot as the core of his next heartcard?

Eric M

I had recommended long ago a summon for a flock of songbirds so he could add an entire choir, I still think it would be cool, but reading about it all the time seems like it would get tedious. Now I just hope the Eluathar harbor becomes a chaos whale hang out and he can forge on the ship and the whales can be his choir, that would be much more fun read. Just picture like a 100 chaos whales swimming around and singing with Irwin.

Ceasarty

Thanks for the chapter! Some possible edits: "just like an emerald-rank soulcard. Hancards, no matter how high, offer no protection." - misssing a d on the Handcards. "His soulscape was already starting to recover from having moved around dozens of ships and tens of thousands of people. Not that he could move against just yet." - assume 'against' should be 'again' "Acceactly. Short duration, massive boost." - I'm guessing 'Acceactly' should be 'Exactly' "Greldo stepped back, putting his hands in his side, staring at the deck. " - 'on his sides' instead of 'in his side'? "Irwin hesitated, wanting to point out he wasn't a hundred percent sure he could reforge all things, but Greldo had already tuned out, likely communicating with Coal." - not sure if 'all things' makes sense here, or if it should be 'everything'?

Mojr

"I know you are probably wondering about these cards, but if you are to create your third soulcard, it should also be something with great potential that will be good for you in the long run." - not the 4th soulcard? "Acceactly. Short duration, massive boost." - Acceactly -> Exactly Edit: Looking forward to the next cards! He should look out that his metal type doesn't change when he becomes a Titan. The heartcard feel kinda rushed, but I look forward to the result in the next chapter(s)!

Adunn

Huh. It is a bit of a bummer to see him throw together another heart card so fast. It’s always fun to see him create it over time with cool cards he finds/forges, it’s exciting after the stagnancy of waiting for the soullake to fill. but pretty much all these cards we haven’t heard about until this chapter.

Not Me

It might be worth listing out a bunch of common English-language words, phrases, and idioms, and deconstructing them to get some inspiration. Like, "Goodbye" comes from "God be with ye", "Bite the bullet" probably comes from soldiers chomping down on a bullet during surgery, as not to crack their teeth or bite something more important. But what word do you get when your world has no gods, or many, with differing domains? What phrase do you get when the nature of healing is so radically different than a painful surgery, but people still regularly (on a population level) need to endure pain when forming cards? And what marks does it leave on the language for cards to be such a ubiquitous phenomenon? There's other things, like when languages collide - in English there's multiple words for that big, black-and-white, domesticated 4-legged grazer with horns. The English had a word with a Germanic origin for it: cow. But when the French invaded, they added new words to the vocabulary, ones descended from Latin, and called cow meat "beef". Irwin actually comes from a world that probably had multiple groups inhabit it in such a way - an original human population that lived there, and a Galadin empire that came to inhabit it some time in the distant past. I wouldn't be surprised if some of Irwin's native vocabulary makes him stand out in the Portal Gallery, since it's likely that he has a lot of Giard-specific vocabulary and idioms, as well as a very dated (or separately evolved) pronunciation of Galadin vocabulary. I could see some locations in the Portal Gallery having more stable language due to the presence of 1000-year-olds speaking the same way. On the flipside, Giard has been isolated from broader Portal Gallery linguistic evolution for generations, has had time to evolve in a different direction, and odds are that very little to none of the non-Galadin, native Giardian language ever filtered out of there. I'd also want to point out that Eluathar is going to be a bit of an interesting spot to watch in the future. The biggest element is going to be the Giard Galadin dialect, but there's a population of Frozir with their own cultural concepts (their own gods, moral values, different words for ice, words to describe their world shattering, etc.) and a native Eluatharian population as well. And a lot of new things to name, which Irwin will not have even seen. I would not be surprised if the Frozir actually take the lead on chronicling and describing the planetary collapse, and the vocabulary that the ex-Giardians use, and the manner in which its described, are Frozir words, Frozir phrasing, and a recycled Frozir narrative, previously used by the Frozir describe their own world ending. That's not to mention that there's soon going to be a large (eventually to be very, very large) population of Yuurindi settling there in short order.

