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Another familiar face arrives as things continue to develop...

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TheNinja

Yeah I still dont like this whole dalliance he has with Sabine. Both are basically just using each other...no real attachment, basically friends with benefits for crude way to put it. And I hate how both went into it with that mindset of it never potentially be anymore even if feelings develop which inevitably they most likely will even despite neither wanting more of it. Rarely do these kinds of things happen without there being some feelings developing. But still dont like it. Makes me think of Romeo and Juliet both giving up on their love dver being more with no fight....and what kind of shit relationship is that to have honesty? Better off just being alone then if that's the case and I think same thing for this whole deal here. And its honestly just a shit mindset. Like Sabine is just giving up and not even fighting. She clearly likes Harey enough to bloody kiss him and spend time with him...yet lacks the will or conviction to defy her oh so precious overly wealthy family for him? C'mon what kind of a person is that? Allowing herself to be sold off like cattle...

TheNinja

Making whispers of traveling six decades brings to mind TheSerpent...

Sunny

Bit of a nothing chapter for Harry tbh, but his story is of little interest to me tbh. Sirius had a good moment with Lucius, but I'm surprised the governors were so blatant with their support. Lucius is smart & could enact revenge. I actually like Sabine, not that there's anything wrong with your Gabrielle, but the former feels more fleshed out & 'real'. For someone that you've glazed previously about their Charms & Potions skills, Lily not being able to effectively use charms to defeat just 2 assailants was disappointing. Anyway, thanks for the chapter.

Jake Nelson

Love the use of the dagger, I'm assuming its the Crow's from the arc with Morganna, can't wait to see what he does with it

Jake Nelson

It feels like its gaining traction that way, but she has spent her entire life knowing who she would have to marry, its a belief ingrained in her and who she is

TheNinja

Still got a mind of her own though doesn't she? Still has a will of her even if she lacks conviction and strength to use it. She is like a willow bending with the wind...going wherever it blows rather standing firm in beliefs and morals...no better than many stuck up PureBloods especially ones from old families like the Malfoys....And having a secret lover despite being promised to another.. yeah that's a real good way to go about it as it is🙄🙄 Not!