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A Promise Kept - Chapter 19 - Mentors (Patreon)

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2025-08-24 13:00:12
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2026-06
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We are very much now getting into the meat of the story, and things will begin to pick up...

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TheNinja

Whatever fate awaits Malfoy and his bootlickers they all more than deserve it and worse. Problem is there kind should be ripped outta the ground root and stem, but then again those kind are like a hydra take out one and two more take it's place.

odzoo

Very cruel cliffy. Teasing an epic public prank on Malfoy, then ending the chapter. Just cruel.

James Shay

I solemnly swear I am up to no good

Celexs

Oh hell that is going to be amusing!

Dan Dorr

Oh I can not wait til thursday

Sunny

Enjoyed the multiple POVs, but come on.... what are we doing here man??? Hermione is not some feeble witch. She slapped Draco in Book 3 and is one of the smartest in her year, so I'm confident she knows a few tricks to make Draco wary. Also, Hermione is not exactly unlikeable, she would've easily made more friends than just Neville by her 3rd yr. It's such a dead trope. So, Voldemort is basically back to where he was at canon - with Quirrell as the Barty replacement - which just makes him just an awful antagonist. We've got savant Harry, who from simply reading his mother's books, is now ready for his Owls & Newts.... Why don't we just wrap this story up at the resurrection and have Harry win, so we can get to final stories of this arc, i.e. boy who laughed & the chosen Harry's that defeat him. Maybe then we can reset the stories, maybe do a James POV or a Next Gen story or Magic Vs Muggles (X2) story.