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The Sword of the Winter Rose - Chapter XVIII (Patreon)

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2024-08-06 18:00:09
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2026-06
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The beginning of the next arc of this little adventure...

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Patrick Perrault

Good chapter, but it needs another pass. There are a lot of grammatical errors.

BattleMaster

It's crazy that Jon is going to try and catch a white without dragons being around. I can't wait to see how the future of this novel is going to go

AlexanderR

The plan is to just capture a wight, right? Capturing a white walker is probably impossible.

Aditya Rohan Singh

"Jon and I have disgust it, and we would see your fighting men stationed at the wall" I think discussed and not disgust. Idk how else to reach out for the correction!

TheNinja

Stationing the Freefolk at the Wall is the best and smartest strategic move, they know the dead better than anyone save for Jon of course since he has fought and faced them firsthand and lived to tell the tale. Plus the common folk and most likely most of Westeros in general would not be as keen to be near them and there always need to be watchers on the wall, least with the Freefolk they would be more dependable than those criminals who man the wall now.

TheNinja

That's about how I figured it would go with Ashara and Jon with her being overly dramatic and getting all worked up and throwing something then not understanding either so that fits.

TheNinja

I'm still waiting for when Jon will reveal the whole truth to the Starks though and I feel he should at least to Lyanna since she is his mum after all and he already revealed it to Rhaegar.

TheNinja

I did wonder whether Jon would have to go beyond the Wall again to retrieve a wight or even a Whitewalker and bring them back to sow the rest of Westeros, least the one who will listen anyway. The Starks and North will for sure, the others though...different story. The other thing too is hopefully it will be more successful than when he ventured that way with his party like from the show and they got surrounded on a frozen lake.

Alex Lafrance

good chapter as always. I hope things with be good between jon and Ash, they do a good couple!

francesco

Ngl I thought he would find a dragon egg under the dragonglass

Mage

Chapter title is missing an X, fyi. Love the story