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Written in the Stars - A Look Towards the Moon (Patreon)

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2022-10-13 13:00:08
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2026-06
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Now we will be getting into the real juicy parts of the story...

Comments

Bosmer1701

Despise this chapter.

JoshBausW

Oh Lucius... You will get what you deserve! Nice how Harry get his first snitch. And a great idea with the blood pops! A great chapter! Edit: If Mr. McCusker read this: I like this chapter! And I can't wait to see what else you have planned! :D

Saransh Purwar

Its getting a bit irritating. This scenario with lupin and sirius black was a bit poorly written.

Michael scott

Why is it in just about every fanfiction i read. Peter always finds a way out. It never matters how. All authors will bend credibility backwards to make peter get away.

Well_sorry

I dont know why ppl are made about Peter getting away, it seems kinda clear to me that Lucius helped him.

Zai

That ending has fucking pissed me off

Zai

Why didn't lupin tell dumbledore beforehand? Why is it randomly a full moon? How did lupin not realise a full moon was coming with his weakness before it?

Harkin

its obvious he was released intentionally.

Francis

I suppose you havent read the the third book then were the same thing happened...? The full moon really doesnt bother me the fact that you brought malfoy in for no reason at all does a little bit tho I mean why does he have to be there in the first place??? The idea of Peter getting away the way he did and the minister so easily caving to them when he doesnt cave about Voldemorts return and will doe on that hill shows he wont easily back down so it is a wee but annoying that he folds so easily over this matter. I mean you could charge him (peter) as having killed the potters but then still frame Sirius for killing 12 people like that's the easiest way out for him no brainer really.

Eichiiro

I never comment stories but really : shitty chapter

Sage Berthelsen

Wow, the critical comment. Just an outstanding way to offer criticism. Thank God you’re alive to tear down other people without offering any way for them to be better. Eichiro you’re a gift. Before I forget please go fuck yourself.

Josh Barney

I can’t believe you actually went this route man🤦🏾‍♂️ I saw this coming from the moment Peter got stunned lol. This happens in so many fan-fictions that it’s just ridiculous at this point.

Shaitan

Not a fan of that disaster at the end. Just seemed purposely stupid…

Robert

Well that ending just pissed me off. Can’t wait until Lucius realizes he is never getting his hands on the Black fortune and he gets what’s coming to him Why would you make Fudge actually look competent for once then immediately flip it to his cowardly/being Lucius’ bitch self? Ugh… Frustration

Justaguy33

I see a lot of people mad about the ending but I actually liked it. Without Harry Ron and Hermione thrown into the mix I think this is an actually realistic version of events. I have no doubt macnair and Malfoy would release Wormtail because with veritaserum he could probably rat on them.

JoshBausW

That ist absolutely correct I think. But I don't understand the complaints about Fudge. I mean the guy is a spineless shit who is more greedy than a dwarf or a goblin! It's nice to see that I wasn't the only one who liked the chapter! :D

Sunny

What a tosser Lucius Malfoy is!!! They're all pricks. Justice for Sirius!!!

Arvid

Feels like you have dismissed Pansy as the love intrest, to bad just not as intrested in a vampire OC.

JDZ

I will also echo some in that I see how this played out as being relatively understandable. I will also reiterate how much I like the effort you are putting into building up the characters.

Nathan

Oh my god! Freaking Malfoy! I almost threw my phone at the wall when I read that part! Great chapter, though, I love it when you pull such strong emotions and reactions out of me!

Celexs

Good chapter, the end was a bit of give and take, and didnt quite go how i expected it to. Excellent work.

LaNae Weaver

Peter has to get away so someone can help Voldie come back. It's just how it goes so I'm not surprised. I loved the chapter.

Robert

Robbie Coltrane died today 😥

Eren Jaeger

I really didn’t like the ending of this chapter. Felt very forced almost like you just couldn’t think of somebody other than Peter to bring back Voldemort so you just made sure he escaped. With that said, you’re an amazing author and I’m sure you’ll end up having an amazing chapter on Sunday that makes me completely fine with how this chapter ended up

Admiral M

I really like the idea of a Harry/Ana or a Harry/Lucinda pairing. I only hope that if you end up pairing Harry with Lucinda you come up with a way to either make Harry immortal or Lucinda mortal, since that would be weird to have a 90 year old Harry married to a woman who looks like she's not even 30 yet. So far you have never let me down with a pairing in any of your stories so I'm not too worried about you disappointing me with whoever Harry ends up in this one either.

Jair Marinho Cardoso da Silva Júnior

The ones defending the chapter, i have this to say. The problem is that since his second story, this author never delivered something so...poorly made. That is the best way i found to describe withouth being rude. I have no doubt whatsoever that there is plot related reasons for it to go like this, but that does not make it better for it. It still easily the worst chapter written since before his rewrite. Now, this is just my opinion. And i believe i have the right to make it. But i also have to point out. Sage Berthelsen, you where way out of line with your coment. Everyone here has a right to a opinion, and not everyone can express what they think is wrong through a comment. I miself almost left the same kind of comment. You literally left a comment not about the chapter, but atacking a fellow member. And that is childish, and low. The author does not need you to atack anyone here. If he did, he'd mobiliae the Discord, and hed only do it for a serious reason. Shame on you. Grow up, will you?

michael H

You not liking the chapter does not make it poorly written. The author made it abundantly clear that the third year was less important than others and would be brief, with the action truly picking up in fourth year. These chapters were merely meant to serve as ground work for that. Furthermore, he averages two chapters a week, which is a blistering pace for an author; it stands to reason that more nebulous chapters won't get the same detailed attention as more important ones. Finally, he has a set path in mind for the story. There doesn't need to be continuous, sweeping changes in every event for the story to unfold