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Duchar’s archive had turned into an improvised picture salon in the last few days. 

The very first thing Simon had done after the miasmic pictobox’s test was to bring it back to Coil Futuristics. Jym had immediately dismissed the ‘errors’ as the result of using fossilized memories tainting the final result and pushed them to focus on a purely mechanical alternative, but neither Magda nor Simon had been convinced. Magical errors and interferences couldn’t explain why taking multiple pictures of the same person always resulted in them showing up as a living puppet. 

Simon had thus decided to run more tests with Duchar, considering his expertise on miasma. They had spent nights taking pictures of various things and subjects, especially Cassandra. She might find success as a model should she decide to abandon witchery. 

A few patterns began to emerge over the week. First of all, the visual distortions only appeared when using cursed sheets to take the pictures; manalith variants showed no anomalies, even after being tainted with miasma after the fact. Whatever was happening was intimately linked to the process itself. 

Second, results were somewhat inconsistent. Cassandra served as a model for them when using either the Brand of Envy or a confiscated Changeling Crestone provided by Shabram to appear fully human. Pictures of the former showed her as a normal woman, whereas those of the latter revealed her demonic tail and horns.

Finally, Simon always appeared in Overlord armor in pictures taken with the color pictobox, even when he wasn’t wearing it. 

He somehow found that part the most disturbing of all. 

“I think I have found the source of the discrepancies,” Duchar declared after analyzing dozens of pictures. He grabbed one of the original ones and pointed at the puppet man’s visage. “There is an outline, hardly visible to the naked eye.”

Simon had to buff his Perception to spot that detail. He indeed noticed a small, nearly imperceptible layer around their wooden face, especially near the spots where the ears should have been. “A false skin?” 

“I would assume. We see this on both Your Majesty’s pictures of those puppets and that of my daughter when using the Changeling Crestone, which makes me believe a similar phenomenon is at work in both cases.” Duchar stroked his beard. “The Changeling Class works by covering the wearer in a human-shaped Class outfit… a mana shell that acts as a disguise and uses Perks to protect them from divination attempts.”

“It is not true shapeshifting, but an advanced form of disguise,” Simon guessed. “Like wearing a second skin that can be torn apart with sufficient damage.”

“Indeed, whereas the Brand of Envy allows its user to achieve true polymorphy. It is not a disguise, but a physical transformation, hence why those pictures remain unaltered.” Duchar stroked his chin. “My theory is that Your Majesty’s invention taps into a spectrum of light our human senses cannot perceive, and which pierces through certain forms of magical disguises. The fact it ignores anti-divination measures suggests it is a purely natural process.“

“But why does Your Majesty appear armored in the pictures then?” Cassandra pointed out the obvious. 

“You cannot put your human outfit on.” The words rang in Simon’s head and sent a shiver down his spine. Wearing the Overlord armor is my natural state now… 

“It must pick up on my Overlord’s miasmic energies,” Simon suggested, mostly because he didn’t want to consider other alternatives. Neither Duchar nor Cassandra contested his statement—perhaps sensing it wasn’t something he wanted to discuss. “Can we confirm whether the people in the pictures are puppets by other means? Considering they passed our divination tests?”

“A dissection should suffice.”

Simon sighed. “Do we really need to kill them, Duchar?”

“Your Majesty, if they are indeed puppets, then they were never alive in the first place. A vivisection would be a misnomer.” Duchar studied the pictobox. “I also wonder what would happen if we switched out the manalith crystal with a miasmic one, and then printed the pictures on a manalith sheet. Such a fascinating invention.”

“My miasmic crystal is already used to sustain my Dungeon, though a Zodiac Fiend’s core could do. I know where to obtain a few.” However, that would bring much attention to himself and Simon had no idea what results this hypothetical device would yield. “Continue testing the prototypes for now. I must ponder our current findings for now.”

He wasn’t sure what to make of this discovery. Was Bert slowly replacing some of Lampwick’s citizens with automaton spies and duplicates? Valravn could create fetches, and his servant was a Puppeteer. The connection was obvious. 

