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Quite the doozy for you today... Rosa returns among other things...

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Edward

GAH! Tom ran like the coward he is. Over-inflated ego will be the death of him soon enough. Glad Harry is doing what Dumbledore did not when he had the chance to. It would be poetic justice if Harry's shadowy familiar ate Tom's corpse. Hell maybe even be the thing to deal the death blow by snapping Tom's neck, then... SNACKTIME!!!

Lazy Lemon

Excellent chapter as always. You know I had a realisation today. I just wanted to compliment you on your writing skill, or more precisely the way you made Harry grow. You see I re-read the first chapters again a week ago and was stunned to find Harry as, well Harry from the books, a young adolescent. And it made me see the skill you had for making a character grow from an adolescent to a young adult out of school, to a young man having to go to war, for what is his perceived duty, to a Leader, selected due to the skill and prowess he showed for his work ethic and capabilities, to a Dad. You made the character of Harry grow in a perfectly smooth manner, as if in real life, such as we can only see the growth if we look at him through the years. Thanks again for your wonderfull work. I bow to the skilled Baron

Justin Herndon

Absolutely beautiful violence in this chapter.. the reckoning is going to be a master class in Dark Lord snuffing I'm sure.

Eleets

*sigh in contentment* As always I applaud your newest chapter. I agree completely with the above Lazy Lemon the ability you possess in character growth is fantastic. Just last night I went on a bit of a rant about Cadmean Victory and its sequel because even after 400,000 plus words none of the main characters have had any real character growth. So to continue reading this story and seeing how brilliantly you bring forth their growth... It is a pleasure to continue reading.

Celexs

I love this story, I am really looking forward to seeing who exactly fell during this attack. Every chapter now feels like a step closer to dealing with Riddle, and I still just want him gone... Excellent work as always.

Seananagan

Was pretty worried about how Rosa being mentioned was going to turn out, but glad I was mistaken. I am definitely excited for the next chapter and the fallout that should follow Voldemort. Considering he got publicly called out twice and still didn't personally confront Harry. Hopefully you starting your next next story before this one is complete won't be too much on you. I doubt I am the only one that would prefer the focus be on this story until its conclusion, especially if we could get more frequent updates on this story rather than ones from the other one mixed in. Definitely not trying to tell you what to do though. As always thanks for your writing!!

Laura Bryan

I have a strong desire to see Jack attack Julian, haha.

AlexanderR

I was panicking during the entire Quidditch section, thinking that Rosa or another Evans was going to be killed. I know that's still a possibility, but I'm hoping it's not the case because it will break my heart lol. I'm afraid for Bellatrix too. You've made me care about these characters in a way I haven't in other stories. I'm hoping for the best for everyone.

thevolunteer

I just want to see the fathers of the Death Eaters smacking their kids upside the head for fucking with Evans’ family. Someone has got to be telling those fuckers that it’s a bad idea.

rob grof

I have never commented on in of these, but that was just too good to not tell you how amazing it was. I was on the edge of my seat that whole scene at the end.

I am lord dems

So goooooooood. Can't wait to see how this happens. I really hope you plan on having Lily and Rosa meet. 💜 ❤️ 💜 😂 😂 😂

Harharryhar

This was great. To see an expert of his craft at peak of his powers Harry. Hopefully how a grown up bad ass Head Auror Harry would hopefully be in Canon.

Tyric Gaias

I’m so glad you didn’t go the Boruto route of making Harry an incompetent father.

Lazy Lemon

too true my friend, too true !

XtremeSoldier14

I had been planning on waiting a few weeks to read them in bulk but dammit I'm addicted to this story, can't wait for the next chapter!!!

DrMcTitties

I’m guilty of the same thing!!! Every time a new chapter releases I try to convince myself to wait so I can read in bulk. But I fall for the temptation every single time!

Jonathan Fish

Ooooooh I’m getting shaky, we’re getting back into it and I love it.

Bob

I knew this arrognat french sod was bad news, i cant wait to see jack or harry or even minerva putting him in his place, i liked this version of Rosa so much and when she yelled her Name like that was perfect cause just imagine if she became Rosa borg(that is disturbing) and iam glad she is home again and will get rid of this useless man, nice scene with jack copmletly unpredicatble but why harry did not tell minerva about the wand? , and this harry being a great father is really an added bonus to this story, it was really satsifying to see riddle like this, Harry will destroy him and i hope it will be in public so he can humilate him, btw what house was jasmine in?, i have never cared for characters like this ones before,you know i can imagine the evans family having dinner with all the kids grown up now and they will look like a bunch of friends with How harry and minerva look so young for their ages and i think people will ask quistions hell even their friends but will the childern be the same as well, you know i though the part when harry and Grindelwald worked together will be mentioned cause they create something great, i really dont want this story to end, great chapter lee.

Sunny

COME OUT TOM!!!!! Jack has the elder wand. Thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker.

Bob

There is so many of us here.

Lord Peverell

What an amazing read !! Seeing the return of the Serpent was totally worth it !! Loved when Serpent was creating havoc in Europe during World War 1 ! Would love to see how Harry's and also Jack's story arc evolves from this going forward !! Jack being a consummate Sluytherin would like to see if he actually listens to his Dad in fighting with Tom or gives into the temptations of using the Elder wand !!

odzoo

Julian is such a moron. He is so concerned about not measuring up to Rosa's father and godfather that he completely forgot who her mother and godmother are. He's lucky she just slapped the piss out of him. If she reacted like Minerva or (God forbid) Rosalina, he would be a permanent resident in The Janus Thickey Ward for Spell Damage. The scene in the Quidditch stadium was awesome and sets up for an amazing smack down for Tom. I can't wait.

ellen

i am SOOOOO excited for the voldemort arc i'm literally on the edge of my seat. I wonder if Harry will ever reveal to Charlus and Arcturus where he really came from and who he really is