Not Me

Yeah, it seems like a bit of a rush job in conceptualizing the card, even if the process is going to be interesting. I get that it's a very Irwin thing to make new plans by the seat of his pants and succeed wildly, but I can't help but think that a lot of the card space and potential is going to be wasted, even with as much card space as he has. I wonder if it's actually a seed of another problem and story arc - how Irwin straightens up and internally improves his cards after making something of a snap decision to seize a missable opportunity. I would very much like to see if Irwin can reforge his original cards, or swap elements between his various soulcards (moving all the soulforce sensitivity to one card, all the utility summons to one, all the strength and growth to another, perhaps). The problem could also just be an actual problem; maybe there's long-term consequences for chomping down on 10 whales, and it seriously damages his soulscape/soulcards. So then he has to make do and learn to forge with a vastly reduced powerset while his cards recover. How would Irwin adapt if he can't leverage any of his great strength, and just needs to move soulforce? Or if his soulforce sensitivity gives out and he needs to compensate by planning better. Or if his metal and flame give out, and he needs to learn how to reforge using mainly steam? That leaves a lot of room for introspection, ways to learn other styles of crafting, and a big, dramatic re-power-up at the end. I think Irwin and Ambraz are past the point of missing surprises (nasty or pleasant) that are hidden in merchant-purchased cards he has yet to slot, but what if they're not? What if the cards he picks have some unknown weakness, one that wouldn't matter to the vast majority of wielders, that only makes itself known under great stress? Perhaps one that manifests when pressured by Occulithars' funky soulforce, or when bumping 10 chaos whales up in his soulscape, or ticked off by Irwin's Titan card's emotions.

C-Anonymous

This is exactly what I was thinking while reading this chapter.

Carrarn

You are correct, but I've been re-reading chapters 376 to 380 and can't find the bit where Irwin mentions he is going to slot it. That said, you are correct that there should atleast be a mention of it. I'll go and fix that tomorrow :)

Antony Claughton

Firstly, I really liked the chapter and where this sub-plot is going. BUT I really don’t like not seeing the resolution of what was happening with the Concerto. And really by now we should have seen the discussion around the runesmith and what their plan is, and what they can do (it would have occurred shortly after leaving port). Also, Irwin didn’t really explain how everyone is living in his soulscape. Are they all on the overcrowded boats, or have they created a village? Has Irwin brought in water (or ice to melt) to create some lakes/rivers and sources of water? What are they doing for sanitation and food? Do these near dead worlds’ ports have plenty of below emerald cards since they had nothing to use them for before dying? Are the survivors all grateful? Are some angry? What do they think of this? What are they now hoping for or expecting. How much of this should have been explained at the last detailed port stop by the two old Yuurindi? Surely with their communication ability they’d have known a lot of this, had some descendants dying as well, and warned Irwin? I assume they don’t think they can bring everyone to Eluathor because of the risk of spreading the plague? I can’t help thinking maybe adding one (two?) chapter(s) showing some of the exposition at the start and filling some of the gaps I’ve mentioned above. Maybe arrival at a small world with only 2-3 survivors, so it is a quick stop. And not the first one, so Irwin’s crew have a process. Possibly have it from the survivors’ point of view. You could show Irwin’s crew finding the survivors, discussing the state of their cards, scavenging any important food/tools/minerals/cards/books/manuals etc. The survivors are sorted by if potentially contagious or not, and shown/explained how things work. Thus showing how everything is working in the fleet and in the soulscape. See their reactions to the soulscape. And maybe showing the attitudes of other survivors (and these ones) to Irwin and those in control, and what their hopes are. I can understand you wanting to jump through this period. But I think you’re going a little fast and skipping showing some important events at least once.