However, the Weaver gave off so much a strong miasma signature that Simon could detect his true nature before he even unlocked his Dark Visionary powers. The other suspected infiltrators didn’t give themselves away so easily. 

He had to investigate further. 

—-----------

Tracking down the wooden man from the first picture didn’t take that long. He was a regular at the teashop and apparently a respected scientist—true name Hyde Stevenson—participating in the Planetary Exposition, so Simon had no issues following him to his house on the city’s outskirts under a Fiendmask. Breaking in at night undetected was only slightly more difficult. 

Within an hour, the man ended up bound to a chair in his own salon, his wife asleep on the sofa due to one of Simon’s spells. A pictobox shot confirmed she looked utterly normal in the picture, unlike her husband. 

“Nothing perverted about this,” Simon told his terrified captive under the cover of a Nightveil. “This is just for research purposes.”

The man had stopped screaming by now, having realized Simon’s wards prevented his yells from reaching anyone outside. “What do you want… if it’s money, I’ll, I’ll pay any price!” 

“I want the truth. Nothing will happen to you if you cooperate.” Simon sat in front of his captive and stared into his eyes. “Answer me truthfully: are you a puppet?”

“What?” The man blinked a few times in horror. “Is this… is this what it is about? My support for the mayo—”

“Answer the question.”

“No, no! No, I’m my own man!”

“I meant it literally. Are you an automaton? A doppelganger? Are you even aware of what you are?” The man’s look of confusion bothered Simon, who decided to use magic. “Heart’s Desire.”

He dived into the man’s soul until a picture formed in his mind: that of him and his wife raising a family in their old age, content and happy. A humble wish by all accounts, simple and without any hidden perversion. 

However, the mental image came out strangely. The man and his family appeared… flatter, for lack of a better word, and lacking in details. Their clothes were all the same color, the faces so blank… It all seemed so superficial. So lacking in imagination. 

Simon knew not everyone had grandiose dreams of the future, yet his instinct told him this vision lacked the emotional depth even a simpleton could conjure.

No way around this then. Hyde’s confusion turned to fear when Simon summoned a blade from his Inventory. I must confirm it. 

“I’ll be quick,” Simon swore. “If this is a mistake, I swear you’ll forget everything in the morning, the pain included.”

“W-wait, stop—”

The question turned into an agonizing wail as Simon chopped off the man’s hand with one swift stroke. 

It bothered him that he felt nothing about this. Simon had slain and tormented so many people that such butchery hardly elicited an emotional response anymore. He told himself it would be better than outright killing the man, that he would heal his wounds and wipe away his memory soon, but all those justifications sounded hollow in his mind. The truth was that he had a goal and didn’t care much so long as he achieved it.

The wound didn’t draw blood. 

No fluids erupted from the stumped arm nor the hand Simon held within his palm. The blow did cause a few splinters to fall onto the ground, alongside small shreds of leathery tissue. 

Simon stared at the hand in quiet silence. A piece of wood occupied the spot where the bone should be, with multiple layers of skin gently surrounding it like a butcher’s ham. He couldn’t see any veins or blood vessels of any kind. 

The man in front of him was a fake, though his pain was very real from the look on his face.

“How do you explain this?” Simon asked sharply upon showing him his own hand. “Is this a prosthesis?”

“No… I…” The man gulped. “I… I don’t understand…”

Either he was a better actor than all of House Malphas put together, or he sounded sincerely confused. A true spy would have probably given a hint of their true nature by now, and Heart’s Desire had shown nothing unusual. Either this creature possessed advanced anti-telepathic derenses… or it didn’t know it was a fake. 

“Do you have childhood memories?” Simon inquired. “What do you remember when you were eight? Nine?”

“I… I worked in Coal Street all my youth, in the mines…” The thing shook and trembled, sweat rising to the surface of its fake skin. “I… I don’t…” Its face reddened. “Don’t understand…”

Simon’s eyes widened as he spotted a glow coming from Stevenson’s chest. A light that heated up the puppet’s body and caused it to shed whatever humidity gave its skin a lively appearance. A wail escaped the thing’s mouth as its lips began to melt away like wax. 

