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Here is the next chapter for you guys...Interesting times lay ahead..

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Hades

‘Grim Horizon’ nice, loved it

JoshBausW

Very nice chapter! It is nice too see Harry like a normal Teenager. I pity Lucinda a little bit ^^ Teasing from Harry and her mum?! ^^ I look forward to Thursday!

Lazy Lemon

"Interesting times lay ahead" indeed indeed

TC1687

That caveman comment caught me off guard 😂

AlexanderR

I would think that the situation with Sirius would've changed a bit, with Cassie in the picture, but I'm sad to say I hadn't given it any thought before now. She never thought to look into the case? I'm probably forgetting something from when Lord Parkinson spoke with Cassie about taking Harry in. I feel like something tragic is going to happen with Lucinda. I'm already sad and I don't even know for sure it's happening. I just don't see how there could be a relationship there with her being a vampire. Maybe it's just a crush that she gets over. Definitely less tragic. Everyone experiences that. Great chapter!

JDZ

Honestly I am loving how you have been building Lucinda’s character and now I am truly wondering if you will play the master of death angle and get them together. I actually really hope so. Your characterizations are fantastic and this one is building to be particularly memorable.

Michał Danilczuk

I have to say you do a very good job editing out not necessary bits and leaving in vital character development. I often get severly dissapointed with pacing and editing in fanfics, but while you probably somehow could do a better job of it this is excellent. Keep it up :)

ellen

I’m torn between Eleanor and Lucinda tbh, but either way I’m really hoping for a slowburn beautiful friends to lovers ahhh and FINALLY SIRIUS IS COMING INTO PLAY

Sunny

We Stan Haleanor! So excited for Sirius coming into play and l hope he makes it out with a happy ending. One of my favourite characters, that l was truly upset over his death. I worry for Sirius, though, in this story, cause will he kill Wormtail with no Harry to stop him and if he gets away who will save him from the dementors (assuming similar occurrences fall into place)? Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

RC

So obviously there are some romantic butterflies surrounding Lucinda and Harrys teasing and generally normal treatment of her regardless of the vampire. Im curious about the life cycle/ aging of a vampire since she was turned as a child right.. ill have to go back and see if her age etc is discussed in detail.. i dont know she had my vote for the pairing in the end with harry unless theres a fleur or ana angle.. Pansy ended up beibg krums date instead of hermione if there is a yule ball would be great, i imagine she will meet harrys friends in the summer at some point .. curious to see more, i wish the chapters were longer but i just want as much content as possible since its so good.. keep up the great work!

Khamûl Easterling

Lucinda is fast becoming my favourite of your OCs. Would love to see a non-traditional pairing for Harry in this fic and I can't think of one better than a vampire who already has a soft spot for him. Either that or polyamory ftw!