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Here we see what direction the story is going in and what a difference the subtle changes are making.

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Lazy Lemon

I recognize that I'm kinda disappointed, as I hoped for more Harry time. But I can still admit that it's a great chapter

JoshBausW

I really loved this letter for Lucinda! That was great! Let's hope that Cassi will Sirius tear a new one! Great chapter and can't wait für the next!

Alan Bond

A really nice chapter not a whole lot happened but it helped flesh everything out a bit, I just hope we get a bit more harry next chapter.

AlexanderR

This was great, getting a bit of everything. Voldemort planning with his followers, learning that Harry is working on becoming an animagus, and Sirius finally being found!

Sunny

That was a great chapter in showcasing where we are with everyone. Cassie being territorial over Harry is nice to read, but Sirius is a good person, smart and would be a really great addition to the Black-Potter family. I'm very surprised Dumbledore hasn't called up Harry or engineered a moment to speak with him, but I assume he's being less hands-on. I do wonder if Voldemort ends up using a different person for his resurrection and l'm curious that when he does return surely Harry will permanently return to Britain or will Voldy get introduced after school??? Btw, does anyone else feel that Hermione would be better for Harry if they weren't best friends, i.e Harry would be more inclined to be studious on his own without having his 'sister' telling everything to do?? Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Celexs

I really enjoy your way with pacing this story, I am looking forward to seeing more Sirius and Cassie interactions, those should be entertaining. I also think the lessons on the Animagus will be fun to see some of. Excellent work as usual.

ellen

I cannot wait for a harry and mcgonagall mentor-mentee relationship, I’m sooo excited. I hope he and hermione become close friends as well, I’m still iffy about Lucinda and harry but it looks like that’s the way the story is going haha