Simon immediately realized he had triggered a self-destruction mechanism similar to the one used by the Golden Champion during their battle, and reacted swiftly. “Hellfrost!” 

Simon trapped the melting body in a cocoon of miasmic ice, smothering the flames and halting the reaction. The false Stevenson was already disfigured by then, its half-molten face revealing pieces of charred wood underneath. Only its severed hand was left intact. 

Whoever was behind this didn’t want to leave any evidence behind. 

“I’m sorry,” Simon apologized as he stored the hand in his Inventory. “I can’t leave things like this.”

He wiped his intrusion from his sleeping wife’s memory, grabbed the frozen Stevenson, and teleported back to his lair with him. As far as everyone would be concerned, the inventor would simply disappear without explanation. 

Dissection it was then. 

—-------------

Afterwards, Simon tracked down the porcelain woman—a biologist by the name of Elizabeth Shelley—and abducted her after knocking her unconscious in order to avoid triggering the self-destruct mechanism. He delivered her to Duchar for a vivisection that confirmed that she was an automaton with a manalith core. 

“It would seem that false memories were mechanically engraved onto the manalith through a method surprisingly similar to my own mind-copying helmet,” Duchar concluded. “I cannot yet tell whether they were copied from a model or invented wholesale.”

“So we can’t confirm if they were always puppets from the start, or replaced existing people.” Simon crossed his arms. “Are these creatures aware of what they are?”

“I do not think so. In fact, I have found evidence that the self-destruct mechanism will trigger should the automaton discover an inconsistency in its memories. Probably an intentional failsafe against discovery.” Duchar stroked his beard. “A similar mechanism activates when the body suffers extensive damage or if the manalith core is pried open, although I managed to disable it.”

In short, whoever was behind this mess was willing to kill their own creations to cover their tracks. Simon had his suspicions about the responsible party, and the fact that both Shelley and Stevenson were scientists was unlikely to be a coincidence.

Simon spent the next three days taking pictures around Lampwick to confirm his theory. The disappearance of two high-profile scientists made headlines, but the lack of witnesses and Anathemic Secrecy’s anti-divination protections ensured the investigation would go nowhere. 

He eventually returned to Coil Futuristics more worried than he left it. To his surprise, he found both Magda and Jym waiting for him on the ground floor, which he took as a bad sign. Jym Colt never left his lab at this hour.

“You are late,” Jym said the moment Simon stepped inside. He sounded as if his apprentice had just committed murder. “Very, very late.”

“Where were you?” Magda snapped at Simon. Unlike her husband, she looked clearly torn between anger and concern. Her eyes were blackened from a lack of sleep, and she held a newspaper in her hands. “We were worried sick.”

“I’m sorry, I had a very urgent matter to deal with.” Simon frowned upon spotting a broken window. “What happened?”

“Someone tried to break in last night and triggered the alarm,” Magda explained. “They ran away before the watch arrived.”

“The Finktons,” Coil said with conviction. “Bert is trying to intimidate us.”

“All of our usurers and debtors called in their loans all at once yesterday, and then…” Magda handed Simon the newspaper. “This.”

Simon frowned as he read the headlines. “‘A recent study by our University’s foremost magical researchers shows that pictoboxes expose their subjects to dangerous magical radiation’?

“It is pure rubbish,” Coil insisted. “I thoroughly tested the commercialized version for safe use.”

“Bert funded the study and purchased space on every newspaper in Muse to run the story, according to Diamante.” Magda crossed her arms, her expression darkening. “Now we’re facing lawsuits by ‘concerned citizens’ accusing us of worsening their health and peddling an unsafe product. Diamante says he’ll cover the legal bills and get us the best lawyers, but… it’s a lot all at once.”

Lawsuits and smear campaigns to denigrate the pictobox due to their unexpected success were a logical escalation from Bert, yet Simon knew things would only get worse. “There’s more to this,” he warned the Coil couple. “Your lives are in danger.” 

“What?” Magda blinked in horror. “No… not even Bert would stoop that low…”

“Whoever is behind this will.” Simon presented them with pictures of four living automatons walking the city’s streets, then identified each of them in turn. “Oscar Grey, Abraham Harker, Griffin Wells, and Mary Lavenza.”

