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A Promise Kept - Chapter 17 - Old Friends, New Opportunities (Patreon)

Published:
2025-08-17 13:00:10
Edited:
2025-08-17 13:35:54
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2026-06
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Another significant twist in the tale...

EDIT: Timezone issues rectified...

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Durdens Wrath

You have your time zones backwards. 7pm in the UK is at minimum 3pm in the US East Coast. If Harry left the US at 11pm, it would be at minimum 3am in the UK. And 7pm US would correctly be 11pm, but UK time. Also should this not be chapter 17?

Durdens Wrath

“I propose we meet three times weekly for two-hour sessions. I have Sunday, Wednesday, and Fridays free during the evening.” “That works,” Harry replied. “We have no classes on Sundays, and I have my first two periods free on Wednesday, so losing sleep will not be a problem, and I can go straight to breakfast on Friday before my three classes. I’ll be able to rest before Quodpot training in the evening.” This entire timeline makes no sense. Him having two periods free on Wednesday doesnt matter if he will be training that evening. Why would he need to go straight to breakfast Friday if he is training Friday evening? Did you mean to have the days as Sunday, Tuesday, and Thursday? Those dates line up correctly. Also, you have the time zone issue again. Harry wouldn't be losing as much sleep as the UK is later than the US.

Durdens Wrath

The schedule is absolutely fixed. The original meeting of 7pm and 11pm is still incorrect when Harry reads Albus's letter.

TheNinja

Not bad choice to train Harry in dueling and the like, huge difference of that and actual fighting since in real fight there are no rules whereas in dueling there are supposed to be anyway. Should be interesting that and learning about the Potters as I imagine Harry will learn or access some of their magic too.