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3 events added. There's are Non lewd story events (I don't want to get your hopes up). This update is to set up future plots. For anyone playing through, feed back on the characters dialog is appreciated. It's very tricky keeping the writing style consistent with all the different girls. I really want feedback with the scene with MC making a new friend.

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https://mega.nz/file/9M5nhKyb#cWZwZ2C5HWnkLmXb8Xyli0TbbMGwy_SZYYfxnu2hGhc

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RedBaron

I'm only seeing one new event: "Adventure" after I downloaded!

Caligula2

I also only saw "Adventure" as the only new event. I also noticed some errors in the text when I played through "Adventure." Would you like me to point out issues with grammar and spelling if I see them and offer suggestions for correction?

Broken_Tomboy_dev

That would help allot. I'm the type that can't see my own mistakes; my brain will just autocorrect it internally.

Caligula2

Okay. I'll review "Adventure" again and get you the issues and suggestions, then I'll go through the rest of the game and do the same. I've never helped with a project before. This will be fun 😊

Broken_Tomboy_dev

Sorry, I thought I replied to this. I wrote that with the perspective that this is a public release; if your a patron; you've already had access to the 2 scenes that have been written.