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This is now what I consider to be the beginning of the end... Don't worry, Harry's other children will make an appearance again soon for those that are wondering, and I will ensure that I do not miss out any other main characters.

Just for my benefit, do list down the ones you wish to have a conclusion for. With how many are here, I don't want you to be left wondering about any.

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hz

Please have a pairing for all of his children. Love this story.

VishihaHitachi

Which house does Jasmine was sort into again I think I miss it ?

Tyric Gaias

Damnit, I’m in school! Why do you do this to me?! *proceeds to hungrily read chapter

thevolunteer

The Snape/Lily fracture seems like it will be occurring ahead of schedule, or will Snape will get his shit together and come up with a coherent worldview? How old is Lucius at this point? I don’t know if he’s likely to go on a raid at some point with the death eaters, but I’d love to see Jack rip him apart as Harry does the same to Abraxus. I like the peek into the Death Eaters side, showing their fear of a competent opposition. Voldemort using Guerrilla tactics against Harry is going to be interesting, because that’s how Harry got his start.

Ondrej Mišo

I'd like to hear more about Summerbee - she taught charms at some point, but we've not heard about her since. We've also not heard anything about the icw and russians for a long time, as well as the soldier guy who stayed in Bulgaria, and finally Ogden, Poppy and Longbottoms.

Ariheian

Loved the chapter! Not sure how Tom’s idea will work since Harry has a sizable force which means they may be well spread across the country. As for the kids, would love a mini epilogue for them all :p Oh! And if the other 3 kids are parselmouths!

J

Didn't he (the soldier) made an appearance in the chapter before this one?

HitByte

What about Harry's familiar the shadowy snake? I feel like it's been forgotten.

Ondrej Mišo

He probably did, but didnt really say anything relevant so we only know he's alive... but is he still with the local lady? is he working the basilisk plant?

Laura Bryan

I am so intrigued now that Albus is investigating the Horcruxes. It was a nice twist to have Harry send Albus on a mission, rather than the other way around. Full circle! I'm slightly scared for Harry to realize that he is a Horcrux. I would really like to know about each of Harry's children, Lily and James, and Minerva and Harry, of course. (Dependent on their survival, I suppose...)

Lazy Lemon

Long time we have not seen Poppy

JoshBausW

Harry isn't a horcrux anymore. The ritual he did with the flamels cleaned him sort of

JoshBausW

Really nice chapter but I hope Harry meet Tom soon. Can't wait for the new story ^^

Jackson Plate

Hoping to see Harry interact with Lily and her family more. They are his grandparents he has never met, so would be cool to see that interaction. They will be likely targets by the Death Eaters with most people assuming there is some relation between them by the looks of Rosa and Lily. Making them an easy target to hurt the Evans family.

Home of the Brave

Great chapter. I want to know what happened to Fox

Bob

No it was not mentioned i believe.

Ellen E. Paris

Maybe Harry and Minerva will start to age normally when they will catch up with Harry’s original timeline ? That way James and Lily will look like his parents (sort of…) I would love to have some news about all the characters we just heard about (like Harry’s other children) and those we didn’t see for a long time, like Poppy, Augusta and Frank (what about Frank junior?), Tiberius, Eleanor, Petr… Would love to have Minerva point of view once again too.

Bob

Thanks for the note❤️ though reminding us that it is about to end and great chapter as always, i really love Rosa and lily scene and cant wait to see How lily will interacte with harry closely and minerva too and i hope she will be part of their family like bella and james for the conclusion i feel like it is a disservice for the characters not to mention all of them in the epilogue cause ofcouse some will die, they are old after all, but you i can imagine people saying evans beard instead of merlin the future 😂😂and lookslike we will see some grandchildern soon,i kind of entertained the idea of bella and jasmine pairing but the agegap is 7 years i guess, btw harry inveting his own magic is the best he is just so brillaint here that he should leave his mark on magic,Still hoping to see harry kicking julians french arse like old times in the trenches, will be there any other time jumps?

Bob

That is very good deduction about the aging part and i agree with you about the characters and minervas pov cuase it has been a while now.

VishihaHitachi

Lucius is in his 6 year at Hogwarts , I believe

Orion Nebulous

Great chapter as always! Just a minor thing: I think you have “Peter” [Pettigrew] autocorrected as “Petr” due to earlier chapters. As for conclusion I wouldn’t mind seeing Lily be unofficially tied to the wizarding Evans family, and Harry meeting his grandparents as someone else mentioned.

Kevin

Iirc he is with the lady, has 2 girls with her, is in charge of the basilisks and was spying in knockturn for the serpent one or 2 chapters ago

AlexanderR

So early and Snape is already hearing, and accepting, propaganda from his fellow Slytherins? I was thinking that came in their later years. But this is a form of grooming, and the usually starts early.

wild_bill

I’d love to see more of Harry’s old friends. We haven’t seen Frank Longbottom yet(Neville’s dad). And has poppy started working at hogwarts yet? But I’m most interested to see how the changes effect Sirius and the black family. What does Bella eventually become? Does Sirius maintain ties to the black family with Arcturus being the great head of house he is. Also who does Jack end up with.

Celexs

Well tensions rise a bit more. I love this story, and I am happy to see things moving along at a good pace. Excellent work as usual.

Sunny

A great chapter and l like how Albus is involved now, as he looks to avenge his friend. Re who it would be great to see conclusions for: the Evans Family; the Potters & Blacks (with Harry telling the truth to Charlus & Arcturus); Ogden, Poppy and the Longbottom; Harry's international friends & Rosalina (with them have a brief still as international duelling champions, as discussed when she tutored him). Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Pbc98

I'd like to see epilogues for charlus, Arcturus, poppy, Ogden, fox, sokolov, harry and Minerva as well as their kids

odzoo

The "Petr" Pettigrew typo was caught in the Editorial channel of the Discord server for Patrons. Thank you for bringing it up. I try and look over these comments to see if I notice any that aren't mentioned on the server, so please continue to bring up anything you notice. Better yet post at #Editorial on the server. Thanks again.

mchlrx

Will you publish the complete story as an epub like you did with WOAR? I'm really looking forward to reading it again, and would love to do so on my iPad reader

Vak9

I am hitching my boat to this epilogue set. All these chars were involved in one or more of the arcs that Harry goes thru in this story. Also the reveal to charlus will hopefull include Arcturus as well with pensive memories of some of the shit he went thru like Sirius death, TriWiz and the Basilisk

Silens Maelstrom

Yes, I too was curious about fox and what ever became of her after imprisonment.