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Pacing (Patreon)

Published:
2025-06-22 17:35:17
Imported:
2026-11

Poll

Pacing

  • Yes, there needs to be more buildup. Its too fast. Have more hostility, more anger. It makes the later scene's all the more sweeter. 7
  • Kind of. There needs to be more internal conflict. More push and pull. They are too quick to forgive and let go of their trauma. 3
  • Pacing is fine. The change from fear and loathing to neutral is logical given the world build and how desperate they are for affection 7
  • 2025-06-22
  • 17 votes
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Content

With the beginning of Luna's arc, I need some feedback. How is the pacing? Am I rushing too fast into the "friendship" phase? My goal with the main girls is for them to have conflicting feelings about the MC. This is supposed to be the feeling out phase. It's meant to be the repair phase, before the girls realize the diamond in the rough they have in their hands.

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