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IMPORTANT NOTE: So that I don't confuse old readers who previously read this chapter, I made a change to the plot of my EYON storyline, so now this first prologue chapter introduces us to the SECONDARY CHARACTER OF MY ORIGINAL STORY (the baby found in the wreckage, she's not a girl and the secondary character of this tale).

I've been stuck in writer's block for half a decade trying to figure out the best original story to follow, and I believe I've finally landed on a winner.Marin's backstory you saw in Chapter 4 of Silver Age inspired this rewrite of the hero's backstory for THIS universe. Hope to have more to come as I go about working on my other projects as I claw my way out of my writer's block.Synopsis (REVISED VERSION): On the continent of Eyon- a world of swords and sorcery- deep in a mystic wood, a hermit finds a baby left alive in a wagon in the wake of a horrible monster attack. Alongside an elven mage and master huntress, they raise the girl into a strong warrior.

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EYON Fantasy - Chapter List

Chapter 1 - Prologue - https://www.patreon.com/posts/eyon-fantasy-1-136162639

Chapter 2 - The Towering Knight - https://www.patreon.com/posts/eyon-fantasy-2-157891839

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RCD91

I'm a sucker for the Fantasy Genre, and I thought this story was Haitus for evermore. I am happy to see this story getting some love and is going to go far.

Super Lombax

Ah. I see you've finally got one of your original projects going. Let's see how this turns out.

Adam Dee

Ooo this looks cool! I always love to read an original fantasy story

maverih

Glad you overcome your writers block to work on your long awaited project, that is EYON fantasy, I hope chapter 1 will have both protagonists become and remain naked like in the cover.

Nagore6305

Glad to hear you managed to move passed that block and started your passion project

GamerLegend09

🤩🤩🤩🤩 HOLY SHITE IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS STORY!!!! (😅 sorry I’ve been away for a bit, internet’s been a pain in my households ass)

TheWriteFiction

I understand. Glad to have yah back, mate. Hope to get around to your commission of Android 18, Krillin, Gohan and Maron, if that's still on the table.

Super Lombax

Oh, she almost had him. Gotta be quicker than that.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 1, 2, & 3,* 😍 Nice Moons 🌕

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 4* 😊 I love when you color the landscapes like this, 😁 the old man looks cool too

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 5* 😧 my gosh how horrible

Chris Cannon

*Pg 8* Birds: Bad ol' putty tat!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 6* 😳 whoa big Ktty biig biig Kitty

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 7* 😩 of course there’s another one

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 8* 😳😨 the fuck did he pull that big ass Spiked Ogre club from?! 👹

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 9* **Top 2 Panels** This Environment would NOT! allow me to be this calm (😑 seriously where was this old man Hiding that Ogre club?) **Bottom 4 Panels** 😍😍😍😍!!!….. 🤤whatwerewetalkingabout?

Super Lombax

Ah. Got two warrior class women. No armor on at all, but I have a feeling that won't affect the amount of damage they'll be capable of taking throughout the story.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 10* **Top Panel** I see so they’re all affiliated with each other…..does this make him the master Roshi of this series just less perverted? (Also 😍😍😍 this series is starting to feel dangerous for my heart) **Middle Right Panel** Interesting Frame right here… almost like someone or thing can see them from inside the Wreckage-😄 oh hey the bird’s back (just noticed) **Middle Left Panel** Looking from this angle I don’t feel fully convinced on how focused he is 😂😂😂 **Bottom Right panel** 😳 Master!!? 🙃 starting to feel like he’s leaning a little more towards the Roshi type old man **Bottom Left Panel** 😅😅😅 I know I wouldn’t be able to focus if I were him😏

Federico Cecchi

If I recall right It would be a Futa or a Futanari in this comic?Is She appear or not?🤔🤔🤔(It would be an Amazing story anyway😁)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 11* Ahahh so it was magic 🪄, and a dwarven lineage…😊 I would not have figured that, I just assumed they were hereditarily small in stature…🙂 that’s cool regardless, the only reference I have of Dwarves using Magic is the Goblin Slayer Series

TheWriteFiction

Yep. A Dwarven Summoner and Fighter. Basically he was the titular and crowned Hero who protected the continent from evil- basically who you would have regarded as the MC once upon a time. He may or may not have defeated the Demon King and their army a long time ago in his prime, and has now since retired.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 12* 😕 poor Lady, 😔🙏🏻 may her soul rest in peace

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 13* **Top 3 Panels** 😯 oh? **Bottom Right 2 Panels** 😃 it’s a miracle!! **Bottom Left 2 Panels** …🥺🥺🥺ohhh they’re so precious

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 14* **Top 3 Panels** Maternal Instinct ACTIVATE!!! 🥰🥰🥰 **Bottom 5 Panels** Look at you master Folin showing your inherent Detective Skills🤩🤩🤩

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 15* **Top 2 Panels** Still so tragic to have met such a Gruesomely Violent fate **Bottom Right Panel** I love seeing him use magic, so cool 😎 **Bottom Left 3 panels** Ahh smart, 🥲 an heirloom to remember his mother….🤔 now what can they give him that’s from his Father?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 16* Though they have met an unfortunate Tragic end to their life I hope they pass on knowing their child is safe 😔🙏🏻 may you Both Rest in Peace

Joseph c guillory

Awesome. Thank you for making more chapters to this series.🙂😘😄😄😁😗

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 17* **Top 2 Panels** OK nice we’re getting some more background here, Royalty lineage so there could also be a sabotage of nobility hierarchy at play here **Bottom Right Panel** 😄 Ahh, there’s a momento to remember the Father by. **Bottom Left 2 Panels** ☺️ this Baby girl is in safe hands now, I have a good feeling these three are going to make good teachers

Saishu Buki

Damn, I really need to steal your ability to create. This is incredible.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 18* **Top Panel** …🙂 I love a Female Amazonian Tribe (rather a group with a similar appearance of said tribe) **Bottom Right Panel** Yeah, me too 🤤🤤🤤 **Bottom Left 3 Panels** Oh 😯, Golden Tigress huh, 😈 I wonder who that could be (jk)

Super Lombax

Oh, neat. Nice to see you came back to updating this story a little bit.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 19* Uuhuhuuuh 😍 she’s grown alright 😍😍😍

Joseph c guillory

Congratulations on finishing your long first chapter thank you for your dedication too your work 👍 👏 🙌 😀.

TheWriteFiction

For those wondering, I was a bit unsatisfied with the abrupt ending to the chapter, since it lacked context for how life was like for the heroine growing up in the village. So I'm amending this issue by adding some extra montage pages to the chapter, showing us how the heroine is raised and trained (just like I recently did for Dragonball Silver Age), to add characterisation and context. This will improve the story's pacing and give the opportunity for more world building. You can also see why I didn't include this the first time, because creating these pages is VERY time consuming, due to the detail. Please let me know how it looks.