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This is the first real turning point of the story...

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Edward

Holy crap.

Lord Gasir

I didn’t see that one coming!

WaltD

Best chapter of the story by far albeit cruel in its ways

Edward

At least Sunday isn't as far from Thursday as Thursday is from Sunday.

Alex Gonzalez

FUCK YEAH! Great choice for the story, making it entirely different from all your previous works.

TheNinja

Makes sense why he would target the old man, especially given he was one of the very very few who could actually challenge and even perhaps defeat Tom in a fight. Then there is the Elder Wand to consider as well.

monty851

What do you mean by that? Voldemort doesn't know about the wand. He learns of its whereabouts much later from Gregorovich (at least I think it's him) and then from Grindelwald. And at the time it's owner is dead. Crouch died in the explosion. It doesn't matter if he was controlled by somebody else. The wand ownership would go to Crouch and with him being dead, it has no current owner. Thus it's for taking (maybe by Harry).

TheNinja

Evil laughing from an unknown source...brings to mind the tease ya gave us at the end of Avalon with the essentially evil Harry who from what I have gathered is basically your version of Batman Who Laughs.

Celexs

well I did not see that coming!

Preboo

I find I it weird that croaker would dismiss Harry hearing whispering from the arch. Or was it maybe cause he was stressed about the death of Albus and the orb. Would think he would be intrigued by that

Sunny

Colour me surprised. A death that should send shockwaves across the wizarding world and I agree with this being the best chapter of the story so far. I'm surprised though that Dumbledore got caught lacking. I mean a dagger giving of such malignant energy and Crouch Snr shaking beforehand would've put anybody's senses on high alert. 3 things I hope for going forward. 1, the Croaker sub-plot needs to be binned. No more power ups of Harry absorbing other magiks. 2, if Voldy does decide to remain incognito and the author continues with the duelling tournament, then Harry needs to fight in the adult category, even if he loses the final fight, which would be gd for the story. 3, just have Harry transfer to Hogwarts already. Anyway, thanks for the chapter & I'm looking forward to Sunday's now.

Leon

Defo agree with the absorbing magic part that gotta go

kevin joseph

Killing Dumbledore before he could give Harry the knowledge of the wand interesting now who is good enough to train him sheesh

mnemnoch

Wow! Here I am waiting for Croaker to betray Harry and give him to the Dark Lord. And out of nowhere you did the Hogwarts scene.

Nirmal Weerasinghe

For some one who is living in America and go to school there, y the hell is he always in Briton or in Hogwarts. Its just annoying. We started with saying there is good teachers in ivormony but 2 years in to his study nobody in that school is good enough to teach him. At this point he might have just gone to hogwarts