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Written in the Stars - Into the Chamber (Patreon)

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2022-11-20 14:00:09
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2026-06
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Some things happen...

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Nick Coffey

Hmmmmmm.... interesting.... and somewhat confusing. Looking forward to more!

Kamila M

What...? I am somewhat dissapointed how Harry carried his fight with basilisk, he is more knowledgeable than cannon Harry. But... I trust you that you know what you are doing🙂

That Guy

The story is interesting but it feels like it’s jumping around a lot, almost like it’s rushed & playing in fast forward. I’m having trouble connecting with it.

John Somerville

This was a fantastic chapter! His affinity to lightning makes a lot more sense now. I quite like that while he is better than canon, he is more arrogant and prideful and not driven by desperation so of course he fails in the chamber! The one thing that's driving me crazy is the whole map thing. I thought he realized Barty Jr. was there, but now I'm wondering how he didn't notice! Overall, fantastic chapter

John Somerville

This is the same pacing as the last story, it'll really start after they finish their education

That Guy

It’s not the pacing, time-wise, it’s how it’s written. A lot of it reads like a summary instead of a novel.

RyanMK666

Honestly, not sure how to feel about that encounter. In the long run it now would mean Lucinda can no longer drink his blood, she’s going to hate that, bu the chapter also felt short for some reason, even though it’s about as long as all others, probably because I want to read more it felt short. Looking forward to Harry going back to his school now though, wonder what’s going to happen in the final chapter or two of the Hogwarts arc. Though, the one thought going through my mind now, is he immortal now I wonder?

Celexs

I was not expecting his elemental affinity to play a role in this. I am really enjoying how this is playing out, and I look forward to seeing what is going to happen next.

Shaitan

The thunderbird thing seemed kinda mguffin like. As far as I remember, there was no hint of this beforehand. Am curious to see the justification/explanation down the line.

Shaitan

also, vampiric reflexes would have been great here. Just saying lol. Lucinda x Harry ftw

Thor

Amazing work!

K

Prediction: Harry marrying Daphne, then whenever she dies, Lucin - wait for it - darry!

Robert

I think you overpowered the Basilisk or greatly underpowered Fiendfyre, this chapter was all over the place, I don’t mind the pacing but so many big things happened at once and it seemed like you decided to let Harry die temporarily out of nowhere, it’s going to lessen the effect of whatever his death let’s happen later on in the story because of how fast it happened it just felt a little rushed. Still a good chapter and looking forward to the next one!

Sunny

The death to the Basilisk and the emergence of the Thunderbird were interesting and completely unexpected points. Also, the interaction between Harry and Albus was done nicely. I'm very curious as to whether the Horcrux is gone now from Harry's body, as he actually did die and what secret plan Voldy has set Barty??? Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Ariheian

Loved the chapter! After the lesson in humility, I hope Harry compartmentalizes and ransacks the chamber. After all, he paid a very high price for it! Also, wonder if the Thunderbird will be his familiar.

RC

He has a lightning elemental affinity which was discovered at Durmstrang in his first year i believe. There is a whole discussion when he goes through each sample and how they feel towards him.

RC

First off, on the inital read through i will admit that the chamber visit seemed somewhat fast paced. But after reading again I think it was the lack of introspection from Harry once everything ended. The seemingly lack of preparation and being in over his head in the encounter certainly showed since he only had a plan A with the rooster. Also with him just immediately fleeing after the fight and resurrection, followed by the chapter ending made for an abrupt scene. Personally would have liked to see him make his way back to the ship, collapse from exhaustion and adrenaline dump then reflect more on everything that happened with the basilisk, consequences, plans for the chamber now etc etc ..this encounter just felt like it was missing resolution.. anyways, im looking forward to what comes next and how this seemingly affects his aura/ smell/ behavior when he sees cassie and his friends again.. especially lucinda obviously, who cares about those other witches at hogwarts..

Shaitan

But how does that translate to lightning bird that can restart his heart from death? Doesn’t make much sense. Assume there is more to it

AlexanderR

It seems that you flip everything on its head in regard to the normal tropes. First Harry wasn't a part of the Triwizard Tournament at all. Now instead of some amazing victory over the Basilisk, Harry gets absolutely destroyed lol. And it wasn't Fawkes that brings him back but something else. Really curious to see more about this thunderbird capable of resurrecting people.

Kyle Lang

Loved the chapter. Not sure if you've already announced the official pairing or not but I'm going to be borderline heartbroken if he doesn't end up with Lucinda. (I keep remembering a certain spell used in Honor Thy Blood that would solve the vampire problem.)

Rick Malone

I would also argue that the lightning affinity has not been discussed enough. I completely forgot about it, and it plays such a huge part in this chapter.