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CW: .... Light vore teasing??

Okay, there's not a lot of smut here, yet I somehow managed to make it long as heck anyway.

Here we are finally! Very curious what the reception to this one will be like.

Will people be satisfied with this? Has Lily been redeemed? Will my Patreon memberships take a nosedive because there's no smut in the comic?? Only time will tell.

Also, if anyone feels as if the motivations are still rushed too much, I will be going more into Lyle's motivations on all this next comic, and that one WILL have smut! see, I can manage both if I really put my mind to it...

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Spelka

The prince continues to be so likeable and handsome goddamn (not biased)

Guzzle

It's a very sweet way for their plot to progress. <3

Robin

Oh this is SOOO freaking cute. I hope this new environment gives Lyle the break he deserves. HOWEVER: With all the teasing from mouse Lily I now want to see her eat someone in mouse form, maybe a veeeeery small bug girl, can't tell me she didn't develop a taste for being a pred with all that time spend as a cat :D Now I am even more interested to see how the story develops!

Logan Teske

I continue to love every chapter you put out! Your art and the story you have built are just amazing!

Verdant1337

Im glad this is over honestly, this has been a good comic but its mostly caused far too much turmoil. I love stories with an ongoing plot and I love stories that have vore but they dont mix well, too much attachment makes things hard to look past and I still dont like that Lily would probably eat him if she had too, that the princess is probably aware where they live and has yet to be punished for her actions, and I dont like that Lily didnt actually apologize for HER actions at all, showing she feels zero remorse, but it doesnt matter, because hopefully new beginnings and im excited for your next work.

Gomfur

I just became a member, and I don't regret it even with this one having no smut. A good story needs, well, story. I like this chapter, and I am excited to see more on Lyle's motivations soon. Though, I will admit, I am hoping to see Lily find out that Rieva was hired by Lyle's family. Could make her finally show (some) guilt for her actions... oh who am I kidding, no it won't. She'll probably use it as an excuse to torment Lyle a bit as revenge.

Linkthegamer

I do think this was a good chapter. I hope people don't get upset about the fact that Rieva got got because Lyle didn't send any letters.

hero komisie

I absolutely love how this story concludes. Id love to see a bonus of Lyle hearing about the stuff lily did as a cat. Maybe a goofy panel of his reaction to the legend being eaten and digested before her and Nino talked. All in all. Amazing chapter and beautiful ending. Even if i think lily got off a little light.

Sare

In my opinion, you're letting weirdos that are getting way too attached to a fictional story determine what you should do. When your hobby starts to become a job, you'll eventually lose interest in it. If I'm wrong then I apologize, but, I really liked the cruel stuff that you did, and the stories you told, I see the things people comment, and I'm hoping you'll still stay true to what you want to do with the stories, (even if it's not necessarily what I like personally.)

TinyYummyNeko

Who would have ever imagined this comic having such a happy and cheerful ending. Thanks so much! ❤️ Almost feels like the conclusion?

HighGround

In my opinion, having a pretty wholesome way of this ending was a good idea. I do enjoy that they made up and get to have the life Lyle dreamed of. I find it kinda funny of lily’s reaction of Lyle mentioning she ate him. I thought it would be a reunion between Lyle and Lily as a cat still but this a lot better and more sweet. You did very well and I’m sure your patrons will keep watching and supporting. Even if these comics don’t have smut lol. The story is very nice smut or not.

hippiewerewolf

Honestly, it would feel good to see Nino discretely apologize to Lyle in some capacity. We can see she has a conscious about the situation. And Lyle has been a trooper so far. I'm still loving this comic and eagerly await the polished chapter 13 and a look at 14 when you make it!

Tomasz Szafraniec

What is scary that people really likes and enjoy cruel and evil things like that . I really wanna believe that this ,,thanatos'' fascination will stay at fictional side but real world is showing many stories proving otherwise. I joined after i read story on x and looked at his others in past. The nino series started progressing in cruelty compared to Muhny older works. Not only phisical harm but also trying to make mental breakdown? maybe i missed some stories .

hippiewerewolf

Also, Lyle should probably be ready to apologize for having his family send an assassin....Just in case it comes up...

Tomasz Szafraniec

But analisys and tries of put yourself in his position comes to really terifying results. It didnt go to far? When is to far? Mind breaking, psyhological bullying gives extremly sad stories.

Tomasz Szafraniec

It's okay. Redemption was inevitable. So te conclusion is she is just extremly stupid. Better than worst case scenario. But she is still dangerous. Still easy to manipulate. Nino regret? We dont see her regreting. Maybe she is already plotting something nasty. Lily as mouse is less dangerous for Lyle but she can always be turned back to cat form. Im curious about next chapter.

