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Sakura (Patreon)

Published:
2021-01-28 05:46:00
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2026-06
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Model almost finished. What do you think?

I know that i need to tweak her jacket a bit and add skirt. I will make high res nsfw renders after its done. Feel free to suggest your ideas for future renders with her.

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Asani

Hmm, hmmmmm, yes, I have thoughts, so please forgive my longish and somewhat belated critique. A: Her post-slice hair was always a bit shorter and much messier / more spiky. It's hair though, which I realize can be a huge pain to tweak / get right. B: I'm not a fan of that smushed-flat breast shape in general, and here especially, because they look too much like implants. Although, maybe you're just depicting them deformed by her jacket. Still they are... quite large. Like, it's Sakura; feels weird and kinda wrong to have her so over-endowed. C: And speaking of verisimilitude, her face feels... off. For one, the chin is too pointed. There should be more volume to her lower jaw I think. And beyond that... her eyes are too big and her mouth too small? I'm not entirely sure. I'd love to see her with a more serious expression. Or a super flirty one. Or in an about-to-end-somebody fit of rage. These expressions so far are too neutral for her big personality. D: Solid rendition of her outfit thus far, though I can't tell if the liner is that light grey color. E: The cloth wraps securing her thigh pouch came out nice. Subtle textures like that make such a big difference. It's your art in the end though, and really I'm just happy to see you keep making more of it!

dewarden
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Thanks for such a detailed review! About hair: i agree that they arent very close to anime version. I will try to make them look like original. About breasts: agree that she definetly has smaller breasts in anime. But... feels like people prefer bigger ones :) Anyway i will make two versions and lets have a poll Considering her face: her proportions arent realistic: human eye is about 2.4-27.7cm and her eyes are 4.4 cm. Chin is also really thin. But i wanted to a bit stylized charecter that matches original. So i think im happy about her eyes, chin and overall face shape. Compare: https://imgur.com/a/qB6I0tq Jaw looks a bit off. Agree. Need to check anatomical references. About mouth: well her mouth in anime is usually just a straight line, so i have no idea if i get it right or wrong. Expressions are hard from both technical and artistic point of view. I learn how to make them, but im not there yet. Thanks for your support!