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And here is the next chapter for you guys...

Happy reading :)

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HDHusky

Another good chapter! There were a lot of grammar issues though which I can say is not the norm when I read your stories.

André Ferreira

Another great chapter. Cant w8 for the conversation between Charles and Aurcturus

Bob

Another great chapter but you know the magic of the black family you always portrait as the most powerful in the world and that everyone is after it maybe you are exagerating a little cause the world is very big especially in this story and that goes for the wards as well. I would like to think that the magic harry knows is better that the blacks and that gellert can penterate the wards hardly ofcourse but can still do it also i think cassie should be really stronger than Arcturus cause you have done a really good job at developing her character. And can you tell us How long this awseome story is and when will you start the Other beside if you can make it three chapters a week this will be great.

Celexs

Well, I am glad that happened. I am looking forward to the conversations between Charlus and Arcturus now. That is going to certainly be entertaining.

E. Machado

On page 5 there is a typo I think: "... We will get ONCE chance at this and there is no room for error"

Mike

Love it. Might be wrong but during the chat with Abreo HP mentions Ghost and team… Should be Fox from memory?

Sunny

Soo happy for Charlus and Dorea. Also, I enjoyed reading about the other characters and the way you fleshed them out, such as Gilbert, and the underrated bro-ship of Harry and Petr. Anyway, I hope they get Weber and the influx of more men from the other side doesn't ruin Harry's hard work. Thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

odzoo

FYI, it has been noted in the #Editorial channel on the server for the patrons.

odzoo

FYI, it has been noted in the #Editorial channel on the server for the patrons.

Lachlan McNamara

Been reading this series the past 4 days and finally caught up. Just wanted to say that it’s amazing. I’ve been reading HP fanfic for years and honestly thought that I’d read most types of stories and didn’t think I’d find anything different or new. As a history fan and a HP fan all I can say is thank you. This is an amazing story and you’ve given me something enjoyable and new to read and got me back into the HP world again. You have an amazing talent

Steve Mccormick

Ah, finally we may get to see the future Grandparents of Harry! Great Chapter!