Cloudmatrix

Personally, ending just didn’t land for me. As a few mentioned, no responsibility was taken. I get that it’s vore and from that dynamic this works. You want a feeling of a character being subject to the whims of another without consequence. But from a story and character perspective, the resolution just doesn’t satisfy when a character subjects another to trauma, betrayal, and callousness but then expects everything to be fine because it happened to work out. If Lyle hadn’t been protected he would be dead right now. Would Lily feel bad then? I don’t know, some remorse would go a long way to making this more satisfying. But as others have said, it’s a vore comic. So I guess if you’re just in it for the domination and the mouth and stomach panels then overall this comic was really well done. I don’t mean to detract from the work as a whole. The kink and art and continuity was all top notch and I love 90% of everything. As a personal opinion I just would have liked a more sensical conclusion.

BeagleBabSkye

Hahahahaha, I love the fact that Rio STILL doesn't know that Lily was a mouse this entire time. Also, the fact that Rieva was sent by Lyle's family is a little scary which means Lyle's family probably has weight and power.

Tomasz Szafraniec

Something is really concerning me about Lily and it's still left behing. She is speaking about her past , and we see she was victim of abuse. People after that trauma are very often more suspicious less trustfull and very sensitive to others being in harm. They smell bullying really good. Its strange for me that she didnt saw Lyle being harmed. I thought she did but chosed to ignore or to help in it. Muhny you didnt knew about it ? Missed that or what was reason?

Fruitbat

I mean it's definitely wrapping up neater than I hoped, seeing things like that mouse thief melting on top of him is not something you brush off and move on from. But ultimately we got some great scenes and humour exactly as I'd expect from you so I can take it for what it is and be happy. It's definitely worth bearing in mind for the future though, this series hit different because you wrote some really compelling characters so people ended up expecting more focus on the consequences and fallout. That's a good thing though! It means you were giving people more to work with. But it's probably worth considering if you write something this big again in future.

Linkthegamer

Sorrel has done darker than this in both one offs and comic commissions.

Pocket Jabari

god these two are just too cute together <3

Quilava

Does anyone know any evil wizards capable of blowing up the world?

Selo

Really interesting and a sweet change of pace, glad to see those two catch a breather, it's super adorb! ^^

Esme

I do wonder if lily is being genuinely apologetic

Moxie Bunn

No, you see, I never cared about redemption or forgiveness because I never felt Lily was in the wrong or had any sympathy for Lyle. However, my extreme bias only extends to cats. Lily is a mouse again, so she had better behave herself henceforth! :P

LumatheFluffButt

I’m curious if this is nearing the end of the story, or if something will happen to have them return to Nino. Maybe Lily just can’t resist her temptations anymore? Or being a cat for a period has permanently changed the way her instincts work. Clearly her belly still craves mice. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Lutro

This is precious! Good chunk of story here. Believable? I buy it. In a wacky world you take what you can get. Will folks flip their lid in the vein of "got off too easy" or "he capitulated without reason"? Probably. I think it works though! People in real life have forgiven their significant others for less. (Replace "you ate me and I could've died" with "you pointed a gun at me and pulled the trigger not knowing the chamber was empty." This has occurred in real life. And real life people were able to move past it. Because context matters.) And I'll say it. Their interactions are pretty cute. It's possible he likely will get through to her somewhat, but now they can enjoy their gifts together.

Lutro

This is Sorrel's story lol. They didn't change things on the whims of people who got angsty online. And this is not some precursor to "oh they are only going to do nice stuff going forward."

Alec the Fish

Ok I'm glad its not just me. I thought I was going nuts

Asterisk

cuuute...I think this is a sweet semi ending.

Clark The 1st

Damn she really did get off easy. I figured there’d be some huge rift there after what she did to him

Vixie

awww, gosh, it is nice seein' sweet stuff from you! Lyle's right, it makes no sense... but. free house. (also I think 2 and 3 got out of order in the posting, fyi!)

hippiewerewolf

The question that I have is what conversation did Nino have with Lily while Lyle was with the prince?

Beladinon

Text heavy but cute and rounds up the story. I love the tease at the end. And i hope this wasn't his last ride inside her :D

Corvus

While I hoped for different outcome for both of them. And it is not what some people seem to have an issue with. I can't help but smile as I read this. Such a cute outcome. Love both of them. Hope the shenanigans won't stop anytime soon though.

Muhny

Well, the comic isn't exactly "over" but yeah, this story arc certainly reached its climax.

Jey

Its lovely

Mekuto

Awwwwwwwuh, this is so cute. ;w; Also, I like the little addition on Page 8 of the prince himself not even being able to keep up with Nino's shenanigans. >w>

Muhny

If you're referring to the events in this comic specifically - I have had every comic I've posted roughly planned out for over a year. No one's comments have influenced any of them.

