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A Promise Kept - Chapter 28 - The Black Lake (Patreon)

Published:
2025-09-25 13:00:15
Imported:
2026-06

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The second task of the tournament unfolds...

Comments

Alex Gonzalez

Great chapter! I just wish Harry would've confronted the judges...

TheNinja

I mean ya got no reason to throw a hissy fit and a tantrum of sorts over someone that you don't have in the first place Gabrielle and Harry does belong to you so ya have no reason to be jealous. And if it is that big of an issue then grow a pair and ask him out and be done with it simple as that. See this is why at times not always fan of Flowerpot or Littleflowerpot fics because of all the drama with them being Veela and all that it causes.

TheNinja

I have yet to see any of the girls in Harry's life truly be able to hold their own, seems most of the time so far Harry has been playing the knight in shining armor to majority of them.

Keon

Gabrielle herself mentions that she has no rational reason to be upset with him. She acknowledges that fact but the creature inside here still reacts the way it does, it is out of her control.

Sunny

So... a spectator, by all accounts, was able to involve themselves into an ancient tournament just like that.... Outside of the security, surely there's gotta be repercussions from the Goblet for that, both to Fleur's magic & Harry? I'm sure in canon that, while cheating is tradition, champions are prohibited from any blatant help. Also, logic & Gabby's confirmation helped Harry deduce the 2nd task would take place in the Black Lake, but he couldn't reason that Dumbledore would've protected the 'hostages', which they were through the enchanted sleep. Having said that, the author was correct to have Harry 'save' her, as it's in line with who he is... risking his life for those he cares about. I don't particularly care for the trope of blaming the tournament organisers for endangering the contestants. Prospective champions are literally told of the dangers of the tournament and most people are aware of its history, so it's not like you don't know what you could be signing up for??? Anyway, thank you for the chapter.

TheNinja

Should learn self control then shouldn't she?

TheNinja

I I don't blame the organizers either, if anything I blame those who foolishly and willingly entered their names...Fleur, Krum, Cedric. They all knew or should have known how dangerous this whole thing would be when they entered it. Yet they all did so willing then they are shocked when things like this happen? I mean c'mon, they are supposed to be older and smarter students and by doing this I see no wisdom in any of them....all for the sake of glory of all the foolish things. Glory means nothing if ya are dead it is a fleeting as the seasons.

shannon howerton

I would say while Amelia and Morgana both had “Harry being a knight” moments, they both were pretty badass women in their own right.

shannon howerton

That being said, in this story no none of the ladies have quite had their shining moments as of yet, but who knows what’s to come.