Antony Claughton

Now, most people never go through those, but as realization had set in what was the only thing keeping them alive, people stopped caring for future growth and began slotting what they could find. Sadly, with barely any cardsmiths still around in these outskirts, even those lucky enough to find a compatible emerald-ranked or above heartcard hadn't been able to find a smith to reforge their handcards to a heartcard. ==> Now, most people never choose those, but as realization had set in what was the only thing keeping them alive, people stopped caring for future growth and began slotting what they could find. Sadly, with barely any cardsmiths still around in these outskirts, even those lucky enough to find a compatible emerald-ranked or above hand card hadn't been able to find a smith to reforge their handcards to a heartcard. And thus had been infected anyway and died. I added that last line (please reword!) as a suggestion to make it explicit what happens. Having a ruby-rank heartcard or above makes you immune, just like an emerald-rank soulcard. ==> should the soulcard be handcard, since that means you survive? Or are people with emerald soulcards or ruby heartcards also immune from acting as carriers? It is a little unclear.

Not Me

Another angle by which to consider these little cultural bits is - what's the culture? What is the Giardian people's story? For the ancient Greeks, it was the Trojan War, where all of their royal heroes sailed off to war, to settle a spat between the gods, honor a pact, and recover Helen of Sparta. And there's all sorts of cultural references to it, from Trojan horses (related: Trojan condoms), Achilles' heel (compare: Kryptonite), Cassandra's prophecy, and so forth. For the Hebrew people, it was the Torah, of shared descent from the many patriarchs, from Abraham to Solomon, of repeated flights from persecution, and of the strong but rather conditional support from God. There's a lot of modern references to this work - "Oh how the mighty have fallen" is a biblical line, David vs Goliath is a thing, golems get their roots in one of David's poems, and there's many more. Whether it's actually true is immaterial. The Greek gods probably didn't exist and didn't intervene in the Trojan War, and even though the actual Troy did fall around the right time, there might not have even been a Trojan War as we know it. Noah may or may not have built a gargantuan boat, even though there probably was a giant flood in ancient Mesopotamia. But you can build a culture or mythology on things half-remembered, recounted only by biased sources, spread through memory and word of mouth. Surely Giard has similar touchpoints, where key leaders or important groups (or leaders who want to make themselves seem important!) told a story of themselves, and over time, fact became fable. So what are Giard's stories? Was there a council of 10,000 clans (probably more like 80, but let's call it 10k) where Giardians all came together to repel a particularly nasty portal break? Maybe a word for bravery or unity comes from this event. Or foolishness or treachery, if someone overextended themselves or betrayed everyone else. Did Gelwin achieve any actions of note - founding a great library, trekking (or maybe just wagoning) a long distance, departing the world of Giard, getting more than 6 handcards ("Likely as a 7-carded peasant") that people can use as an expression for intelligence or endurance or evasiveness? Did a number of heartcarded card farmers ever visit Giard and wreak havoc in a way that people would remember? Do common people ever just remark at how flat and smooth Galadin roads are, leading to some expression "short as a Galadin mile" or some other expression around ease/smoothness/softness/flatness? As a little extrapolation - this is absolutely going to happen to Irwin on Eluathar. As live experiences and firsthand knowledge of Irwin diffuses into secondhand knowledge and repeated stories, he will become legendary. Most of Eluathar does not know him personally, they merely know of him, or may have seen him probably at his most flashy (destroying portal demons on Giard, blasting Occulithar at the portal) or know of him through his works (all those random 100% perfect cards he gifted). He has a superhuman, heroic stature, he stands out in a crowd, and he's closely associated with other notable figures (Gelwin, Daubutim) who already have or will have similar mythologizing treatment. He's probably going to have newborn babies of people he has never met named after him (or maybe his pretending-to-be-noble alias Orwin).

Josh McDonnell

Its Abraz who said he well slot it and have the five other cards enhance and strengthen it. I remember because I was wondering just what cards Irwin would use to enhance it and if it was cards like teleport enhancement cards. Also just how powerful it would become.