KitTheMouse

I honestly like that Lily and Lyle got a Happy ending where they get to live together, But low key... I kinda wish Lily stayed a Cat forever. I liked Cat Lily a lot 😣

Muhny

Thanks for pointing that out, I got it fixed now :>

Muhny

Nah, Astrid is taking the first opportunity to take their mana back.

Muhny

Lily can absolutely still appear as a cat :3 I mean, it's certainly more convenient for Nino to have a cat around for if and when they work.

KitTheMouse

YaaAY! :> Thank you for Replying, Muhny! I'm so Happy Lily may be Cat again in the Future. My smile is So Wide rn :>

Mushroom

I love that although Lily put Lyle through immense PTSD he still kind of forgives her and I absolutely love that for them

Muhny

I figured some people might feel this way, however I must mention this isn't the entire conclusion! There will be more context in the comic following this one for why things played out the way that they did.

Stephen Watts

They already said they weren't changing the story because of people's comments before. I hate this "anyone with a different reaction than me to ANYTHING is a weirdo who shouldn't be allowed to have feelings, RAWR!" type of stance. If there are folks making threats or big assumptions about someone's real life then yeah, that's a problem. But why does having ANY kind of feelings or response to a work of fiction make someone a bad person?

Dying Star

Tbh, while Lily got off WAY too lightly for this (not to mention nino just throwing money at the problem to make it go away)... I'm glad Lyle is at least a little happy. But Lily's got a new challenge now: learning how to live with a PTSD addled boyfriend

Dying Star

Oh and not to mention the fact that nino and Lily probably have bounties on their heads from killing a high profile assassin who probably wasn't hired to kill nino...

Dying Star

it isnt just the "she ate him" thing. its the fact he also suffered a very VERY traumatic event in there (see the twitter post of the extension of issue 10 someone comissioned). not to mention the fact lily was also perfectly okay with the way nino was treating him, and the fact she immediately used the guards "theres a spy 'round here" as an excuse to justify nino's "miscommunicated" order, and gave zero thought to the fact she ate her own kind 3 separate times. She's very lucky if Lyle having constant nightmares and visceral responses to the sound of stomach growling is the ONLY thing she has to worry about. Not to mention what'll happen when lyle finds out about what happened to Rieva... yknow, that "famous assassin" that she just ate last issue? The one that Lyle's family hired? Assassins dont make idle threats in their last moments Its a happy ending, sure. but with all the factors involved, as Rieva put it... "This isnt over"

Dying Star

tbh, she probably is, given how much of an airhead she's been (assuming there was no malice behind everything that happened before)

Dying Star

thats assuming lyle knew about rieva

Dying Star

dude, with all due respect and I'm sorry for being rude as hell... "some" people feel this way because lyle not only got betrayed by the woman he loved and eaten by her, but he also has to live with the experience of watching that thief melting alive in acid, screaming in agony and begging for her life while he was silently begging for his own suffering to end, burned into his memory (which was not at all addressed when lyle called lily out btw), and hes now living with the woman responsible for that trauma and betrayal at the whim of the other woman responsible for prior abuse and events leading up to said trauma. That kind of stuff is not something you can just magically make go away, nor is it something that some headpats and all the money in the world can warrant such quick forgiveness. That stuff takes some time and therapy to resolve. I understand that you wanna wrap this up so you can move to other projects, and overall for the purposes it serves as a resolution to a conflict in a lewd series, i suppose it works. but for something that ended up being your most narratively involved work yet (i think?), this felt like an insanely rushed resolution... all cuz lyle did an any% speedrun of forgiving lily. what im trying to say is people who care way too much about story in a lewd comic expected a much, MUCH bigger crashout from lyle, and for lily and nino to not be let off the hook so lightly. It might actually be tempting to commission an extended version of this scenario where lyle has that proper PTSD-riddled crashout and vent session BEFORE forgiving lily, but i dont really have the money to do that...

Dying Star

you completely ignored his post saying he planned this all out from the start... also god forbid anyone has even the slightest issue with the way a story plays out or develops any attachment to a fictional character. kindly shut up

Dying Star

this... definitely this

Dying Star

he's kinda got that "handsome jack" type of charm, dont he? ... yknow, minus the "psychotic mass murder at all costs" tendencies?

Zirizo

Ah this is awesome, glad they were able to get somewhat of a wholesome ending. It would be nice to see Lily and Nino getting up to some consensual cat/mouse action if it's in the cards at some point, we barely got to see her in mouse form and she really wasn't much of a plaything as she could've been.

Weaverxy

Will we get to see what happens to the mouse after Nino's day of meetings?

Lutro

k

Sare

That's good to hear Muhny, thats all I hope for.