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Part one of the penultimate chapter... enjoy

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Laura Bryan

Oh, my! What a place to end it. I'm looking forward to Thursday. I was so happy to see a bit of the twins!

JoshBausW

Are you kidding us?! What a cliffhanger! Love it and hate it :D

Samuel

Can't wait

jczavala2099

Youuuuuu Rat bastard how could you finish the chapter thereee and make us wait ... excent chaptet Baron see youbon Thursday

Conor

Amazing chapter. Can you release the next one now so I don’t have to wait?

Bob

Man that is so cruel to end it like that pls release the next one sooner,i loved the twins and jasmine, i really hope we will see every one in the epilogue and maybe making a time jump to see harrys funeral though i dont know when that will be with him and minerva aging slowly and see future generations of the evans family, cant wait to see harry and minerva as grandparents and maybe having characters like daphne and fleur marry in their family and i hope minerva will be involved more in the other stories cause i really loved her very much even when she is old.

Cutesy

Omfg i wanna curse baron so badly

Pbc98

Personally i think it would be a fitting epilogue/ending to show 1991, harry teaching still and his "old" classmates enter hogwarts for the first time

Joe Schindler

Excellent almost over no time for a new future for the potters.

Lee McCusker (TheBlack'sResurgence)

Is that the ending you would have liked to see? You have to remember, Volde outside followers could see everything Harry was doing, and there's no satisfaction or justice for Harry to curse him in the back. After everything voldemort did to him, Harry wants him to suffer

Amanda Ray

What a spot to make the cut. I get it. I do. It's a brilliant cliffhanger and set up for the next chapter, the battle. Voldemort really has no chance in this one despite his magical prowess in this one for what he did and the fact that Harry got in some serious training with the war and the fight with Grindlewald. I am glad that things worked out for so many of Harry's former comrades and I hope that continues. Time travel is a fun idea to play around with but depending on your rules, you get different takes. In some, there will be no new Harry James Potter because the timeline has been changed. Even if there was he wouldn't have the same life or upbringing, even if something happened to his parents. Excellent chapter as per usual. Looking forward to more, including more on the new story.

Bertram K Reese

You...you..dirty bastard....I just that clif it's just too good damn I can't wait

Eric Crowell

You, good Sir Baron, are an evil man for leaving us with a cliffie like this! Still, great work, as always!

Shashank Shekar

Excellent setup for the end. Loved the drama less "kill them!". Shows the experience that Harry had gained. No monologue.

RyanMK666

You’re gonna leave us on that cliffy and make us wait 4 more days?! You’re an evil man!

RyanMK666

Tuesday? You mean Thursday? Either way this wait is going to kill us all 🤣

Celexs

Brutal cliffhanger, but at least we know whats coming next chapter.

Yomira Ullon

tremendous ending of the chapter I'm already dying to see what will happen, poor Tom how stupid of him to believe that taking the ministry would be so easy

wild_bill

Brutal cliffhanger. I think perhaps the worst I’ve ever experienced from your writing but of course you leave me eagerly awaiting the next installment. Perhaps as we wrap up you might let us see the next chapter sooner? I won’t hold my breath but I am very excited to see the conclusion of this story and move onto the next! As always I love your work!

Shaitan

I’m confused. Tom had seemed relatively coherent until this chapter. When did he start going crazy?

jczavala2099

When he started making horcruxes

Shaitan

But he was saner just a few chapters ago and he already had some

Sunny

So many great moments in this chapter alone. I did worry for Summerbee's life, but happy she made it. Re Eleanor, she's probably my most favourite OC of yours and l hope you bring her back in some way. It was also great to read Albus in action and coming through on the horcruxes. The kiss from Dorea was a nice touch as well, as a way to acknowledge his Black family heritage. Lastly, the ending was sick and l can't wait for the Coward Riddle to be utterly destroyed. Man actually tried to apparate as well, what a joker. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

JustAnotherFan217

That was immensely satisfying. Thanks for the update, cheers mate.

Silens Maelstrom

I agree. Summerbee was definitely awesome. Was wondering if she may have been a thing with Harry but alas, it was not meant to be.

DrMcTitties

The interaction with Petr had me smiling so much that my cheeks started to hurt. It makes me so hype that ‘the boys’ have his back without hesitation.

Shawn

I don’t know why I’m nervous for the next chapter. I don’t want anything to go wrong, but I just have this feeling that something is going to happen

RyanMK666

He’s losing, deep down I think he knows that he’s just to stubborn to accept that fact, so he keeps believing he’s on top and no one can stand against him.

Thor

This is the best fanfiction ever written, truly marvelous! Btw will Eleanor start to date Jack? Since you mentioned he wants family and she liked Harry and Jack is single...

Thor

Oh yes please... Or as he watches himself being sorted, what about that?

Bob

I would have loved to see her with harry briefly before he got with minerva,because really harry and minerva is my favourite couple so far and i hope the baron has another story for them.

J

But will there be two Harrys? Will Harry evans die at the birth of the possible birth of the child of James and Lily? Or will that baby be a miscarriage and Evans will live, but there will be siblings he never had coming after that tragedy?

Pbc98

Ehh id say timetravel gets very ...complicated to think about. But i would say that Harry's actions as Harry Evans definitely made a new timeline

Ondrej Mišo

She is also same age or older than Harry, so dating his son is a rather large stretch

Thor

Wizards live longer. Maybe he mentioned their love life by chance, but no word about Harrys youngest daughter's love life. We will see.