Jym Coil immediately spotted the common thread. “They are all participants in the Planetary Exposition.”

“After extensive testing, I’ve concluded these visual anomalies are evidence of magical disguise rather than errors in the printing process,” Simon explained. “I think someone replaced all these people with automatons.”

The Coils were smart people. When faced with an outlandish hypothesis, they checked the evidence rather than dismiss it outright. Coil studied the pictures while Magda connected the dots. “Shelley and Stevenson both went missing too.”

“Based on available evidence, the likeliest hypothesis is that a powerful individual or organization seeks to replace all Planetary Exposition candidates,” Coil said. 

“But why?!” Magda protested. 

“Free access to the Crafter’s Tower,” Coil guessed. Simon had reached a similar conclusion. “The success of a single agent at the Planetary Exposition is statistically unlikely. The only outcome that guarantees an infiltrator is selected as the next apprentice is if all candidates have been subverted. Those that cannot be bought or recruited are either neutralized or replaced.”

Magda paled like chalk. “Or eliminated.”

“Highly probable,” Coil confirmed with a blank expression. He studied Simon for a moment. “A hostile foreign intelligence service? The Overlord? Bert?”

“Probably Bert,” Simon replied. This conspiracy completely fit the Cobweb’s pattern of infiltrating powerful key organizations and replacing key figures like a glove. Moreover, some of the puppets had children, which suggested the replacement of existing people rather than these inventors’ identities having been created from nothing. “None of the victims are associated with his company.”

It was only a matter of time before things turned violent. Bert had been content to try to intimidate and ruin Coil Futuristics for now, but he would likely resort to murder the moment he learned their color pictobox models could expose his conspiracy. He would have to destroy the technology and eliminate all witnesses.

Simon would have to take care of Bert beforehand. Permanently. 

“We need to bring this to authorities,” Magda decided immediately. “Someone is bound to listen, even if Bert has friends on the inside.”

“Bert will send assassins after you the moment this comes out, and the replaced inventors will accuse you of calumny,” Simon countered. “Moreover, my color pictobox uses miasma. We’ll give credence to the false study.”

“We can’t do nothing and wait for them to come to us, Simon.”

“We won’t,” Simon reassured her. He fully intended to take down Bert after ensuring nothing would happen to these two. “For now, we need to move you to a safer place until we figure out a strategy.”

Coil gave his apprentice that unblinking, intense stare. “Our lives are in danger.”

“Yes, hence why—”

“Not yours,” Coil cut in. “You will have a stand at the Exposition. You are on the target list, yet you are unconcerned.”

Simon hesitated to tell the truth, before deciding the two had earned some honesty from his part. “I have a secret combat Class from my time in Magvolia,” he admitted. “I can handle myself.”

Neither of them looked surprised, which confirmed they had suspected the truth for a while. “We could go to my parents’ farm,” Magda suggested after a short moment. “My parents would be overjoyed, and we’ll be well-protected there.”

“I cannot leave my lab,” Coil insisted. “Too important.”

“Somebody already tried to break into our house, Jym!” Magda snapped at her husband. “You can continue your research at my parents’ farm!”

“I cannot afford any delay. Moving the equipment would take too much time. I must finish the project.”

“Forget the project, Jym, we’re talking about our lives!”

“I must finish the project!” The outburst took Magda aback. Her husband never raised his voice. “This is too important. I cannot be late.” 

Magda scowled in anger, only for it to fade away into doubt. Simon didn’t need to use Heart’s Desire to guess what thought had crossed her mind; a terrible possibility he had himself considered upon realizing Jym Coil’s past was shrouded in mystery. For all they knew, he might not even have one. 

“Simon…” Magda gathered her breath. “Could you… take a picture of us? With your machine?”

Coil stared at his wife without a word for a moment, with Magda avoiding his gaze. He didn’t seem hurt by the implications of her statement, nor even aghast at the possibility she raised. Instead, he looked… resigned, for lack of a better term. 

“Do it,” Coil ordered his apprentice.

