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Written in the Stars - The Clan (Patreon)

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2022-11-27 14:00:07
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2026-06
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This is the final chapter of summer, so we will be returning to Durmstrang for the next one where things will begin to heat up...

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Luthanor

Enjoying this story so far, having a hard time believing a 13 yr old can have long and clear rants at fully grown adults about how he will make them suffer if they don’t take him seriously though. I very much either roll my eyes or skip it as it’s just ruins my immersion into the story. Say what you will about him being raised as future house lord, which outside of money, seems to offer nothing much. Any adult that has magic would not take a child seriously, especially one that frankly carry’s on like a AU Draco malfroy- just one competent in magic and having a bit more self control - in some things anyway. Still enjoying the story, but most of the dialogue is out of place for a child whose voice would still be cracking, and even slightly cringe worthy for someone twice his age.

KristofferXxXxX

I've a feeling Harry in a way is now immortal.

Chesterton

Hey man…Harry is 14. Also, trauma matures kids in certain ways and stunts them in others. While you’re probably right in part—a kid raised by a stone cold killer in Cassie and obsessed with revenge probably would be well spoken for his age. Also, a magic bird brought him back to life…some aging dialogue doesn’t seem out of place

Isaiah Wingfield

I might get a case of serious depression if Lucinda/Harry is not the pairing for this story.

JoshBausW

Finally they meet again! I hope Harry tells Ludinda from his death so they can try to understand it together. A great chapter as always!

LockNesTom

I REALLY like the Idea of Lucinda/Harry. possibly with Daphne as well since he will need to have kids and idk if that's possible between a human and a vampire.

thevolunteer

Rarely have I been torn between two choices for a pairing like I am here. OT3 for the win.

AlexanderR

More and more I get the feeling that something tragic is going to happen to Lucinda. The moments that are from her perspective have an angsty bittersweet feeling to them. And I love it lol. I'm looking forward to this heating up where we'll see some more direct conflict between Harry and his enemies.

Celexs

This story continues to push in so many different directions. I love the way things are going, and I cant decide on who or how I want the relationships to end up in this one. Excellent work as usual.

Sunny

I'm pleased that Harry and Sirius have now had an opportunity to meet and I wonder if the task that Voldemort has set is for Barty to assume Moody's role in what will be the 5th year. The Lucinda/Harry pairing seems like the way to go, so l assume Mr McCusker will find a way to make her mortal. The greyback side story is interesting and l wonder if Harry will take him out soon, as version Harry (Dad Tom) did in his 5th year. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Admiral M

The Harry/Lucinda pairing is definitely my favorite pairing. I don't know how Mr McCusker would get around the immortality problem, whether he makes Harry immortal or Lucinda mortal, but I have yet to be disappointed by any of his explanations so far, so I am looking forward to it.

ck

I am a bit late reading this chapter but how is Yaxley suggested as a replacement for Barty? I thought it was revealed in an earlier chapter that he was one of the two Death Eaters killed by Harry at the Quidditch world cup, with a specific comment about how the political side of things would be harder for Tom when he returned...! I really hope I am not confusing this with one of the few other stories I am currently reading lol