Carrarn

In hindsight I agree with your and some of the other comments. Perhaps I flashed through to much to fast. I'll add a short bit at the top of the next chapter to try and reconcile this and add a note for myself to probably change the order around, and perhaps flesh it out. Two chapters feels like a lot, but then again, perhaps I can spead out Irwin (pressed enter to fast) - Spread out Irwin's idea about his next hard card a bit to. Sigh, so anoying that enter posts a comment

Carrarn

Okay, just thought about it a bit longer, and I've added some extensive notes for myself to: split chapters 399 and 400 up in three so I have space for Mikarl's reforging (the rune smith) and I can resolve the Concerto thing at the back of 400. I'll also have to split 401 and 402 into three chapters to do the same for the missing scenes where Irwin and the rest reach one of the worlds and how they save the people, while also adding the bit where you rightly say we have no idea how they are surviving in Irwin's realm. I was pondering it just now, and I'll be adding a little bit in todays chapter - I don't feel like postponing this, so I'll be using tomorrows writing time to fix this and than I'll have to struggle with Patreon's horrible gui to reorder the chapters.

Carrarn

You are right, which is why I couldn't find it. I have left a rather extensive comment below Antony's post - it explains what I'll be doing tomorrow. I'll make sure to rethink how to go about this, and at a minimum add something to mention it

Carrarn

I've added a note to re-think how this section goes, perhaps have more little bits in the previous 10 or so chapters with Irwin pondering what to do, and tossing up ideas. That said, I was going for a bit of a spur of the moment / rush job here, as I felt it was in line with how Irwin usually does things. I'll think on it when I edit this

Not Me

I think the main difference is that Irwin is putting himself in this situation. In previous situations, it's often that he's forced into a subpar situation and manages to work miracles to get a good outcome. He's not a terrible decision-maker when you consider that he's actually a good bit more competent than anyone else thinks he is, and that his hail Mary plans are fairly likely to work. But his decisions have largely seemed to be oriented towards getting the right cards (he spent multiple chapters getting the right instrument and sheet music cards), removing any serious deficiencies (body enhancement as a scrawny child, steam card after the weak-to-cold card, kinetic and teleportation after the metal body), and maximizing his long-term growth, while the risk being taken is that he's never optimized for the immediate battle (except that one time against the fire imps) because he's dedicated half of his build to self-improvement for future battles, i.e. cardsmithing. I don't think the fact that he made a decision in one chapter is really a problem, if it were explained that he put a great deal of work into it. A lot of time has passed on the journey, after all, a brief statement that he spent a month and a dozen tries to get a card right should suffice. But it seems out-of-character for Irwin to make a growth-limiting plan while not under significant pressure. You actually had an arc where Irwin did make a series of poor decisions under influence of the Titan card, but it didn't feel uncharacteristic because you spent a lot of time establishing what the Titan card was up to. Now Scintilla's whale pod shows up and he suddenly needs to complete his build, as if these were the only chaos whales in the world? I don't quite buy it. I'd be almost more inclined to think that he'd try to fill up a soullake without a soulcard to push it into. Or to get subconsciously pressured into slotting his good soulforce cards earlier than expected by his own whale card, without Ambraz catching on until too late, when the only viable option was to complete the card. Or that he'd jet over to the whales without carefully consulting Ambraz, only to realize that his only way to fit them was to start slotting soulforce cards immediately. Actually giving him time to think and plan is probably the inflection point of when he should have decided against going. Once he realized that he was being subconsciously influenced, and calculated that the soulforce math to swallow a whale wouldn't work out in his favor, I'd imagine he'd just avoid the whales, or slow-escort them if possible. After all, he's been willing to leave cities with thousands of people to their fates (and all of their food and cards, which could benefit Eluathar), what makes a small pod of whales that much more important to him that he would risk messing up his build? I don't think this question is unanswerable, but I don't think it was adequately answered. Also - I left a second comment about some of the kids on chapter 400, in case you didn't see.

Carrarn

I'll check that comment after this - not sure if I've seen it. Okay, I get what you are saying- I'll see if I can change some things around. I've already decided to redo a part of the chapters 399 to 402, might as well rethink this ;) Tomorrow will see no chapter though, because I'll need to redo some bits and add some others. It's not a good idea to continue to write on a flawed foundation. (At least, not one with this many things) Might even do so today now that I think about it. Yeah. Perhaps best to fix things before continuing onward. (okay, that was my train of thought just now)

Antony Claughton

It’s always the risk of the serial that people may have good points! Lol. But hopefully it also means a better end product. I hope and think Patreon subscribers will accept changes if it improves things.