“Are you sure?” Simon asked as he picked the color pictobox from his bag. “If the picture comes out wrong—”

“We must confirm all hypotheses, no matter how improbable… or difficult.” Coil looked down at the floor. “This is the price of truth.”

He was braver than most in his resolve. 

Simon gathered his breath and took the picture. 

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Bing Lun

W reign name

TDMC

Oh that sneaky little name change Edit: now that I’ve read the chapter too, glad i knew they’d need to test it on Jym. That damn cliff though, you are worse than the overlord for that

Jorge

Fifth. Dammit.

Veldaza

Holy genre shift

Mihai

TFTC

mhaj58

I’m reminded of Pokémon XD Gale of Darkness, when Cipher replaced the members of Phenac City

Robocub

Incredible twist to horror

01anon

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY must you cliff me like thissssssss *explodes*

CentaureHeart

Oh man, is his face going to melt?

Lloyd

I once read a quote by some famous writer that one can only ever write good characters that are distorted and exaggerated aspects of your own self. While I think this is generally untrue, that cliffhanger and sneaky change of genre a was indeed a move worthy of the Overlord.

Ikawaii

now that's mean

Eddie

Tomorrow can't come fast enough

blib

Shelley? Probably named for Mary Shelley. Author of Frankenstein. She was inspired by Lord Byron. Lord Byron, creator/prototype of the Byronic hero, was ALSO probably the inspiration for Jamie Lannister in many ways. Lord Byron had to flee England after it was discovered he'd been having an incestous affair with his half-sister. Despite being a player who'd go on to have countless dalliances and scandals, he admitted in private letters he'd never love another women as he did his sister. He died of illness in Greece fighting campaign against the Turks. I suspect he was poisoned, although I have no proof. Only circumstantial evidence. And whilst I must say I'm rather found of modern Turks, I view the Ottoman Empire as an absolute blight on humanity. They managed to pervert Islam to the point where boy rape was somehow not an instant death sentence, and they instituted the Devshirme system.

Hive Tyrant

It’s ok Jym! Maybe you are just a scalefolk changeling!

SirSteveX

Yep, this is why we keep coming back. Keep it up Void!

Armo

My initial thought is that these automatons were created by the crafter themselves to drive forward scientific progress, not someone trying to infiltrate the tower. Jym’s obsession with non-manalith powered inventions is just one hint towards that. But that wouldn’t fit that there are full families around them! I love the Cobweb shenanigans. We may yet get a reign where Simon wipes them out for good, with none of them escaping. Hit the pyramid, attic, and Musan operation at the same time.

alejandrox

Thanks for the chapter!!! Damn Bert. What he's done is terrible.

Kiwilord

I am ready for him to be completely human and our MC being convinced the device is broken

Andreas Finn

I wonder if Simon used a true polymorph on his overlord class suit to turn it to look like Simon himself would that mean that a future overlord would turn into Simon when using their class outfit.

Alibhai

That'd be fun. But I think it's more likely he has some other kind of disguise on.

blib

Coil isn't one of Bert's fetch-doll hybrids. It takes only 1 second of thought to reason out why he can't be. 1. You don't waste all this time, effort, and resources, trying to crush someone you've already kidnapped and turned into a fetch. It's stupid and illogical. Which only leaves 2 possibilities. 1st is a plain human, author almost certainly won't use this route because (for reasons that totally fucking elude me) the Coil couple has been popular with a segment of the readers. So he'll probably hedge by going with the 2nd option and have the photo show up smeared or slightly off, but not full-on body snatcher. The best and worst parts of this story tend to be "mystery box" narratives.

Darius Rochemore

Coil facing the ultimate test .... the damned captcha XD

Ikra

I think Overlord being his real skin implies that changing the class might be even harder than we thought.

A Reader

Darn it. Jym’s a synth isn’t he?

A Zen

Oooh, I like Jym! Quite a terrible situation to find oneself in, and yet he seems to want to know!

kay war

Plot twist: Magda is going to be the only doll in this picture

Ikra

Imaginary if Void have done that on Friday

A Zen

There might be multiple changelings. The wood-skin ones would be Bert, and the manalith core porcelain are Crafter's. Perhaps the Crafter himself is not a human but this type of automation.

