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More twists and turns on the way...

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Basso2142

Chapter 10? Shouldn't it be 11?

Jon Fiedler

That's happened twice lol

TheNinja

Already Harry has made friends or perhaps started to with Gabrielle and Sabine....both whom have reputations it seems or are kinda outsiders like Harry...an interesting situation for sure. One for being a Veela which kinda automatically makes ya an outsider and difficult to make friends outside family and all and the other in Sabine for her family's notorious reputation and name which is one of the top dog names in US. Be interesting to see how this all plays out and whether Sabine will be condemned to what sounds like unhappy future or will someone change her destiny?

TheNinja

Well to be fair in fanfiction there are always twists and turns as lot of time they wanna add their own spin on events rather than follow canon lot of time to kinda make it their own in a way suppose.

Jon Fiedler

No I meant the chapter number lol

CJ

Your chapter numbers are all over the place with this one. Please sort it!

Sunny

Why are people so fussed about the chapter numbers... Anyway, another good chapter. I enjoyed reading Sirius's POV, along with the confrontation with Sabine's Dad. Your Harry is just Harry... deffo feels familiar to Cassie's Harry. As noted previously, I do think you're doing a disservice to Lily Potter. She's more than just an over bearing mother. Like I wanna see her do her own thing... maybe join Sirius and go back to the UK, visit Snape, Slughorn and the other professors. It just seems like there's no purpose to the character besides waiting for Harry to come back from Ilvermorny. Anyway, thanks for the work!

Zai

Why is adrian still at school? Wasn't he a seventh year?