Carrarn

This it the edited version of 404 that released Friday and the last of the edits I'll be doing for now. I'd planned to do it next weekend, but when I woke up this morning I just couldn't let it go. Anyway, its 6k words, and that's with the last bit missing (the Greldo shadowcard future) bit. I'll be reshaping that and adding it to the chapter of tonight, so you might notice that. It's not a large bit. Let me know what you think of the edits. Some are a bit subtle, others are less so ;)

Booker Smiths Work

Is it a utility summon duplicator or doubler? The way they talked about it. It seemed like it could create any number of shields so long as he had the soul force for it, but it keeps getting referred to as doubling unless it’s repeatedly doubling the shields created, and thus only capable of creating 124 8,16 and so on or limiting itself to only two copies of each utility summon then it should probably be rewarded to duplicator or some other variant, describing that it summons multiple copies instead of a limit of two.

edward hannigan

Irwin was tired as he lay down on his bed, trying to ignore the constant chatter from his soulscape. His giant self had pulled back into his own house so the malnourished survivors would stop staring at him, looking terrified. "Now, what do we do," he muttered, closing his eyes. "There's not a lot we can do," Ambraz replied from a perch in the wall. "We save those we come across, for as long as we can, and hope we find a world that has found a cure." "Let's see if we can find one," he muttered. "Maybe some card…" He barely heard Ambraz's response as his mind shut down, and he fell asleep. "

edward hannigan

the in betwen is a bit fast if you read them end to end so somthing like; i'd been a "month or somthing" sens thay first enconterd the plage

Eric M

Edit: I know you are probably wondering about these cards, but if you are to create your third soulcard - shouldn't this be him creating his 4th heartcard or soulcard, his 3rd soulcard is pretty much set, just waiting on the lake to fill.

Antony Claughton

couldn't, enough, had managed to get up to an Emerald rank ==> couldn't, enough had managed to get up to an Emerald rank Hancards, no matter ==> Handcards, no matter Two would increase his soulscape's size over time, while two, which, when combined, would allow him ==> Two would increase his soulscape's size over time, while another two, when combined, would allow him twenty thousand people ==> stated earlier 10,000 Yuurindi and twice that of others. So should this be 30,000?

Benjamin Walsh

Way back when, he reforged several Oculithar killer cards for the defenders of Eluathar… he and Greldo also singlehanded killed a small Oculithar each, and Rindiri + Zim’dor were able to engage and survive against a third… so why is he acting like he can’t do anything against the Oculithar… the obvious thing to get would be something that increases his soul force + push out soul force + eye beams (or sonic scream) + waves … then he could shoot blasts of soul force infused fire or sound waves at the Oculithar…

Benjamin Walsh

Also, they should have more big cards… they still had 1 or 2 left over from the Gas Giant, Greldo found on the Oculithar he killed, and they should have been one on the one Irwin killed… If Irwin can reforge using Greldo’s soul force, couldn’t he have others contribute. With a fleet of 20k, there have to be some with the control necessary. Also, there are two Ganvils besides Ambraz who should be able to contribute. He also just did a montage of “purifying” cards yet there was never a final result… and previously he figured out how to make cards, so it feels like he has the ability to create just about anything he wants as long as it’s not a super rare type…

SubtleStubble

Forgive me if this has already been addressed. I've been flying through the chapters and at the beginning of this week I was around the events of Irwin slotting his sixth card for his current heart card. That chapter insinuated he took a growth card instead of the body doubling/extra life card he got as a reward for saving the lordling? But when the cards combined.. he seemed to have body doubling anyways? In a later chapter it seemed to confirm that he hadn't taken the special body double reward card as part of this heart card but he and ambraz went on to say it needed to be part of this next heart card, but now it has disappeared from the roster of options? Seems a little inconsistent, but I may have missed something. Good work!

Carrarn

I'll have to check this when I get to the editing part. Been to long for me to recall all of that without rereading it and I'm lost for time atm. Still, I've added this to my todo list. Thanks for pointing it out, if it endsup being as you say, I'll fix it for the edited version.