Alibhai

Damn this cliff!!!! *Chucks phone* *Retrieves phone and checks for cracks* Coil is an automaton? I suppose he could be something else entirely. We already know about the changeling class, and there may well be other ways of disguising oneself. Automaton still seems more likely based on the hints we’ve gotten. First of all, Coil’s reluctance hints that he knows something. He resigned himself to having his picture taken. If the automatons replacing the scientists were indeed installed by BERT and his faction, then Coil must be a rogue automaton who somehow subverted his programming. He might even be the prototype: the first one. Second, his unblinking nature also points in that direction. Sleeping in the bathtub might be his way of acknowledging that these are human habits he doesn’t actually need to follow. Edit: *Smacks head* Unblinking eyes have been used repeatedly to describe the dragon siblings. And don’t we know of a dragon who was really good at building things? Said dragon also had a lot of children, and two of those children have classes that let them disguise themselves as human.

Tejas Khandwekar

Dammm, you are truly the overlord for that cliffhanger

Cindermoth

Okay, so what are the odds that the method Duchar and the puppets have to implant memoried are so similar? Coincidence? I think not! My theory is that Balzam gave this research, as well as the research for bypassing the timeloop memory erasure to the Crafter. Who better after all? This could also explain partially why Jym is so focused on the memory and identy being influenced by manaliths and classes!!

Alibhai

No no you're right! Except he's not just any scale folk he's a dragon! "Unblinking eyes" has been repeatedly used to describe the dragon siblings. And don't we know of a dragon that was really good at building stuff? We also know said dragon had a lot of children. And two of those children have classes that allow them to disguise themselves as human.

Logrus

Jym is a creation of the Crafter, the rest are imitations? My guess.

Black Rose

Oh wow really love your books

Szoppa

I have a feeling that Simon will initially be horrified by the idea of people being replaced by puppets. But I also have a feeling that "for the greater good" or some other need, he will at some point resort to this method himself.

Stilico

It would be a twist that she was replaced in between the kast chapter, which showed her human, and the current onr

Anonymous

The Ottoman Empire doesnt get enough credit for the atrocities they committed and the state they left the Middle East because it collapsed at the perfect time to leave all the blame to the English and the French.

kay war

That's the stuff of nightmares

Alexander

I’m confused, what name change are you talking about and what’s it’s significance?

granndfunk

Reign title went from "Workshop of Wonders" to "Workshop of Horrors"

Misatek

And if Coil considers his workshop his hoard then abandoning it could be in character

Misatek

Or Magda is the one that has been replaced

Exarion

My theory had been that Jym might have been a distillate of "Innovative spirit" from the Crafter, by the hands of Valravn. This puppet theory is strange, because shouldn't the puppet master be able to control/influence the puppets? Why would they ned to be harassed instead?

Bilbo

Funny how every single faction besides Empire seems hellbent on eradicating humanity.

Big I

All the victims are literary references. The names are portmanteaus of famous characters and their authors, e.g. Abraham Harker, mix of Bram Stoker and Mina or Jonathan Harker. I think all the works referenced are Gothic horror works as well; Dracula, Frankenstein, The Invisible Man, Jekyl and Hyde, and the Portrait of Dorian Gray.

blib

At the Siege of Famagusta the Ottoman Commander had the Governor flayed alive after surrendering. When you REALLY DIG into the history books you find the reason. A surrender was negotiated, all was well. Until the commander saw a paige boy. He ordered that the boy be given to him to rape. The Governor refused and a melee broke out.

blib

Good thought. Although the problems persist in another form. If Bert had her in his clutches Jym would still be cooked. She does EVERYTHING for him. Cooking, cleaning, ledgers, budget, etc...

Alibhai

I theorized way back that Simon is no longer the real Simon instead he got absorbed into the Overlord class and is now just a facet of it. The theory seems to be at least partially true.

blib

Thank God someone else clocked it. Whilst knowing the English literary Cannon doesn't make one superior per se, it's still highly troubling when such a low % can spot references. I'd often prefer to leave other comments but am stuck as the pointing Wojak meme, because if nobody recognizes devices, they don't get used in the future.

