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Only a couple of chapters of the Grindelwald conflict left before we move on to the aftermath and towards the conclusion of the story...

We are quite close to 800k words on this one.

I initially planned 500k but that didn't happen.

Don't worry, the next story will be of similar length to the other. This one was an exception.

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AIP_Alexander

Does that mean you won’t have a whole arc dealing with Tom Riddle? I was also looking forward to what I thought would be the story’s second arc. Regardless, this story has been amazing so far!

André Ferreira

Same here. I was hoping for a second arc with tom :(

TC1687

What exactly were you guys expecting out of a second arc? It would take decades for Tom to be able to threaten Harry. Tom only lives because of Harry's morals. As soon as he is old enough and tries something, Harry will either swiftly put him down or put him in prison. Not sure there is much content there while Harry is being portrayed as competent. You's think that Harry would just let Tom rally support after what happened in his future? He has a kid now, he isn't gonna risk her for the sake of letting Tom do as he pleases. While the longer this goes on, the better, It wouldn't make much sense for Tom to last much longer after Grindelwald is gone. What I want is for Harry to take Rosalina up on her offer for him to enter Professional Dueling. It would be a great place to end with a scene, set like a year in the future, of the final Duel in the International Dueling championship where he is representing England. I think that Harry needs excitement in his life too much to be a Professor so soon after the war. Professional Dueling, while exciting, is also relatively safe. Minerva would likely encourage it, knowing that the other alternatives are far more dangerous.

AlexanderR

I definitely don't mind how long this story got. Every single bit of it was fantastic. I love the way the war with Grindelwald has been covered. And considering how consistent you are with updates, it's not much of a bother is a story goes on longer than expected.

E. Machado

I always tough that your other fics were a little short so this one being long isn't a bad thing, I think that 500k-600k would be the ideal length.

Jay Emberhowl

To be honest aslong as the writing doesnt suffer i like long stories

Ambar Fleites

I always enjoy your updates, but this one was my favorite in a while. Just absolutely delightful. And I agree with other commenters, the story has felt very cohesive and without odd digressions so the length has not been a problem! As excited as I am to see Cassiopeia raise Harry, I’ll be sad to say goodbye to this story.

RyanMK666

Same actually, but let’s be real here, Harry did say he would just kill him when he graduates I’m pretty sure.

Lee McCusker (TheBlack'sResurgence)

It was not my intention to give the impression that there won't be a Tom arc, there will be but it won't be so extensive as Grindelwald's. You will still get Voldemort and at least the beginnings of an uprising in Britain

Edward

I'm just dying to see how Harry hands Tom his own @$$ quick, fast and in a hurry (very easily) with all his arrogant talk of savoring the moment with Harry at his feet begging for mercy before he kills him. It would be a shock and not a hard lesson he will ever have the chance to learn from as he will be "Ded. D-E-D, DED!" lol <---Ten points to the student who gets the reference. I also loved the interaction with Eleanor letting slip to Minerva and Dorea just how their men are big dumb idiots they have to put up with! hahahaha! I do hope Eleanor finds someone to fall in love with and settle down. Hopefully she's become a good friend enough of Harry's that she would become a fixture in their lives. Afterall, war tends to build very strong bonds between people. An Aunty Eleanor would probably be great fun. Teaching Harry's and Charlus' children how to slip out of bad situations would be useful life skill to have. I am quite amused by how almost pathetic Tom is with his delusions of grandeur. The part in the last chapter where Dippet asks Minerva if she knew what the little coward running for his life soaking wet was about left me giggling. The image of Tom running for his life was made even more hilarious when the thought occurred to me that Tom was lucky he was soaking wet so no one would know if he had pissed himself. Shame the little sh!t didn't drown in the Chamber... even more of a shame the little sh!t wasn't tied up in a pillow case and drowned as an infant. Would have saved Harry, Minnie, Dippet, Dumbledore and even Aunty Rosie some time.

cra ppy

I’m excited that this will end up with over a million words

Jaymoneyman

The end had me rolling 😂😂😂

Admiral M

During an earlier chapter Yaxley told William Potter he was betrothed to Parkinsons daughter, and he seemed pretty happy about it. Has something changed that I don't know about?

Sunny

What a brilliant chapter and it fit so nicely, despite the setting being a child's first birthday in a WW2 story, haha. Also, I love the friendship between Harry, Charlus and Arcturus, cause it brings it back to what they're all fighting for. Lastly, anyone else worried about Angelica. I mean you'd think she would've returned considering she has a potential daughter in-law and some new company to spend time with. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Bob

Great chapter, i dont think anyone cares about the length of the story as long as it is good and iam very sad about this coming to an end but eqaully excited about your next one that i hope there will be more romance and tragedy in cause i think you relay on the tragedy from canon very much which is not bad but a death of major charchter like william was very good and Others as well so i think going in this direction is great and keep up the good work and i hope to see a diffrent harry to the sefless and clueless one cause it will be a nice change as well.

Steve Mccormick

Another great chapter! Looking forward to the battle both with Grindlewald and the destruction of Tom!