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Muhammad Abdur Rehman

Awesome! Great writing Lee. I would have loved to read more, Black's fight with Hans. Harry's response to this attack as the Serpent. But alas wishful thinking. I just love reading your writings. Great work! Keep it up.

Celexs

Well damn, I really would have enjoyed seeing the rest of the fight between Black and Hans, and I really look forward to seeing Harry's reaction to the show of power. The ICW doesnt seem to be able to get out of its own way, while i understand giving awards can boost morale, it just seems completely useless to pull all of command away from the front. Excellent work as always.

Kyle Spence

Fantastic I'm looking forward to when he or someone announces he is the serpent

francesco

It’s the Spaniard isn’t it

Relyks

I think the spy is either Ruiz or the guy on Harry’s squad that was a criminal. (Icr his name rn)

Calagon

Gilbert?

Calagon

I think it is most likely Fox.

Francis

I don’t think it will take long for fox to confront Harry now she might be slow but she’s not thick I reckon she will be the first to corner hi about the serpent maybe even betray him to Gillert in an attempt to save her own life after a operation gone wrong. Again no Myron of this mystery egg man the suspense is killing me I half want to see Harry’s reaction and maybe even have another meeting with newt? Would love to see him rant at Harry over killing the dragon!!

Chris Goodhew

I simply cannot get over how engrossed in this story I am. Every new chapter brings joy and then sorrow once I'm finished and need to wait again. But it's so worth it to read you masterfully crafting this story and its characters.

sedition

How would fox equate Harry a school boy who has demonstrated some outstanding stunts with magical creatures with being the serpent, a parseltongue wizard who had been so good she was jealous of his very existence? It’s in her character to publicize his identity to the world forget gellert because she’s a vindictive bitch as we saw when she was independently sending hit wizards to capture him after he stopped the Paris invasion, but I think she’s genuinely too stupid and wouldn’t realistically believe a hit wizard like the serpent could be a barely out of school teenage wizard. She’s too arrogant and would assume Harry’s beneath her in my opinion but she definitely will fuck with him I think and if Harry lashes out she may figure it out then.

sedition

This would make a lot of sense especially since I think Lee has a tendency to reuse these OCs introduced vs introducing a brand new person. Ruiz or Gilbert were my assumptions with Ruiz more likely as he used the event to his advantage

Relyks

Yes! Thank you! He’s getting his supply from somewhere.

Francis

I just think for a school boy to burst in the scene the way he has will raise so eyebrows furthermore he’s able to break through the wards at the ministry and then when she or any other try to have him looked into very little is know about him I just feel that will raise certain alarm bells. I mean his secret can’t stay hidden forever and someone will have to figure it out eventually

Francis

I do agree that she will 100% try again to recruit harry as she is a self entitled cow and it will fail miserably. During this encounter is where I think she will put 2 and 2 together she just won’t be able to prove it.

RyanMK666

By the way he acts. It is quite possible she will be 2 and 2 together.

Steve Mccormick

Somebody new just got on Harry's shit list!