Austin Gillespie

Just caught up after starting the series a couple weeks ago. Wow, what a story so far. I have been loving watching Simon’s character and personality shift over time, and I love how often it feels like both he and the other side are justified in their stance. I still can’t fault the Oracle for refusing to listen to him, nor can I fault him for hating her for not even trying. Such a deep world too. Very much looking forward to the next 70 or so reigns, thank you

JJ

Still reading, but is Simon really going to be ousted by a pictobox?

Mirror Drop

*also explodes* (This must be Belzemine's Contagious Detonation spell)

Mirror Drop

Or it could be that Jym was a puppet that broke free of Bert's control.

Bilbo

CHADracle did absolutely nothing wrong, fuck hummie scum

lowky

Evil cliffhanger so so evil you absolute monster I love you

DeadSlime

Yeah I saw that as well but just thought I was misremembering…..

Hubris

There is also a possibility of this not being Bert's plot. He is most likely culprit, but its possible its a Crafter experiment or some other party still.

David Giles

Oh that name change is sneaky.

JJ

Joke is on us. Magda is the automaton… and The Crafter is the culprit; not Bert. Dun dun dun!!!!

Bryn

Thanks for the chapter!

Doofenshmirtz

Could even be both. Bert plans to infiltrate with his own puppets, but Coil or Magda ends up looking like a far more complex puppet only the crafter could create. Maybe the parents are just false memories or would recognise something wrong and thats why Coil wants them to stay. Maybe Coil, with his assumed connections to the Crafter, was the one who made Magda, and thats why shes so loyal and willing to do everything. Lots of weird directions to go.

blabidy blab

My best guess is that he's one half of the crafter, split by the twins, given cobweb's influence here. Though I still don't think that's too likely either. Verney honestly doesn't seem like he's particularly involved in this whole thing, and i'd imagine he would be if controlling the crafter was his own work. Still though, out of any one solutions I can think of that makes the most sense.

Colton

If the results are positive for being automotons I wonder if they can get away with.... "Just so you know, if you're a fake person and find out, you blow up" "You'd only say that if I was fake" -Coil *Blows Up

Kris Bruns

I agree with you on the Mary Shelly and the Ottoman empire but im not sure about the other one. Jamie Lannister being inspired by Lord Byron is an interesting idea, but it seems like a leap. Do they jave anything else in common besides being in love with close relative?

Kris Bruns

I agree, though I think you mentioned to say Abrham Van Helsing instead of Bram Stoker. EDIT: Never mind. Literally right after I posted this I realized Bram was short for Abraham! I feel like an idiot🙃

blib

He's the archetype inspiration of the brooding hero, not a direct transliteration into Jamie. It's not 1:1, more like the grandfather of the trope. The notion GRR never heard of Lord Byron sits at a 0% chance. He's the darling of the literary world. Mentioning him is a way to signal you aren't an unwashed pleb so he's ubiquitous above a certain education strata. Martin was heavily borrowing off a French series based on the War of the Roses. When the author of that series died he coincidentally stopped writing altogether. Jamie was most likely inspired by the Byronic Archetype and one of the characters in the aforementioned French series fused into one. (Doubtless with bits from elsewhere thrown in.)

David Burchfield

I am really looking forward to a a high level overlord run where he just starts teleporting around and killing his most persistent foes as a prelude to the old meeting to discuss the murder of his father with the family scene (Only Louis, the cobweb, voire, that damn sniper, ect are all already dead.).

Felix H.

I gotta say, Simon's bastard father was hella sloppy. The amount of hostile influence he let fester goes beyond "only I can fix this" and deep into the lazy territory...

Oreo

You’re such a Hangerlord

Alibhai

If it is any consultation only he has the ability to make them as of right now.

Alibhai

Don't forget Louis's goal of baptising the world with violence. The head priest also has that shifter specific bioweapon........now that doesn't mean much if you don't consider shifters as people 👀

A Zen

A world guided by Overlord, it seems

A Zen

FUCKING CALLED IT